Hey, everyone! So SilverFlash gave me permission to rewrite this and to continue her story. I've taken out a lot of my Ocs from the challenge so you can submit. You'll definitely see some things different in mine than in hers though. I'm going to keep the Allegiances the same with the characters that were introduced at the end in so you'll know. Also, you can submit OCs I'll post a form at the end of the chapter. Please feel free to feel it out. You can PM it to me or leave it in the reviews. Leave your name in the review so I can give you credit. The Allegiances are subject to change. I took out a lot of the cats in the allegiances that were in there for the challenge, so fill out the Oc form. I'll shut up now and let you get to reading.


Allegiances

Thunderclan

Leader: Bramblestar- Dark brown tabby tom with amber eyes; apprentice Oakpaw

Deputy: Lionblaze- Golden tabby tom with amber eyes (Temporarily while Squirrleflight is in the Nursery)

Medicine Cat: Jayfeather- Gray tabby tom with blind blue eyes; Sorrelpaw

Warriors:

Brackenfur- Golden-brown tabby tom

Icecloud- White she-cat with Blue eyes; Apprentice Dawnpaw

Foxleap- Reddish brown tabby tom with amber eyes

Biteburn- Red-brown tom with black stripe down back light brown stripes, light brown splashes on forelegs, light reddish brown splash on left foreleg, and blue eyes (Father of Fall kit and Icekit)

Racoonfur- White, blue-gray, orange, red-brown, dark brown tortoiseshell-tabby tom with dark circles around blue eyes (Father of Shadekit, Darkkit, and Splashkit)

Brightheart- White she-cat with ginger patches

Thornclaw- Golden-brown tabby tom

Whitewing- White she-cat with Green eyes; Apprentice Lilypaw

Birchfall- Light Brown Tabby tom

Berrynose- cream-colored tom with a stump for a tail; Apprentice Honeypaw

Mousewhisker- Gray and white tom

Seedmoon-Light brown, gold, and silver she-cat with amber eyes

Poppyfrost- Tortoiseshell she-cat

Cinderheart- Gray tabby she-cat

Lionblaze- Golden tabby tom with amber eyes

Rosepetal- Dark cream she-cat

Briarlight- Dark brown she-cat, paralyzed in her hind quarters

Blossomfall- Tortoiseshell and white she-cat with petal shaped white patches

Bumblestripe- Very pale gray tom with black stripes

Ivypool- Silver and white tabby she-cat with dark blue eyes

Cherryfall- Ginger she-cat

Molewhisker- Brown and cream tom; apprentice Lightpaw

Snowbush- White fluffy tom

Ambermoon- Pale ginger she-cat

Dewnose- gray and white tom

Spiderleg- Black tom with a brown underbelly and legs

Sorreltail- Tortoiseshell and white she-cat

Stormcloud- Gray tabby tom; apprentice Larkpaw

Hollytuft- Black she-cat; apprentice Twigpaw

Waspwhisker- White tom with black flecks and green eyes (Father of Fishkit, Sootkit, Willowkit, Rainkit, and Darkkit)

Badgersnout- (Father of Mosskit, Windkit, and Dirtkit) Large muscular tom black tom with a white stripe from nose to tail, like a badger with amber eyes

Apprentices:

Honeypaw- Golden She-cat with deep blue eyes

Firepaw- Ginger tabby she-cat with a white chest, paws, tipped tail, and green eyes

Sorrelpaw- Gray she-cat with golden paws and chest with amber eyes

Twigpaw- Gray she-cat with blue eyes

Larkpaw- Black tom with amber eyes

Dawnpaw- light gray tom with green eyes

Lightpaw-Light gray she-cat with dark stripes on her ears and paws with amber eyes

Lilypaw- Light brown tabby she-cat with white ears and paws and green eyes

Oakpaw-Silver and brown tabby with Black stripes tom with blue eyes

Queens:

Starnight-(Mother to Biteburn's kits and foster mother to Racoonfur's kits) Black, white, and cream speckled she-cat with green eyes

