HINATA NO HIBI (HINATA DAYS)
AUTHOR'S NOTE:
Okay. This is my first fanfic and I hope that many will read and like it. As you can see guys, I'm a newbie when it comes to writing. So I need comments about my writing style and story outline. Constructive criticisms are welcomed and flamers, ugh, it's okay but don't overdo it please.
The plot is inspired by another manga/anime Midori No Hibi or Midori Days. By the way, the setting of the story is set years after Pain's Invasion, though in my story, it didn't happen. Let's just say that my story plot is a fusion of Midori Days' story using Naruto's characters and somewhat universe. Whatever. Haha. They are already 18 years old and above. Don't complain, I just want it that way. Characters are a bit ooc. Sorry.
Please Read and Review…
Me: Hinata-neechan, please say the disclaimer. I have a sore throat because of eating too much ice cream last night. :D
Hinata: Okay, just don't eat too much ice cream next time. Tsutsumi-chan does not own Naruto and Midori Days. She just owns a Naruto plushie.
Me: Yeah right Hina-nee… You own the real Naruto. ^-^
*Hinata-nee blushes.*
Me: On with the story… *gets one more pint of cookies and cream ice cream from the fridge* XD
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"Naruto-kun…"
Hinata sighed as she watched Naruto train. As usual, she is on her way home when he saw him from his favorite ramen stand: Ichiraku's Ramen, and decided to follow him after eating, where he headed to Team Kakashi's training grounds. After all these years, she still haven't confessed her feelings to the young man and even though every day she tells herself that she will confess to him, she can't help but only look at him and runaway before he gets near to her.
Being the heir to the Hyuuga Clan is one of the reasons why Hinata is one of the most sought after young ladies in Konoha. Many men around the Fire Country have been trying to court her and even ask her father for her hand in marriage. Not only being a heiress to her clan that makes Hinata having many suitors because after the Naruto left to train with the Toad Sage, Jiraiya, she had grown into a beautiful young woman and considered as an elite tracker, being in the Team Kurenai, the most trusted and honored tracking and stealth team in Konoha because of their great abilities when it comes to their field.
"I wish Naruto-kun will notice my feelings one day."
She looked at Naruto for the last time for that day before she left the training grounds to come home and train with her cousin, Neji and her sister, Hanabi at the Hyuuga Compound.
Jumping from tree to tree until she gets to the compound's gates, she smiled on how her simple day was completed again by watching Naruto from the shadows. She smiled at how she remembered how he inspired her through the years to get stronger and believe at herself. She is enjoying her daydreaming until she realized that she is already at the Hyuuga Compound's training field and found Neji and Hanabi talking about Hanabi's upcoming take on Chuunin Exams. Neji has been supportive for them since Hinata faced him in the Chuunin Exams when they were 13, and ever since then, they got unexpectedly close to each other like siblings, including in the circle is Hanabi of course. The three of them were very supportive to each other whatever the problem or situation is, and since Neji is the oldest, he is considered as their older brother and he is also considered by his Uncle Hiashi as his oldest son.
"Neji-niisan! Hanabi-chan!" she called them and waved at them, smiling.
"Hinata-chan… How's your day?" Neji asked.
"It's been fine. By the way, Tenten-chan asked if you can come to their house at 7pm to help her find a kunai hat was special to her." She said as she sat beside Hanabi's left to the bench under a big shady oak tree where she spotted them sitting.
"Okay, I'll come." Neji can't help but blush a bit. He faced Hanabi then back to Hinata. "Hanabi is going to take her final step in the Chuunin Exams with her classmates. But she has one problem; she is going to face Konohamaru in a fight."
"What? Then Hanabi, tell me, what do you feel about the situation?" she asked.
Knowing her younger sister's crush on the boy, it would be tough for her to hurt him. But also knowing Hanabi's desire to become a Chuunin makes it hard for her to choose.
"I don't know Hinata-neechan… I don't know…" Hanabi frowned.
"Did you already talk to him about this?" Hinata brushed Hanabi's hair with her right hand as she asked her sister.
"Yes, he actually said that it would be hard for him to hurt me because I'm his friend but he can't do anything about it. I also said the same thing and he said that we should try our best in our battle and become a Chuunin to protect our village. He also said good luck for both of us and no hard feelings after we injure each other." Hanabi frowned more in her statement. "It's easy for us to say it but actually, it's hard for me to hurt him."
Neji patted Hanabi's head that was in their middle. "Don't worry. Everything will be alright. Both of you are ninjas and Hinata-chan and I know that after it, both of you will be okay."
Hanabi smiled on this. "I hope we will be."
"Come on, Hinata-chan, let's train. After all I'm finished training Hanabi-chan for this day. Would you mind to be the next trainee?"
"Sure thing Neji-niisan. Let's go!" Hinata got up from the bench and went to the wide grassy field along with Neji and the two take distance with each other and started to get on with their battle stances.
