Hello everybody I am CrescentNinja and this is my very first Naruto fanfic, I was thinking of a different idea for a fanfic when I ended up thinking about this. What if during the second part of the chunin exams when Naruto and his team faced Orochimaru, Naruto fell to his death and met someone in his mindscape.
Note: This story is caught up with the Manga and Anime so it will contain spoilers; if you are not caught up with the series and do not like spoilers then do not read. This story is also rated M for mature so if you are under the recommended rating do not read it.
"!"-Human speaking
'!'-Human Thinking
"!"-Bijuu or Jinchuriki (using Bijuu chakra) speaking
'!'- Bijuu or jinchuriki (using Bijuu chakra) speaking
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, but I do own the OC characters and any weapons I created.
Chapter 1: The Inheritance
In The forest of death
"Gogyō Fūin!"Yelled the grass ninja, slamming her hand into Naruto's stomach where his seal lies. Gasping in pain Naruto is then tossed away by the grass ninja sending him plummeting down to the bottom of the forest.
"Naruto!" yelled Sakura as she was preparing to toss a kunai to save her teammate, but thought to herself that if she let the dobe fall to his death then she can finally have her precious "Sasuke-kun". Deciding to let him fall Sakura puts her kunai away and smiles knowing she won't be bothered by that loser anymore.
Falling down to the bottom of the forest Naruto hits stomach on a branch which causes him to flip over on his back ripping his favorite orange jacket, as he fell off the branch he landed on the ground with a loud 'THUD' feeling all his bones breaking Naruto then blacks out.
Seeing what happened through his host's eyes the Kyūbi no Yōko seethes in rage "How dare that foolish whelp do that to my container, if i ever get out of her she will be the first one that I devour!"
Feeling his host dying Kyūbi tries to send his chakra to heal his host only to find out that his chakra isn't reaching to his weak container. Figuring out that it was what that grass ninja did to his container that caused his chakra to be blocked off from his host Kyūbi growled in anger as he can feel himself getting tired, his eyes starting to shut. "Damn you Naruto" Kyūbi growled out for the last time as his eyes finally shuts.
Unbeknownst to him a teen with pale skin, vivid green eyes, long silvery-white hair tied in a loose pony tail, and two scarlet dots on his forehead, picked him up and started to walk towards the tower in the forest.
Waking up Naruto finds himself standing on water in a pure white room. He then noticed a figure right in front of him. The figure is a tall eyebrow less old man with white eyes (that reminded him of the people in Hinata's clan) and horn-like protrusions on his forehead (that also reminded Naruto of a demon that he has seen in pictures). The man has wrinkles on his face and long white-colored hair with bangs combed to the left, a single chin-length lock which hung from the right side of his face. He wore a light, full-length kimono with a pattern of six black magatama around a high collar and dark pants. He also appears to have a sword in its sheath strapped to his left hip and a shakujo strapped to his back.
Staring at the man Naruto starts to feel a little nervous remembering what happened back at the forest. "A-am I-I d-dead?" Naruto asks in fear. The old man closes his eyes and chuckles at Naruto "No you are not dead child, at least not yet" the old man stated.
Sighing in relief that he is not dead, he then notices what the man said at the end of his sentence 'at least not yet' Naruto then starts to panic thinking that he won't become Hokage if he is dead and won't have everyone acknowledge him, then his panicking increased realizing that he is going to die a virgin and won't be able to win Sakura-chan's heart! Wait 'Sakura-chan' remembering that Sakura let him fall to his death he starts to feel a whole lot of emotions 'sadness, anger, and betrayal'.
Making a coughing noise to bring Naruto out of his thoughts and grab his attention, the old man gives Naruto an amusing smile. "I see you've caught on to what I said" the old man started "You see we are in your mind, even though you're not dead, you are still slowly dying, but do not fret transmigrate of Ashura, time flows slowly here" The old man explained.
Finally starting to calm down Naruto looks at the old man questioningly "That's good to hear and all, but who are you old man and why are we in my mind?"
