Hey Guys I'm back with a new story and no I have not given up on TBGC. I will be doing a lot of editing to the chapters so they are longer and funnier. Also to XxLivingInMyOwnWorldxX, I apologize for the review and the PMs I sent you, knowing that you are younger than me still didn't make up for what I said….or typed but still this is a sincere apology and I hope you accept it. Also I am making a change flames are accepted they will help me become a better writer. This is my new story called Remixed: Twilight Edition
FULL SUMMARY
Bella Swan is a 17 year old girl who moves to Forks, Washington, with her dad, Charlie Swan, an FBI agent. Bella is the very opposite of what she was in Twilight. Charlie's house is bigger and better and he is rarely home. Story starts on Bella's first day at Forks High. Like normal, Edward will leave because Bella's scent is too much for him. (Pussy!) What he didn't know was Bella already knew what they were. Edward is gone longer than he was in the book and Bella befriends the Cullens, even Rosalie. When Edward comes back no one is prepared for the surprises that come after his return.
BPOV
So I decided to move in with my dad, Charlie, for three reasons. 1) My mom, Renee, just got remarried and the sounds coming from their room sounds like a whale giving birth. 2) Charlie is an FBI agent, and he is rarely home. 3) Charlie has a huge house. Little did I know that when I got there I would be dealing with the Cullens and the Hales on my first day.
I woke up at 5:30, quickly took a shower and got dressed in grayish-white skinny jeans and a blue corset like top with matching blue Manolo-Blahniks. Eyeliner and mascara was a must I grabbed my gray Gucci hobo bag looked in my mirror "Perfect" I mumbled then went downstairs. I went into the kitchen and saw a note from Charlie.
Dear Bella,
I'm sorry I couldn't see you go off, my director called me in for an investigation. To make it up to you, go in the garage and you can drive any car you want. —Charlie
"Thanks Dad" I said. I took an apple from the fridge and headed for the garage. "Oh. My. God!" I almost dropped my apple. The garage was full of so many beautiful cars. Porsches, Mercedes, Ferraris, Mustangs, and so many more.
So I bet you're wondering, how can a single FBI agent afford all these expensive and beautiful cars? Well I'll tell you. My great-great-great grandfather, Matthew Charles Swan, was a plumber. It was he who created the plunger; an item that can be found in almost any household today. So now anytime some one buys a plunger or even finds a way to make the plunger better, the Swan family gets paid. My father doesn't even have to work, but being an FBI agent has been his dream.
I saw a blue Ferrari California. It matched my outfit so I decided to drive it. I got to Forks High School in fifteen minutes with the help of the voice-activated GPS that was in the car. There were people staring at my car—I think some of the guys even drooled. I took a deep breath and stepped out the car grabbed my purse and messenger bag. I walked into the school and saw a sign that said MAIN OFFICE. I walked in and saw a huge lady with red hair, glasses, and a purple t-shirt. She looked up "Can I help you?" she looked at me like she wouldn't touch me with a ten-and-a-half foot pole. "I need my schedule, I'm Isabella Swan." I said matter-of-factly. Recognition showed in her eyes. "Here you go Ms. Swan. Your schedule and a slip that all of your teachers need to sign and brought back here at the end of the school day" nervousness colored her tone. Maybe being the daughter of an FBI agent my work to my advantage. The bell rang and I quickly headed to my class.
I liked all of my classes sp far. , my English-Lit teacher, gave me the required reading list and I had read them all. Thank God I brought my folder of old essays to Forks with me. Cheating or not I was going to use them. All of my teachers treated me like a genuine good girl(Hah!)because of who my father was. All of them except Mr. Varner, my trigonometry teacher. He made me answer every single question in class, and he glared every time I was right—which was every time. By the time lunch comes I knew quite a few people. Eric Yorkie, an Asian with skin problems, Jessica Stanley, the gossip of the school, Lauren Mallory, the school's big ass slut, Tyler Crowley, an African American that liked me as well as Eric, Angela Webber, a nice, shy, quiet girl, and Mike Newton, the puppy follower with the baby blue eyes. I mean damn I know I'm sexy but do they— Eric, Tyler, and Mike—really have to follow me like a group of stalkers.
I looked to the back tables and saw five inhumanly beautiful creatures. I had a flashback
FLASHBACK
"Hey Bella do you want to hear a scary story?" Jake asked. "Sure!" I said excitedly "It's just an old scary story. Did you know the Quileutes are supposedly descended from wolves?" he asked I had to laugh "Like fur, fangs ... doggy breath?" Jake laughed with me "You know supposedly the Quileutes have this… 'enemy clan.' We found them hunting on our land, but they claimed to be different, so we made a treaty with them." Jake looked at me with real grave eyes. I thought he was joking "Riiiight. So what was this treaty?" I asked. "If they promised to stay off Quileute lands, we wouldn't expose what they really were to the pale-faces." I was confused. "What were they?" Jacob frowned "The Cullens are vampires." He whispered "that wasn't scary at all Jacob. That was just plain weird "
END OF FLASHBACK
I never forgot what Jake had said that day almost seven years ago but I had to check. "Jessica who are they?" I asked looking the beautiful creatures' direction. "Oh that's the Cullens." She said. I ignored all conversation after that. When the bell rang I headed for Biology II. Angela had that class with me too.
When I got there the teacher, Mr. Banner, made me introduce myself. "hi I'm Isabella Swan but I prefer Bella. I am 17 years young, my mom, Renee, is a kindergarten teacher that just got married to Phil Dwyer, a major league baseball player. My dad, Charlie, is an FBI agent, and I was born here in Forks." I said. After that he handed me a textbook and a syllabus. "Ms. Swan, your seat, the only seat left is next to Mr. Edward Cullen." My body tensed when he said that. There is no way in hell I will sit next to him. I met Edward's eyes they were flat black. Just my luck I'm sitting next to him and he's thirsty! I sat next to him and made a curtain between us with my hair. I didn't pay attention to the teacher's lecture on cellular anatomy I already knew it so I started doodling.
About forty-five minutes later I looked down and noticed I had drawn a pack of wolves and the Cullens. I looked over at Edward he was looking out the window. I quickly shut my notebook which caused him to turn towards me. Fifteen minutes and he is still looking at me. So I casually flip my hair back and look at him. "Look I notice you like staring at me which is okay because I know I'm hot but right now you are giving me a fucking creepy stalker vibe and that's not something my father would want to hear so knock it off" I whisper yelled. I grabbed my things and left just as the bell rang.
After gym I got in my car and drove home things are only going to get stranger.
So what did you think? Love it? Hate it? I want to know. Also the first three reviewers will get special thanks in my next chapter. I promise to hurry up so I can update TBGC I will continue it I promise. Also please check out my song fic for 'All I Ever Wanted' by Kelly Clarkson. Also I won't tell you who Bella will end up with until it's time.
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-CJFME
