i'm really happy, that someone give me advice on my fairy tail fanfic (Natsu in love)
thankyou Sestivas 3 i'm really sorry for the bad grammar i'm not good at grammar
yeah, i really think it is short too, because my fullmetal alchemist fanfic have 1660 words XD XD
okay.. now for the new fanfiction ~ this is Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicles fanfic, hope you like it~
Kurogane : Miiru doesn't own Tsubasa Chronicle, and she woul neveeeer own it
Fai : enjoy the story ~!
Kurgane: btw, spoiler alert!
warning, there may be some BL (yaoi or boys love) scene
this story is after the manga ends, when fai, kurogane, syaoran, and mokona go to others world again
"so... where are we?" syaoran look around and then he realized
"huh! where are fai and kurogane?"
"we are here syaoran ~" fai said
"ooh, i think we got separated again"
"btw, where is Kurogane?"
"he go to the mall, searching for clother, food, ang others"
"so.. where are we?"
"welcome to the Azel Country"
"this country looks like hanshin republic"
"mokona feel something awkward going on in this country, like a weird energy flow"
"hmm.. yeah i feel some energy flow on the ground, ah btw, look that's kurogane"
"kurogane!" fai run to kurogane, at first he want to help kurogane, he try to get the groceries but
he tripped and falls on top of kurogane mokona and syaoran suddenly run to them and help them
"i'm sorry"
"ugh.. no problem" because kurogane don't want to hurt that fai, he sit first
*while sitting fai hug kurogane* "thankyou kuro-pii" fai said
"just don't hug me!" said kurogane with angry face
after a while
"so, do you sense it too kurogane, a weird energy flow on the ground"
"yes, a weird, super weird make me more cautious"
"let's search for it in the library, i will guide us"
in the library
"they say this country revealed 400 years ago, there are no people, or tribes in this country, and, huh?"
"whats wrong?"
"look, it seems there are some pages that had been removed, this is and- but in this page, is a land full of rich.. it's not connected.."
"yeah, let's search about it, i'm curious"
Miiru: so.. what's going on next? sorry for short chapter and bad grammar
Miiru : please wait for the next chapter, sorry about the BL scene too
Miiru: Review please! i need some advice :3
