Chapter one: The deaths
Hi this is my first story so please review. This will be from the POV of hermione.
Chapter one
I walk to great hall and should be happy after all Voldemort is dead. But as I enter the great hall I see all the dead lying on the ground. Every face causes a new stab of pain, Colin from ginnys year looks so young in death. I can see the Weasleys all standing around someone I don't want to know who. I see harry stop as if he has been shot. So I speed up as much as I don't want to see who it is I have to be there for him. It's Remus and Tonks. I am already on the verge of tears and I didn't even know them that well. I look at harry, the last connection with his parents is gone as well as someone he counted as a close friend. As I finally look up I notice that Ron is crying and is with the weaslys surrounding someone. I walk forward to see who it is. Oh my god it's Fred, it can't be there must be some mistake. " Have you checked his pulse " I shout. "Check his what??"Someone answers I don't know who as I'm blinded by tears. I push through the Weasleys till I reach Fred then I check his pulse.
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