(this is my first story and I'd like some criticism. )
It was a rainy day there were no birds chirping or bees buzzing. This could not stop our heroes the spider men who were still running around the city until a new villain appeared. Her name was yaoida and of course by her extremely clever name she loved yaoi. She was at a kfc when the messed up her order. She then decided to ask for another meal but they were being asshole and were shut down by her killing all in sight. Seeing all tge commotin the spider men Miles and Peter appeared. Seeing the 2 bulky mid 20's men she orgasmed. The pair were confused at the sight tensing their already bulging muscles. Yaoida then cast her spell on the duo causing them to love each other. Peter then looked at the younger,slimmer Miles and dashed at him ripping off his suit. Yaoida wanted this all to herself so she put a barrier around the kfc before anything got good. Miles blushed wildly as Peter spread his cheeks and out his face in between them. They were hard. Peter then moistened up miles rod wrapping it in his tongue which was then turned white by miles cum. "Put it in" said peter as miles obliged. As soon as Miles went balls deep in peter, Peter unleashed his load all over Miles chest. The cum that landed in Miles mouth was immediately devoured . they stroked each other for 2 more hours until Yaoida orgasmed for the last time. She had orgasmed so such and so hard that ahe died. The spells wore off and the cum covered partners awoke and ran away in shock.