Raising an eyebrow at the old man comment the old man realizes that he did not introduce himself and smirks "My name is Hamura Ōtsutsuki and I am the older brother of Hagoromo Ōtsutsuki, who you people of this age refer to him as the Sage of Six paths and the creator of Ninshu, and we are in your mind because that ninja you were fighting sealed your chakra from Kurama and threw you off of him which caused you to fall hundreds of feet onto the ground and breaking all your bones in the process causing you to black out due to the great amount of pain" the old man now known as Hamura explained.
Naruto's eyes widened in shock as he heard that the man in front of him, is the older brother of the Sage of six paths, but that shock turns to confusion as he remember that everyone was told that the Sage didn't have a brother and Hamura mention someone named Kurama and called him the transmigrate of Ashura whatever that means. Naruto then decided to voice his confusion, which lead to Hamura explaining that he was the reincarnation of Hagoromo's youngest son Ashura who inherited the body of the sage and is the founder of the Senju and Uzumaki clans, which causes Naruto to be excited that he knows that he has a family and not just a family, but a whole clan that even had their own village, but that excitement was crushed when he was told that the Uzumaki clan was killed off and that any survivors were now scattered across the land. Hamura then explains everything that he knows starting from the beginning of when his mother Kaguya who ate the fruit of the Shinju, his birth, him and Hagoromo sealing their mother away, Hagoromo sealing the Shinju into himself, the creation of Ninshu, the battle between his nephews, and the births of his own children who proceeded to create the Kaguya and Hyuga clans.
"As to who Kurama is-" he didn't get to finish as he was interrupted by another voice. "Is me you idiotic boy!" A voice said as a body started to form from the water underneath them and that body was of none other than the Kyūbi no Yōko in all his glory.
"How dare you tell him my name Oji-san this fool isn't worthy enough to hear it!"(2) Kurama roared in anger.
Giving Kurama a glare Hamura snapped at him "Kurama hold your tongue, he is worthy and you know it, after all he has been through in his life, all those beatings and assassination attempts just because those foolish villagers that know nothing about sealing thought that he was you and to top it off you killed his parents, you could have accepted your fate and got sealed by him, but no you go and try to kill him which in return caused his parents to jump in front of him protecting him, sure his father wouldn't have lived through the sealing, but his mother could have, she could have been there for him, but no you killed her!"
Hearing that he could have had his mother there in his life and protected him, Naruto starts to clench his fist, his body shaking, tears falling down his face "Y-you" he began glaring at Kurama. Both Hamura and Kurama turn to face the blonde "You killed my mother!?"
Kurama looks at the blonde and scoffs "So what if I did kill her, what are you going to do about it" the fox says with a grin. Hamura about to reprimand Kurama, stops as he feels the boy forcing chakra out of his body.(in his mind body not his actual one)
Naruto seething in rage as he just reached his boiling point "I'll kill you! You Fucking piece of shit" he yelled as he forced all his chakra through his seal causing the Gogyō Fūin to disappear causing a shockwave that pushed Kurama a few feet back while Hamura stayed in the same spot, but that was not all as 10 golden chakra chains started to form out of the blonde's body which it then went soaring towards Kurama with nine of them piercing each of his nine tails and the last one piercing his jaw from the bottom and coming out of the top, Naruto then summoned more chakra chains causing them to wrap around Kurama constricting him.
"You are going to regret that kit!" Kurama growled. Deciding enough was enough Hamura got between Naruto and Kurama he broke the chakra chains and making them disappear which caused the two to look at Hamura.
"We have wasted enough time here arguing now both of you listen and listen good" he ordered. Both Naruto and Kurama reluctantly nodded their heads. "Kurama" Hamura said facing him.
"Young Naruto here is the Child of prophecy whether you believe it or not, he may be Ashura's reincarnation, but he has your father's heart and you need to be by his side and help him" sighing Kurama nodded agreeing with his Oji-san.
"Naruto" said boy turned to Hamura.
"You're the Child of prophecy destined to either bring peace to the world or destroy it and I know it is a lot of pressure, but do not worry you are not alone you have friends that won't leave your side, but you will have many enemies" nodding his head towards Hamura, he continued "I will finish my story and after I am done I will tell you of your parents agree?" hearing that he would tell him of his parents if he listens he decided to comply.