"Okay…Here I go!" Hinata ran towards her cousin and they started to exchange jabs and heavy blows. She started delivering chakra-filled blows and punches to her cousin and Neji is doing the same. The Juuken style that they were training since they were kids is the Hyuuga Clan's most deadly and most renowned fighting style, and being the main family's members, the three of them are expected to master and make new techniques out of their clan's style in fighting.
Neji attacked her torso area which seemed to be open and he is ready to give Hinata the final blow as a mark to end their training for this day, for the sun is setting down already. But Hinata is also determined to counter the punches that Neji is giving her. She also punches him and is also ready to make the final blow but Neji made the final blow first. With the heavy blow that was delivered in her stomach, she feels like she is falling but also at the same time, she lost her consciousness.
Hinata fell into the ground and Neji came to her to congratulate her for her progress as a fighter for this day but there is something wrong.
"Hinata-chan, get up." Neji shaked her shoulders, but Hinata is not responding and her eyes remained close and her form remained unconscious.
Neji started to worry and activated his Byakugan to check how her body is doing. He is surprised that Hinata's chakra channels have stopped flowing. Astonished, Neji called out to Hanabi who is already out of the training fields to call for their father.
Hiashi and Hanabi flew out of the door from the Hyuuga mansion to check out for Hinata's condition. Hiashi ordered Neji to place Hinata in her room to be checked and Neji did. They called for a medic nin from the Hyuuga branch family and found out that they cannot do anything about the situation but to wait for Hinata to get conscious because her chakra channels have been sealed with Neji's last attack with their training.
"I'm so sorry Uncle. I wish I didn't do that with our training." Neji apologized.
"It's okay Neji. Hinata is a strong woman. She can handle this and all we can do is to have faith in her." Hiashi said as he patted Neji's shoulder. "Come on, let's eat. Dinner is already served downstairs. Hanabi, fetch some servant to check out Hinata's condition and after eating, you can check her out. Is that okay?"
"Yes Father." Hanabi nodded as she, Hiashi and Neji get out from Hinata's room.
Meanwhile…
Naruto was on his apartment after eating his dinner from Ichiraku's Ramen. After his training for the whole day, he went home to check if things in his apartment were okay and looked for the fridge to see if he still has stocked goods. He sighed as he saw the fridge was empty. Then he went to his room to see if he still has money left to buy goods. Fortunately, he found his paycheck from their last mission with the Team 7. He left the house again to buy food to fill his fridge.
On his way, he met Konohamaru and together they went to the store. As they talked, Konohamaru mentioned his fight against Hanabi in the Chuunin Exams.
Konohamaru frowned while stating to Naruto how his conversation with Hanabi went.
"So… How are you going to handle this?"
"I don't know boss… I don't wanna hurt her and you know the reason why." Konohamaru blushed.
Naruto knew that Konohamaru has a crush on Hanabi. He smiled as he patted his comrade's head.
"It will be fine man… It will be fine…"
After getting the goods from the store, and walking towards his home, he and Konohamaru parted ways and he promised the younger one to train with him for the upcoming Chuunin Exams.
Naruto got home and took a bath after resting for a while. Exhausted from the day's activities, he decided to sleep early.
"Hi-Hinata-chan? What are you doing here in my house?" Naruto exclaimed as he saw Hinata in his bed beside him.
Hinata woke up from his noise and looked up to him. Hinata smiled and kissed his cheek. "How's your sleep danna-sama?" Hinata said sweetly. Then Hinata hugged him and kissed him again in his cheek.
"You should sleep more because you said you were tired from your last mission with Sakura-chan and Sasuke-san. Ah, I know a good way to get you back from sleep."
Naruto became speechless because of shock. He can't believe that Hinata is beside him and addressing him as her husband.
Hinata leaned forward his face and she seems to kiss him. He is also leaning forward and then…
BEEP! BEEP! BEEP!
Naruto woke from his dream because of the alarm clock. He is sweating a lot like he was training while he is asleep. He is rubbing his eyes with his right hand when he feels something with his hand. His eyes are still closed because he still feels drowsy but he heard a tiny squeak. When he opened his eyes, he saw an indigo thing from his hand. But the thing seems to be alive and he is surprised that the indigo thing covered his whole hand. He is trying to get the indigo thing out of his hand but when he is trying to remove it, it squeaks! He removed the sleeves that are covering his hand and discovered something that made him wanna come back to sleep.
"Hi-Hi-HINATA-CHAN!" Naruto screamed and Hinata in his hand is beginning to wake up.
"It seems that Naruto-kun is bigger than me… Wait, NARUTO-KUN IS HERE? This is a dream right?"
Hinata started rub her eyes in hopes that what she is seeing is unreal. But alas, it stayed the same.
Naruto and Hinata stared at each other then Naruto blushed. Hinata noticed that she was naked and because of shock, she screamed and became unconscious.
Naruto was dumbfounded with his current situation. After seeing Hinata in his hand, naked and small, he is staring into nothingness because of shock from the scenes. A mini Hinata replaced his right hand.
"Hinata is in my hand... WHAAAAATTT!"
To be continued.