Daisy- Cream, long furred she-cat

Clovertail-(Mother to Waspwhisker's kits) Slender white she-cat with brown paws, brown clover shaped patch around nose, brown tipped tail, pale silver stripes, gold flecks in fur, black nose, and amber eyes

Berrybush- (Mother to Badgersnout's kits) Black fluffy she-cat with light blue eyes

Squirrelflight- Dark ginger she-cat with green eyes and one white paw (Mother of Cliffkit- Dark ginger tom-kit with a white ear and dark brown paw and Shadowkit- Dark brown tabby she-kit with a dark ginger tail)

Swiftheart- light gray she-cat with one black ear and blue eyes; will be expecting Foxleap's kits (owned by Cattat)

Kits:

Icekit- Blue-grey she-kit with white flecks and blue eyes

Fallkit- Red-brown tom-kit with green eyes

Shadekit- Blood red-brown she-kit with white speckled ears, white muzzle, one blue-gray paw and blue eyes. Blind

Splashkit- Light brown she-kit with blue-gray stripes, tipped tail, forepaws, ears, and green eyes

Fishkit- Small dark brown tabby she-kit with silver stripes and smokey amber eyes

Sootkit- light gray tom-kit with darker flecks and dark green eyes

Willowkit- Light gray she-kit with smoky hazel eyes

Rainkit- light gray with darker flecks tom-kit with smokey blue eyes

Darkkit- Dark brown tom-kit with amber eyes

Mosskit-Amber and white tortoiseshell she-kit with blue eyes

Windkit- ginger and light gray tabby tom-kit with green eyes

Dirtkit- Light gray tabby tom-kit with brown stripe around muzzle, brown ears, brown-tipped tail, brown paws, brown chest, and amber eyes

Cliffkit-ginger tom-kit with a white ear and dark brown paw

Shadowkit-Dark brown tabby she-kit with a dark ginger tail

Redkit- Reddish-brown tabby she-kit with amber eyes (owned by Cattat)

Graykit- gray tom with sparkling blue eyes (owned by Cattat)

Elders:

Purdy- Plump tabby tom with a gray muzzle

Graystripe- Long-haired gray tom

Millie- Striped gray tabby she-cat with blue eyes

Dustpelt- Brown tabby tom with amber eyes

Sandstorm- Pale ginger she-cat with faint darker stripes and green eyes

Cloudtail- Long-furred white tom with blue eyes

Brightheart-(Training Firepaw)

Riverclan

Leader: Mistystar- Blue-gray she-cat with blue eyes

Deputy: Reedwhisker- Black tom

Medicine Cat: Mothwing- Dappled Golden she-cat Willowshine- gray tabby she-cat
Warriors:

Blueeyes- (Father of Whitekit, Stormkit, and Silverkit) Pale gray tabby tom with blue eyes

Fishstrike- (Adopted father of Darkkit) Silver tabby tom with black stripes, white star-shaped splash on chest and one amber eye, one blue eye

Darkstep-Gray tom with dark gray and silver stripes and green eyes

Graycloud- Gray tom with amber eyes; Apprentice- Blackpaw

Mintfur- Light gray tabby tom

Duskfur- Brown tabby she-cat; Apprentice- Shadepaw

Minnowtail- Dark gray she-cat

Mallownose- Light brown tabby tom

Petalfur- Gray and white she-cat

Beatlewhisker- Brown and white tabby tom

Curlfeather- Pale brown she-cat

Podlight- Gray and white tom

Heronwing-Dark gray and black tom (Father of Gentlekit, Mosskit, and Sunkit)

Shimmerpelt- Silver she-cat

Lizardtail- Light brown tom; apprentice Foxpaw (Father of Mudkit, Swiftkit, Flamekit, and Snowkit)

Havenpelt-Black and white she-cat; apprentice Breezepaw

Perchwing- Gray and white she-cat

Sneezecloud- Gray and white tom (Father of Stoutkit, Milkkit, and Stonekit)

Brackenpelt- Tortoiseshell she-cat

Jayclaw- Gray tom; apprentice Nightpaw

Owlnose- Brown Tabby tom

Voleclaw- Honey golden brown tom with amber eyes

Icewing- White she-cat with blue eyes (Mother to Nightpaw and Breezepaw)