"As I was saying before I started talking about Kurama i was talking about my children I had four of them two boys and two girls (A/N All 4 children wear the same clothes as Ashura and Indra, I am only going to describe their Hair, height and facial feature), I decided to do the same thing that Hagoromo did, but the opposite my eldest son's name is Kai Ōtsutsuki". A boy around the age of 18 appeared, he was a height of about 5'11, and he had long spiky white hair with blue eyes and two red dots above his eyebrows". He inherited the 'body', but unlike Ashura he inherited the Shikotsumyaku(3) along with my eldest daughter Hitomi Ōtsutsuki". A girl around 18 appeared, she was a height of 5'6, she had long white hair that was put into a high-ponytail with bangs covering the right side of her face, she also has green eyes and she too had two red dots above her eyebrows.
"Now we have my youngest son Tai Ōtsutsuki". A boy around 16 appeared, he was a height of 5'7, with long spiky brown hair that was put into a ponytail and pale blue pupil-less eyes. "He inherited the 'eyes', but unlike Indra he didn't have the Sharingan instead he inherited the Byakugan along with my youngest daughter Suzuki Ōtsutsuki". A girl around 15 years old appeared, she was a height of 5'4, she had pupil-less pale colored eyes with long blue hair that was put into a braid. Tai believed in breeding inside the clan in order to keep the blood pure and Suzuki agreed with him, they both later married and had kids with each other passing on their ideals which in return created the Hyuga clan and their stuck up pride. Kai believed that breeding outside of the clan was perfectly fine and would make their bloodline stronger, but later on he reluctantly agreed with Tai and later on married Hitomi who always stayed by his side and they too had kids who they later decide to give them the Surname of Kaguya in memory of my mother when she was good. Now you young Naruto have lived a tough life and you remind me of not only Ashura and Hagoromo, but both of my sons while two others remind me of Suzuki and Hitomi."
Hamura finished taking a deep breath from the endless talking. Naruto was soaking everything in, but he still had problems trying to understand most of it and he didn't know why, but he was happy that he reminded Hamura of his family along with Ino and Hinata.
Noticing that Naruto was having a bit of trouble understanding Hamura beckoned Naruto to come closer as he placed a palm on Naruto's head he scanned Naruto's body with his chakra trying to find anything that was disrupting his focus, as a minute passed he found two seals one that disrupted Naruto's growth and one that disrupted his brain so he wouldn't process information closely so to save both of them some trouble he forced his chakra into the seals breaking them and filling Naruto's head with any information that was missing.
Naruto was finally able to process everything and received any information that the seals caused him to lose, but it wasn't over his body started to grow now that the seal that stunted his growth was gone. Naruto grew to a height of 5'2, his face started to lose any baby fat that he had, his hair started to grow making it reach up to his back, his voice getting deeper, and his stomach started to form a nice well-endowed six pack.
"What happened to me?" Naruto asked.
Hamura looked at Naruto in interest "It seems who ever put those seals on you stunted you growth and your ability to learn" Hamura explained.
Gritting his teeth in anger Naruto silently vowed that he is going to find out who ever did that to him. Looking at Naruto, Kurama decided that he will work with Naruto now that he knows he is not the idiot he always was.
"Naruto, your parents are Minato Namikaze the Konoha no Kiiroi Senkō and Kushina Uzumaki the Akai Chishio no Habanero, they loved you very much and they believed that you can protect the world and become a strong, powerful ninja of Konoha" Looking in Kurama's eyes gave him a soft smile and a thank you.
Grabbing Naruto's and Kurama's attention he told them that time was running out and that he needs to give Naruto one last thing and told him to step forward.
"It is good to see you both getting along, but i need to do one last thing, first I am going to give you part of my chakra, receiving it will give you the Byakugan and the Shikotsumyaku, you will be able to pass it on to your children, in due time your Byakugan might be able to morph into the Sharingan or into the Tenseigan which is what I have. If you get the Mangekyou Sharingan you will need to find a way to prevent blindness because my chakra can not fix that. I will also give you the information of the fighting styles of the Tenseigan and the Mangekyou Sharingan since time is short, but you will need a member of the Kaguya and Hyuga clan to train you into using your bloodline, now I bid both you and Kurama farewell and do my family proud Naruto" Hamura said with a soft smile.
