I've been reading some other fanfics, some of my reviews, and decided to rewrite this story. So, I hope this is better. Enjoy!
IRRESISTIBLE
Flashes. Heh. I guess when they say you see your life flash before your eyes, they weren't kidding. I see snippets of my life, from when I was born, my sister Thalia, my girlfriend Piper, Lupa, every memory I have is playing faster and faster, like an old, broken movie reel. The voices are getting softer and softer, faces blurrier, and I feel like I'm drowning in a sea of memories, my senses going on overload, faster, faster, faster. I never thought that I'd die like this. I always thought my death would be heroic, bringing glory to Camp Jupiter, death on the battlefield, like a true Roman. But never, never, in a million years, like this.
I can remember it all so clearly, the day that started the chain of events that eventually led to this.
"Jace* watched in shock as his half brother Cassander kissed his long time faithful gir-
A head of dark, choppy braids peered down at him, kaleidoscope eyes sparkling mischievously at him. "Hey! I was writing! I had my creative juices flowing and everything!" I complained.
"Oh, hush, you," Piper charm spoke, and obviously I complied immediately. "Besides, I want to go to the beach!" At my raised eyebrow, she hastily amended, "Well, not the beach, since Percy and Annabeth are always there, but," I cut off her rambling and kissed her.
"What is your story about anyways, Jase?"
"It's about this guy and how his family and entire school shun him, his girlfriend cheats on him, because of his brother, and it's going to be really complicated, and," I rambled, going off in my own fantasy world.
"Well, as great as that seems, I'm going to the lake, you in?"
"Yeah coming," Piper offered a hand, and I gladly took it, only to have her push me down, running away shrieking with laughter. I laughed too and ran after her. If only I had seen her.
