Hi people. This is my first time writing fanfic, so it might not be very good. The story is set in Divergent after initiation, so Al is dead but everyone who dies during the simulation attack still lives. Please review because if anyone has any ideas or constructive criticism that could improve my story, I would love to hear it. Wish me luck! :D
Tris' POV
I wake up with a pounding headache. "Ow..." I say, sitting up, expecting to see the familiar heads of my fellow transfer initiates. Instead, I see that I'm lying on a bed facing a plain wall with the words "Fear God Alone" painted on them. And then everything clicks. Tobias. Oh no, I think to myself. This is bad. This is very bad. I look around for Tobias; he's certainly not in bed with me, maybe he went to get breakfast. I push aside the blankets and swing my legs off the bed.
"Shit!" I hear Tobias say as I accidentally kick his head. He's on the floor. I breathe a sigh of relief. He slept on the floor. We didn't sleep together. "Really, Tris. Next time I give up my bed for you, remind me to sleep on the opposite side of the room."
"Sorry." I moan. My head feels like every person in Dauntless is running through my skull. "Do you have any aspirin?" I ask. "My head is killing me." He laughs. "What?" I say. I don't find it funny at all.
"Well then next initiation, don't get so drunk, and you'll be perfectly fine!" Ah. That makes so much more sense.
"How drunk was I?" I ask. I hope I didn't do anything stupid.
"Well, I had to carry you back to my apartment, and you where grinning like a maniac, but other than that, you where the same as always." He smiles, sits up, and quickly reaches up to give me a quick kiss on my forehead. The room is still dark, and I wish I could see his face better. He solves that problem quickly by standing and turning the lights on. I feign being blinded, clutch my eyes and swoon until he picks me up bridal style and carries me into his bathroom, where he sets me carefully down on the toilet.
He then takes down a bottle of aspirin from a medicine cabinet an goes into the kitchen to get me a glass of water. I suddenly feel sick. I get up quickly and walk to the sink. I make it just on time, and then the contents of my stomach are emptied out before me. Tobias comes rushing back with the water. He has me drink some, and then rubs my back and talks soothingly to me while I puke into his sink.
After a while, I'm finished, and he leads me back to his bed, where he tucks me in. He stands up to go. "Wait." I say. "Will you stay here?" He nods and perches himself at the foot of the bed. But he is too far away. I reach forward and grab his hand, which is resting on my calf, and pull him towards, until his face is next to mine. I pull the covers over him and snuggle up to him, my head on his chest, and his strong, muscular arms wrapped around me, holding me tight. I drifted off to sleep.
Well then! That was my first chapter. I hope you liked it. It was pretty uneventful, but I promise things will speed up soon. Please review!
~Inferno