Giving a foxy grin in return Naruto and Kurama nodded their heads and disappeared from Hamura.
The Silvery-white haired teen laid Naruto against a tree as he stared at the blonde haired boy with interest as said boy started to grow as his body got taller, his hair grew longer, all baby fat disappeared from his body and his muscles became more defined. After 30 minutes of waiting to see anything else happen the boy's body started to heal on its own and his eyes opened
"Ugh, what happened to me" the boy said as he put a hand to his head. The boy looked at the silvery- white haired teen and asked "Did you save me?" The teen slowly nodded his head "Hai, my name is Kaguya Kimimaro of the Kaguya clan and who might you be?" He asked
the boy widened his eyes as he heard the name Kaguya, hoping he could get the teen known as Kimimaro to train him.
Giving Kimimaro a grin he decided he should give him the Intro he gives everyone "My Name is Uzumaki Naruto and I am going to become Hokage Dattebayo!" He said enthusiastically.
Looking at the energetic blond Kimimaro smiled at him "Naruto-san would you mind telling me what were you doing in the middle of the forest out cold and without anyone else in sight, also where is your team" he asked.
Hearing the word team Naruto looked down recalling what happened before he met Hamura, he decided to tell Kimimaro everything starting from the beginning of the second exams up until now leaving out the part of meeting Hamura.
Kimimaro's eyes widened at what he was hearing not because of Orochimaru, but of his team mate that let him fall to his death. Just hearing about that made Kimimaro angry, so angry that he was thinking of finding that girl and kill her.
Noticing Kimimaro's anger Naruto decided to bring him out of his thoughts, "Ne Kimimaro-san can you train me in your Shikotsumyaku!" the blonde asked in excitement.
Getting caught off guard by the sudden request Kimimaro had to bring his hopes down "Gomenasai Naruto-san, but the Shikotsumyaku is a bloodline belonging to the Kaguya clan and only members of the Kaguya can use it, no one else and sadly i am the last of my clan" Kimimaro explained with his voice sounding full of sadness.
Sensing Kimimaro sadness he decided to bring his hopes up "But Kimimaro-nii-san i can use the Shikotsumyaku" the blonde said hoping to get his newly found kin happy.
Raising an eyebrow at the nii-san comment Kimimaro's eyes started to narrow as he summoned a bone sword and placed it at Naruto's throat thinking he is joking with him. "Do not make a joke like that Uzumaki-san it is not funny, but offensive" the Shikotsumyaku user stated.
Waving his hand frantically Naruto started to tell him the parts that he left out that involving him meeting Hamura and receiving the two bloodlines which luckily Kimimaro accepted and agreed to train Naruto in his bloodline. He also decided to tell Naruto about his past and his involvement with Orochimaru since Naruto told him about Kurama.
Two days has passed out of the five days he had to finish the exam leaving him with one day left since the first day he spent knocked out and waking up to meet Kimimaro and the fourth day being spent now.
Within the two days that Kimimaro trained Naruto, they both grew closer with each other to the point that Naruto views him as an older brother and Kimimaro views him as a younger brother, as they got closer Kimimaro told Naruto that he has an illness and he promised to serve under Orochimaru and be his new body. Hearing that Naruto begged Kimimaro not to do it, but Kimimaro told him it was alright and to carry the Kaguya name because he earned it. He also decided to give Naruto a Heaven scroll for the exam, a new set of clothes identical to Kimimaro with the long sleeve zipped up shirt being a light blue an orange belt and red pants, and the scroll of the Kaguya clan. When Naruto got to an apprentice level in the Kaguya bloodlines his hair turned white (A/N Like Obito's when he became the Jubi Jinchuriki).
Naruto and Kimimaro are now going separate ways, Kimimaro to rendezvous with Orochimaru and Naruto to rendezvous at the tower to meet his teammates.
As Naruto was walking through the forest he came across the site of his class mate Hinata Hyuga surrounded by a team of three from Iwagakure all male with lecherous looks on their face as her clothes are ripped showing her breasts that are luckily still covered by her in anger Naruto summoned a bone sword in each hand and jumps between them and Hinata.
