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Edward has been living in forks all his life with his friends: Alice, Jasper and Emmett
One day Edward and Alice are out shopping. Edward sees a girl across the food court his
'Brown-Eyed girl' which he soon learns is chief's daughter. She turns into his Mystery Swan he has never liked a girl before, not in the way he liked her. All Human

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It was a lazy afternoon, when Alice dragged me along with her to go shopping, we were at the fifth. I had tried all the excuses my feet hurt, my arms hurt, I'm hungry... However, nothing was working she was determined.

Alice and I had been best friends since the second grade; she was the first kid to share her lunch with me. Ever since that we have been close.

I loved Alice and all, but I could not stand her fetish for shopping, all day long these trips would go. Once the shops were open for a twenty four hourshopathon now that was hell, we stayed for the whole twenty four hours, plus sat in line and waited for the shops to re-open at midday. That was where we slept in a small tent...

I am never going to do that again!

I looked around my surroundings and found myself in another shop, where Alice was now trying on clothes. Spinning and twirling around in each skirt to make sure they had the right twirl... I don't get it either, but she seems to.

Alice and I both go to the local high school in Forks; it's a small, wet rainy town, but its home I guess. I have always lived in Forks, with my mother Elizabeth Masen and younger brother Harry. We live in a small cottage not far from town.

"Eddie?" laughed Alice, she knew I hated this

"Huh?" I said as I looked up at her

"Have you even been listening to me this whole time!" She said with a little anger in her voice.

I knew it wasn't safe to make Alice angry

"I'm sorry, what were you saying"

"Honestly, Does this make me look fat?" she asked.

See nothing made Alice look fat; she was four ft ten and skinny. She looked like a pixie with her with a graceful walk and hair that is short, spiky, and black.

"No, Alice you do not look fat" I said with a weary voice

"Good" she said as she went back into the changing rooms to get changed back into her original clothes

I waited outside; the girls in the shop were all staring at me. I was used to this, not blowing my own horn, but I was gorgeous. As Alice walked out I put my arm around her and we began to walk, I directed her to the food court. I was in need of food if she expected me to go any further I would need food and caffeine.

We sat down and began to eat. I was looking around taking in my surroundings. There three tables over, was the most beautiful girl I have ever seen, she had pale-skinned with brown hair and eyes, and a heart shaped face. A wide forehead with a widow's peak, large, wide-spaced eyes, prominent cheekbones, and then a thin nose and a narrow jaw with a pointed chin, her lips are a little out of proportion, a bit too full for her jaw line. Her eyebrows are darker than her hair and straighter than they are arched.

Yet she was the most beautiful girl I had ever seen, she drew me in.

Alice saw me staring and giggled

"Edward Masen having a crush" she giggled

"What?" I said as I looked away from the girl

"Edward, I've know you for years and I've never seen you look at any girl like that, go talk to her" she said

"But..." I began

"No, buts get your ass over there and talk to her" she giggled

I rolled my eyes and began to walk over to the girl

I arrived at the table, after going through many angry shoppers and crowds. When I arrived the table was empty. The girl was gone; I moved my head around looking in every direction she was nowhere to be seen.

I walked back to Alice.

"Oh, well better luck next time?" she said with a half-hearted smile

"Yeah" I said

"Forks is small, you bound to see her again" Alice said trying to make me feel better "How about we go into the music store"

She knew this is the place I wanted to go; I shrugged and got up from the table

We entered the music store and my eyes lit up... The new album I had requested was there, the girl at the desk was waving it at me. The people who worked in the store knew me, almost more than the people who work at the shops Alice goes to.

I moved over to the desk and bought it

My thoughts changed to the album and slowly the brown-eyed girl was pushed to the back of my brain

After awhile Alice began to complain about her feet hurting.

I drove her home. This took awhile taking all the shopping bags out the car, it was lucky Alice's family were loaded otherwise she wouldn't be able to shop every 2-3 days.

I thought it may be best to drive the long way home, so I could listen to my album in peace, without my little brother barging in. I was driving, taking even longer, turning around, missing my house and kept driving as the music washed over me.

I looked outside to see a red truck, I laughed at it. It looked like it was about the fall to pieces. I looked inside the truck to see who would be driving it...

There was the brown-eyed girl!

I couldn't help myself, I followed her. I saw her pull up the chief's drive way

She must be the daughter that he has been bragging about for the last month who is coming to live with him for a while. I didn't notice, but I had stopped the car and I had open to the door and was half way across the road.

I watched as she walked into the house, Charlie's big grin across his face.

I quickly jumped back into my car and began to drive home. When I arrived I was bombarded with questions by my little brother. Ignoring them all I went upstairs to my room, shutting the door in his face

Outside the door I could hear him yelling at me, it was all muffled. I sat there looking out my window thinking about the girl, how she affected me, why did she. I have never been affected by a girl like this before, I see girls all the time. I never find myself attracted to them, I guess some are 'cute' or 'hot' but they never interested me like this girl does.

I must find out her name. I knew her last name was Swan, because her father was chief swan however, what if she had chosen her mother's name instead.

Thoughts, questions went through my mind until I feel asleep.

When I awoke, I realised I was still dressed in the clothes I wore yesterday...and surprisingly I was wearing shoes.

I quickly stripped off and jumped into the shower. I walked out the bathroom in a towel, and into my bedroom to find my little brother rifling through my stuff

"OI!" I screamed, he jumped almost four feet. "WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU DOING IN MY ROOM" I continued

"Sorry Eddie, I was looking for something" he said awkwardly.

"GET OUT!" I yelled

"EDWARD BE NICE TO YOUR BROTHER" my mother screamed from down stairs

I rolled my eyes, why did I always have to be nice to my brother? I mean like he can come and annoy me but when I tell him to fuck off its 'Edward stop being rude' all that shit. GAHH! I hate younger siblings

I locked my room as I got changed into some clothes.

Today was another day of school.

I remembered that my mystery Swan would be there.

I quickly ran out to my car, and began to get in when I heard a familiar voice behind me

"Edward, mum says you're driving me" said Harry as he jumped in the front seat.

Great, this was going to be fun; I get to listen to his hilarious jokes, and his girl problems.

My brother is a Man-Whore

Well he likes to think he is. Really most of them just go out with him because they are despite. But never tell that to him, you'd crush him... maybe I will and evil grin crossed my face

"Edward what are you thinking about" came the annoying voice next to me

"Nothing, which worries you" I smiled

The drive to school seemed longer, maybe because I had Harry blabbing in my ear or maybe it was because I was hoping to see my mystery swan girl.

We finally arrived, which felt like hours.

Harry jumped out the car and ran over to a group of giggling girls.

I rolled my eyes and got out, locking the car.

I looked around the car park, looking for the beat up truck,

I saw it finally, in the back of the car park.

"YESSS!" I said

"Woah, what was that for?" said a familiar voice; I knew it must be Emmett

"Oh, nothing" I said awkwardly

Alice came up behind us her arms around Jaspers waist and his around her neck, and she said: "I know" and gave me a wink

The boys looked at her

"TELL TELL!" they all yelled at her.

"Well, yesterday when we went shopping together, you know because you were all sick we saw this girl in the mall, and Edward well. I think he likes her"

Emmett burst out laughing "Oh, thank god I was beginning to think you were gay"

I laughed; many people have asked me that question.

I ventured into the school, looking searching for the girl

However it was time for my lesson to begin,


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