ok so this is another first fanfic so you know the drill you read review maybe follow ok oh and this before the and Al is still dead (mainly cause I hate him)ALL BETAS PLEASE READ THIS ok il make this short and sweet i need a beta thats read the books to help me with spelling if you want to beta this story pm me if not I HATE YOU ok now for the story (leaves with evil laugh)
Tris POV
Tobias wake up i i dont want to he says putting his hand on my but you have to or Zeke well murder you or something then i would kill him and shauna would kill me then chris would kill her then leyn would kill her then will would kill her then mar would kill ...i get tris says you do i i do now i thought we had to get do i say looking at me chris need to go shoping... he cuts me off with a kiss then go get ready.
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4 hours 35 minutes and 20 stores later we finally get to the last store the store that might as well be in my fear landscape the lingrie store.c'mon Tris dont be such a SISSY says not i just dont like this store it reminds me of well um uh Tris your still afraid of Sex are Chris your still not afraid of moths are THATS IT ISENT i yell then we get into a big fight about which is worse sex or mothsblah blah blah i get a black lacy bra and macthing underwear blah blah blah an argument about clothes blah blah blah im starting to think i sound like a vampire.
(20 minutes later)
When im finally done with hair and makeup Chris does her own and we get dressed me in four shrits and a bra with 3 differnt types of in practilly the same outfit we leave for Zeke and we get to there ampartment we'r greeted by the warm stinch of alcohal and yet no ones been drinking... TRISSY-POO oh scarth that Zekes been Zeke is Four here im not sure let me he begins to sing random songs like (these are my own btw SO NO COPYRIGHT IN THIS)shooting for the stars and i dont get you (like i said there mine no one elses) well kinda a mixture so it kinda sounded like this
I was told i'd never make it
I'd never do it Cause at one
minute we'r starin at each other
and the next we couldent
well im shooting for the stars
i dont care i dont get you
it was an odd mixture and it kinda sounded like chubakka so we now all know that zeke cannot sing
ALRIGHT PEOPLE IF I DONT KNOW YOU OR YOUR NOT MY FRIND GET OUT and at that people start scurying and groning
so then theres only me,tobias,uri,mar,lyen,shuna,zeke,chris,will and oddly anough peter
so how was the first chapter love it hate it review and tell me ideas BYEEEEEEEEEEEEE