Everything was going from great to worst, first her team got an earth scroll from beating a team from Kusa meaning they got to advance to the next exam, then her team witness Suna's Sabaku no Gaara brutally kill a team from Ame and finally her team got attacked by 3 teams from Iwa separating all three of them from each other leaving each of them to fend for themselves and now she was cornered like a wild animal, too weak to do anything as these monsters wanted to have their way with her. Tears forming from her eyes she then shut them and was ready to accept her fate as she thought of the only person she could think of in a time like this 'I'm sorry Naruto-kun'.
"Who the hell are you?!" Iwa shinobi#1 yelled. Opening her eyes she saw a boy with long spiky blonde hair who appears to be seven inches taller than her and is currently wielding two swords that appear to be made of bone.
"Hinata-chan are you okay? They didn't do anything bad to you did they?" The blonde haired boy question without even looking at her as he was busy keeping an eye on the three Iwa ninjas. Before Hinata could answer the Iwa team interrupted her.
"Hey don't ignore us teme!" Iwa shinobi#2 two said as he rushed the blonde haired shinobi with his teammates following from behind.
Seeing the three shinobi rush him, Naruto settled into an offensive stance with one the bone blades in front of him with the other at his side. "Hinata-chan stay there and watch me as! I defeat them with the Tsubaki no Mai! (Dance of the Camellia)" Naruto yelled as he rushed the team from Iwa.
Iwa Ninja#2 took out two kunai and threw them towards Naruto as his teammates started flipping through hand signs. Seeing the kunais coming at him Naruto raises his bone sword from his left hand and knocks the two kunai away, going straight for the kill, thrusting his bone sword towards Iwa shinobi #2 stabbing him multiple times chaotically and continually with precision pressing the assault leaving his enemy no time to counter, finishing him off with a stab through his jugular. Witnessing their teammate killed off quickly like it was nothing Iwa shinobi #1 and #3 release their jutsus sending giant fist shape boulders at him from both sides attempting to sandwich him. Naruto then jumped high in the air dodging the boulders as they collide to each other. Thinking that he can't attack from midair due to him using kenjutsu the two Iwa shinobi start flipping into a long series of hand signs.
Seeing that both of his opponents are under estimating him he then looks at one of the Iwa shinobi and with great speed and precision he throws his last bone sword hitting the Iwa shinobi through the frontal bone and out through the Occipital bone, his body falling lifelessly. Seeing his last team mate fall, Iwa shinobi#3 then releases his jutsu with great fury; summoning a giant boulder into the air. Thinking fast Naruto then substitutes himself with the Iwa shinobi he just killed, sending chakra through his fingers he released his second jutsu with a shout of "Teshi Sendan (Ten-Finger Drilling Bullets)" multiple fingertip shaped bone bullets soar through the air with a spinning motion hitting their intended target, piercing his whole torso nonstop.
After a minute of shooting his enemy Naruto summons three shadow clones to scavenge and seal the fallen Iwa nins bodies. The original Naruto then turns around and slowly walks to Hinata. "Are you okay Hinata-chan" Naruto questions her.
"H-Hai N-ninja-san A-arigatou" she managed to stutter out.
Raising an eyebrow at the Ninja-san comment Naruto then realizes that no one can recognize him since his body grew. "Hinata-chan it's me Naruto, see" Naruto says as he moves his hair away from his cheeks revealing his whisker marks.
Finally figuring out it was her "Naruto-kun" who saved her she then starts to check him out finding every little detail until she got to his six pack and realizing he is practically shirtless she then blushes red and faints with blood trickling down her nose. Chuckling to himself Naruto picked up Hinata bridal style while his clones finished sealing everything they can scavenge along with the bodies and poofed out of existence when they finished. Seeing his clones disappear Naruto takes off into the trees intending on reaching to the tower to finish the exams.
And that's it for now! Well tell me what you guys think and this will be a Naruto Harem! Alright, after so long I've decided to go back and edit the first chapter a bit, the same will be with the second chapter. I noticed i made Naruto a bit too op, but that's going to change and I am not going to make any female basically bend over for Naruto. The reason I took long with the story was cause of school, work and I wanted to watch The Last" Naruto the Movie because i felt there was going to be another Dojutsu which I was right and it was the Tenseigan. Well let me know whatcha think.
