Heya! i am not going to complete gwenderella. to tell ya the truth i didnt like it... it went smoother in my head and i was in my moods =D i am gonna re rite total drama island so if u dont like duncan and gwen well TOO BAD! no heat and good reviews.. i'm new and my computers an ass and kepts getting stuck xx Duncan's POV first x Oh and tell if i can make it better in anyway thnx.. i no i talk 2 much.. but i'll stop and let u read x


After getting the disappointing news, that we were gonna stay in a crap summer camp for our summer, our "Wanna be famous", ugly host, let us dry off, when i saw the hot, Goth girl, going into the girls cabin, on the left. Man i really wish she's on my team. My thoughts were interupted when i bumped into the door of the, right cabin which the boys were occupying. I fell and the Party Boy came to help me. But before going in.. I could have sworn I saw Goth girl looking at me and laughing. Which made me smile.

Gwen's POV

I can't belive we were going to stay in this crap summer camp, i hate my brother! Atleast he let us dry off, since we fell in the river. I was walking to the cabin the girls were drying off in.

"Hey", the surfer girl said.

"Hi", I mumbeled. She just walked ahead. I was walking when i saw the Juvie, bumping into a closed door. I burst out laughing, before he went I could've sworn i saw him smiling at me, i wonder why? I was laughing so hard i fell from the steps, face first. Leshawna came and helped me.

"You OK, Girl?" she asked. I just nodded. This is going to be a long Summer!


Ok so u like, tell if u want it better. I suppose its better than gwenderella and tell me if i ever over-do it k?

review no heat i beg of u x