BlackSwanSong (BSS): Ok! This is going to be rewritten! … Well more like, a bit more revised. You see, I kinda hate my story as it is now, and I've been hoping to make it better since my writing has improve a great deal from a couple months ago. I'm so sorry to those who're currently reading this as of now, because you guys might get stuck reading the whole thing again. I'm sooooo SORRY! By this, I'll make it up to you and hopefully update much more often! I'm also adding new features in my story, in which is a nice conversation with my characters.
Chelsea: Heh. Yeah right, a nice conversation with us… You left me in an island that I'm suppose to hate! And why do you portray me into an irritable character that has a horrible past with devilish friends and everyone is practically out of character?
BSS: (sweat) Uhh… But it makes things more interesting! It's a bit cliché to have a regular Chelsea that's overly cheerful and a Sabrina that's always portrayed as a bad person! I just don't want to have anyone left out (!) And I think Sabrina as a loud cheerful person will shake things up in a funny way! ^x^;
Chelsea: I hate you! You enjoy the pain you inflict on your characters don't you?
BSS: … yeah… a little bit actually… and~ Before Chelsea tries to kill me, I hope you guys enjoy the story and none of the characters belong to me! Kay! Quick, get to the story!
Chapter 1: Blind Date
Chelsea's POV-
I absolutely can't believe that I was pulled into this mess. This dumb island was pointless! Spring was too wet, summer was too hot, fall had too much going on, and winter was too damn cold! I mean, I know I'm a mean person who will probably have no chance in having a husband, but this is just over doing it!
~ Flashback ~
My eyebrow twitched involuntarily when I asked what my brother, Mark, had just told me. Mark closed his eyes in irritation for that I asked him to repeat, "I am asking you if you could take care of the farm that we had just inherited." Mark said this all slow like, in a way that sounds like I have hearing problems.
I blinked with a blank look.
"…"
Mark gave out a long sigh, "I'm guessing you are upset, huh? Look, now that father has passed away, we need someone to take care of the farm."
"There is no way am I going into a useless piece of land!" I exclaimed, now regaining the movement of my face.
"Sorry sis, but I told them that you will go there. I'm truly sorry, but this is for your own good, I'm sure you will live a much better life there than here." Mark gave a sympathetic look. I was really angry that he decided this without me, but gave up this battle, knowing that he's probably doing this with purpose, and marched upstairs to pack up.
~End of Flashback~
In the midst of my thoughts, I heard several knocking thumps coming from the other side of my door. My eyebrows twitched when the knocking was absolutely non-stop.
"I'm coming!" I yelled angrily. I ran to the door and flipped it open. "You only have to knock once! Not like I'm going anywhere, kay Taro?" I stopped when I finally opened my eyes from frustration. In front of me was a 6-foot tall man wearing cowboy attire. His hair color is striking silver, and his eyes resembled purple amethysts. Somehow I became more pissed, so much so, that I didn't care if he was "good looking".
"What do you want?" I practically yelled. The cowboy was taken aback from my outburst. Once I realized what I had just done, I murmured a small apology. The cowboy then regained his sharp look with a noticeable "Hmph."
"The name's Vaughn, the animal dealer." The cowboy kept his introduction short and to the point.
"Right, well my name's Chelsea, and as you can see, I'm the Rancher on this Island." I calmly answered.
All the cowboy did next was leave, leaving me by myself again in the winter snow.
'He seems to be one who keeps to himself' Hater me stated. 'He's probably not worth the trouble to even say 'hi' to.'
Yeah, I'm not very fond of men except for my brother, Mark. And to top off my hateful personality, I'm also quite touchy about my height. Just seeing someone a little bit taller than me gets me mad. My heights only 5'4, two inches shorter than my best friend, Sabrina.
Sabrina, who is the daughter of the great Regis, a man who owns a mining company, is a fragile looking girl, who is shy and conscious on how other people think of her. To me she's a truly kind person who cares for her friends, despite being shy and all, and so we became the best of friends. Now she is married. To whom you ask? Shea. Shea, of all people! Sabrina's explanation for the reason why she married this jungle man was that he was very different compared to anyone she's met, and seeing how he always seems to be cheerful, she wanted to get to know him a bit more. Now she is 21 years old, me being 20. Thanks to Shea, his overconfidence and cheery personality has now rubbed off on Sabrina, and then, she too, became a happier person who also speaks much, much louder now. Don't get me wrong though! It makes me grateful that Sabrina is more outgoing, but sometimes you just can't shut her up! (New right?)
A few knocks came to my door and ended my train of thoughts. Inside came in Sabrina. (speak of the devil! Or angle in her case… I think)
"G'morning Chels!" said an overly excited Sabrina. "Guess what? I hooked you up with another guy! He's almost like the male version of you! Just taller and hot looking!"
Oh, I almost forgot, ever since Sabrina got married, she tried to hook me up with a guy, saying that every girl needed her guy. I was blind dated with so many guys I don't know where to start! Once Sabrina put me up with Shea! "Just to see what reaction I will have to another girl's guy" was Sabrina's reason for her odd match-ups, boy, did that end in a major disaster! I swear this was happening way too many times! At first it was sweet and cute, but now it happens so much to the point where it's just plain annoying!
"And how did you get the guy to agree with this?" I asked, with my index finger, and my thumb between the bridge of my nose. (This is will not go well at ALL)
"I didn't." Sabrina cheerfully singed.
"Huh?" My eyebrows curled in suspision.
"I bribed Julia to trap the guy inside the animal shop." Sabrina nonchalantly answered.
…
"YOU WHAT?" I blurted out in surprise. "I said, I bribed Julia to trap your date inside the animal shop." Sabrina said in a sing-song voice. My mouth dropped a few inches, and after a few seconds I regained my posture. "O.K. then, may I ask who is my "date"?" I tried my best to keep my anger in check.
"Nope, no gonna happen!" Sabrina yelled with a devil-like smile. My face started to turn red in frustration; my usual sapphire eyes turning into pale blue fire.
"Now, now, it's that same short temper of yours that keeps you from getting a boyfriend." Sabrina scolded. "Now come on! We're going there now!" Sabrina yelled excitedly.
"Wait I need to get my coat! It's snowing outside!" I protested.
"No time! I'm sure Julia won't be able to hold him off for long!" Sabrina quickly answered. Before I knew it, I got dragged away by an overly joyful Sabrina to whatever poor soul who is trapped in the animal shop. But I think I'm the poor soul being signed off to the devil.
BSS: So is it better than the chapter I first made in this? Most of the content is still the same, but a ew details here and there, some better word choices, and presto, a 'better' chapter! ..I hope.
Chelsea: Nope. People probably think this is some bull that you changed the chapter.
BSS: Hey! I can't help it! I've come to hate this story quite a bit, so I wanted to change it sooooo bad! TT^TT
Sabrina: I don't think it so bad, I think you've improved a bit! ^^
(BSS Hugs Sabrina 'thanks')
BSS: Thank you so much!
Sabrina: No problem! I hope you guys stay tuned for the next chapter too! ^_^