Apprentices:

Blackpaw- Black tom with smoky hazel eyes

Shadepaw- Dark brown she-cat

Foxpaw- Russet tabby tom

Nightpaw-Black tom with green eyes

Breezepaw-gray tom with green eyes

Queens:

Duskheart- (Formerly of ShadowClan and mother to Racoonfur's and expecting Fishstrike's kits) Gray she-cat with light gray tipped tail, legs, ears, and muzzle with green eyes

Lakeheart- gray tabby she-cat

Riverflow- (Mother to Blueeyes's kits) Skinny pale gray and golden tabby she-cat with dark gray flecks and blind green eyes

Pebblestripe- (Mother of Lizardtail's kits) Blue-gray she-cat with pretty silver stripes and amber eyes

Spottedriver- (Mother of Heronwing's kits) Pretty pale gray she-cat with darker flecks and smokey amber eyes with a sliver of blue

Dapplefur- (Mother of Sneezecloud's kits) Honey golden she-cat with golden brown stripes and blue eyes

Kits:

Darkkit-Black, white, gray, and brown tabby-tortoiseshell tom-kit with amber eyes

Whitekit- Weak white tabby tom-kit with green eyes

Silverkit- Pretty silver tabby she-kit with green eyes

Stormkit- Gray tabby she-kit with amber eyes

Stonekit- Blue-grey tom-kit with penetrating amber eyes

Milkkit- Blind pale cream tabby tom-kit with black stripes and pale winter sky blue eyes and a bushy tail

Stoutkit- Really small tan she-kit with green eyes

Swiftkit- Stout gray tom-kit with green eyes

Mudkit- Large brown tom-kit with tan flecks and blue eyes

Snowkit- long, slender she-kit white with black leopard spots and green eyes

Flamekit- Small, frail, deaf she-kit with green eyes and fiery orange fur

Gentlekit-Small black-eared, tailed, pawed, brown she-kit with blue eyes

Mosskit- Grey-blue furred she-kit with green eyes

Sunkit- Slender tortoiseshell she-kit with amber eyes

Elders:

Mosspelt- Tortoiseshell and white she-cat

Windclan

Leader: Onestar- Brown tabby tom

Deputy: Harespring- brown and white tom

Medicine Cat: Kestrelflight- mottled gray tom with white splotches like kestrel feathers Apprentice; Tinypaw

Warriors:

Nightcloud- Black she-cat

Gorsetail- very pale gray and white she-cat with blue eyes

Crowfeather- Dark gray tom; Apprentice Fernpaw

Leaftail- Dark tabby tom with amber eyes

Emberfoot- Gray tom with two dark paws

Breezepelt- Black tom with amber eyes

Furzepelt- Gray and White she-cat

Sedgewhisker- Light brown tabby she-cat

Larkwing- Pale brown tabby she-cat; apprentice Smokepaw

Slightfoot- Black tom with white flash on his chest (Father of Brownkit, Sharpkit, and Redkit)

Oatclaw- Pale brown tabby tom; apprentice Brindlepaw

Featherpelt- Gray tabby she-cat

Hootwhisker-Dark gray tabby tom

Miststripe- Light gray tabby she-cat with black stripes and unusual blue eyes; apprentice- Dustpaw

Frostbite- (to be father of Patchkit, Swallowkit, and Grasskit) dark gray tabby tom with white splash on chest and white paws with green eyes; apprentice- Fallowpaw

Snowwhisker- White tom with amber eyes; apprentice- Ashpaw (Father of Softkit, Pollenkit, Petalkit, and Robinkit)

Heatherpail- (Mother to Smokepaw and Brindlepaw) Light brown tabby she-cat with blue eyes

Apprentices:

Ashpaw- Gray tom with yellow eyes

Fernpaw- Dark brown she-cat

Dustpaw- Dusty pale ginger tom with orange eyes

Fallowpaw- Silver she-cat with a lovely dappled coat and pretty amber eyes

Tinypaw- Small light brown she-cat with dainty light gray paws and blue eyes

Smokepaw- Gray she-cat

Brindlepaw- Mottled brown she-cat

Queens:

