Sodalover123: Hi. First fanfiction. EVER. So, please be nice in reviews. I am very new.
Disclaimer: I don't own any thing related to the outsiders! I don't own anything at all!
Pony's Pov.
I had just walked out of the movie house and was walking down the street. I was off day dreaming again and didn't see the red mustang coming slowly up behind me. Then I heard the voices. The voices that made me shiver in spite of myself. I looked around to see if I could escape from the Socs that were following me. I looked around and noticed that I was really close to the park on the Greasers' side of town. So when the Socs got out of their car I took off running towards the park.
Soda's Pov.
I was standing at the counter of the DX station. I had just about closed up for the day and was on my way home when I saw a red mustang following someone. As I got closer to the mustang I heard the Socs say,
"Hey Greaser, need a hair cut?"
Then I saw someone who I thought was at home doing his homework and then I saw him run towards the park. I wanted to go after him but I had to get help. So I started to run home. When I got home I noticed that the whole gang was there and they were talking and laughing about what I have no clue but I had to get them to listen to me. They didn't even know I had come home yet. So I did the only thing I could think of doing. I broke down crying. I had a good reason to be crying. When Darry heard me crying he ran up to me and asked me whats wrong. I told him pony was in trouble at the park. Everything stopped dead still and then I took off towards the park.
Socs Pov
We were following a Greaser up the street. I don't think he has seen us yet. We pull up infront of him and Bob says,
"Hey Greaser, need a hair cut?"
The Greaser looked up and around and then takes off twords the park. We follow him in our car. When we got to the park he was stitting on the playground. We walk up and say,
"You know what a Greaser is? White trash with long greasy hair," Bob through the rest of his beer at the greaser kid. Then the kid said,
"You know what a Socs is? White trash with mustangs and madras." Then the kid spit in bobs face. Bob was mad, we chased the kid. Caught him and through him in the fountain. I tried to get Bob off of the kid. Bob had been holding the kid under the water. I tried to stop him but he wouldn't listen to me.
Stopping there. First fanfiction. EVER. I think it is pretty good. Still, PLEASE be nice in reviews. It is one thing to flame, and another to help someone out. "ZOMG! Tiz iz zo kewl. UPDATE!!!11!one!" doesn't help at all.
My friend, Pupnutie, is helping me out. She is correcting dialogue, capitalization, and a bit with layout. She doesn't like my, And I quote, "Suck-ey Dialogue Skillz." She wants me to get better on my own, but is still helping me out a bit.
Thanks Pupnutie!