Birdflight- (Expecting Frostbite's kits) gray tabby she-cat with darker gray almost black flecks in fur and dark blue eyes

Goldenleaf- (Mother to Snowwhisker's kits) small beautiful golden tabby with dark gray flecks she-cat with gray eyes

Hazelwhisker- Brown and silver tabby she-cat with yellow eyes (Mother of Slightfoot's kits)

Kits:

Robinkit- Black she-kit with dark brown ears, fiery ginger legs, and amber eyes

Softkit- Cream colored she-kit with brown paws and bright sparkly amber eyes

Petalkit- fluffy calico cat with bright blue eyes

Pollenkit- Fluffy light golden brown/yellow tabby she-kit with green eyes

Brownkit- Tall broad shouldered brown tabby tom-kit with amber eyes

Sharpkit- Skinny dusk brown tom-kit with fur that sticks out at sharp angles and yellow eyes

Redkit- tortoiseshell red tom-kit with green eyes

Patchkit- Black and white tom-kit with dark blue eyes- mute

Swallowkit- white and brown tabby she-kit and blind blue eyes

Grasskit- Gray and white tom-kit with a lame hind leg and leaf green eyes

Elders:

Whitetail- Small white she-cat

Shadowclan

Leader: Rowanstar- ginger tom

Deputy: Crowfrost- Black and white tom

Medicine Cat: Littlecloud- Very small tabby tom Apprentice; Shadowpaw

Warriors:

Weatherstorm- Large black, white, and gray tom with large green eyes, black paws, gray tipped tail, and black coat splashed with gray and white (Father of Duskkit)

Tawnypelt- tortoiseshell she-cat with green eyes; apprentice Neddlepaw

Tigerheart- Dark brown tabby tom; apprentice Sleekpaw

Stonewing- White tom; apprentice Juniperpaw

Spikefur- Dark brown tom with tufty fur on his head; apprentice Yarrowpaw

Wasptail- Yellow tabby she-cat with green eyes; apprentice Strikepaw

Dawnpelt- Cream furred she-cat; apprentice Beepaw

Snowbird- Sleek, lithe, well- muscled pure white she-cat with green eyes

Scorchfur- Dark gray tom with slashed ears, one of which is torn

Berryheart- Black and white she-cat

Cloverfoot- Gray tabby she-cat

Rippletail- White tom

Sparrowtail- Large tabby tom; apprentice Violetpaw

Mistcloud- Spiky furred pale gray she-cat

Smokefang- Blue-grey tom with penetrating green eyes

Rockfall- Black tom with green eyes

Whitestreak- Brown tom with a white stripe and orange eyes

Apprentices:

Shadowpaw- Light gray tom with dark gray paws and amber eyes

Neddlepaw- silver-gray she-cat with white chest fur and bold green eyes

Sleekpaw- yellow she-cat

Juniperpaw- Brown, and white patched tom

Yarrowpaw- Yellow she-cat with black stripes

Strikepaw- Calico tom with one gray paw

Beepaw- plump white she-cat with black ears

Violetpaw- Black and white she-cat with blue eyes

Queens:

Brownscratch- (Mother of Weatherstorm's kit ) Dark brown she-cat with warm light amber eyes

Grassheart- Pale Brown tabby she-cat

Pinenose- Black she-cat (Mother to Birchkit, LionKit, Puddlekit, and Slatekit)

Kits:

Birchkit- Beige tom-kit

Lionkit- Yellow she-kit with amber eyes

Puddlekit- Brown tom-kit with white splotches

Slatekit- Sleek gray tom-kit

Duskkit-Tortoiseshell she-kit with dark brown stripes and light brown paws with amber eyes

Elders:

Oakfur- Small brown tom

Kinkfur- Tabby she-cat with long fur that sticks out at all angles

Ratscar- Brown tom with long scar across his back


So here is the form. Once again just fill it out and leave your name in the review or PM. No MarySue characters or extremely bizarre characters! If I receive one of those, then I will not put it in here.

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