And here I am rewriting the beginning of the story. Well I need to do this again.

DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN ED EDD N' EDDY OR RADIATA STORIES!

I re-wrote this in hope of getting more readers and reviewers, also there are some changes from the original.


Chapter 1: Eddy's Brother Comes Home

All of the kids lined up on the street to meet him. The "him" was Eddy's older brother. "Is he really coming?" A question aroused from the crowd of kids in front of the Eds. Actually it was just Ed and Eddy. Double D didn't believe Eddy when he said his brother was coming home so he was hiding in the crowd.

"He's coming! I'm telling ya!" Eddy yelled.

"Yah right!" or "He's lying like last time!" Came from the crowd of angry kids.

"I'm gonna bail." Kevin just turned and began to walk away. Nazz agreed with him and turned around. Agrees began to shout from each kid as they began to walk away.

"Wait!" Eddy shouted after them, "Your gonna miss my brother!" They were feed up with him. They turned and shot him glares. Once again they began to leave but then the sound of a speeding vehicle began to fill their ears. Double D looked down the street and saw a speeding bus turn the corner. "Everyone, stay out of the street!" He shouted.

The all stood still as the bus came to a halt in front of them. The bus doors shot open and a man (who looked exactly like Sarah and Jimmy's impersonation in that one episode) walked out of it. However it looked like he had been driving the bus.

"It's Eddy's brother!" Nazz shrieked. Rolf screamed in terror and ran back to his house shouting something about Eddy's brother and the chickens. Everyone just stared for a second. "What's he talking about?" Double D finally asked.

"You don't need to know." Was all he said. In the bus a man in a uniform crawled up from the back seats and sat in the bus driver's chair. He said dazed, "I stand corrected."

They were all confused again but no one bothered to ask. "So what's up little bro?"

"Nothing much." Eddy acted cool around him, "Just telling everyone about how you're coming home. But they didn't believe me." He looked at them, but they were all avoiding eye contact. Eddy approached his brother and whispered something in his ear. "Yah great idea."

"25 cents per question asked to my brother!" All the cul-de-sac kids (but Double D and Ed) reached into their pockets and began to fish out quarters. Eddy cracked his; "I hit a scam" smile.

"You." Eddy's brother pointed at Nazz.

"What's your real name?" She asked.

"Good question." He replied, "It's Lucian. Why about you?"

Nazz began to blush furiously, "It's Nazz." She began to giggle. She had fallen for his charm.

Eddy whispered to Lucian, "Hey, she's my girl!"

"Sorry, sorry." He replied quietly, "Umm, you." He pointed at Johnny.

"What'd you do to Rolf's chickens?" Johnny looked insanely excited.

Lucian thought for a second. He finally got an excuse, "Sorry. I was sworn to secrecy with Rolf's family traditions and if I spoke I would have to give them Eddy as a slave."

"That's ok!" Sarah shouted and they all broke out in laughter. Eddy growled when he saw Double D chuckling slightly. "You." He pointed to Kevin.

"Is it true you own a motorcycle?" He asked.

"Yah." Lucian smiled, "It should be here tomorrow."

"Can I see it?!" As he nodded, Kevin crossed his arms and smiled.

Eddy took a jar out of his pocket and stuck it in front of Lucian. "Everyone whose asked, pay up!" They moaned and each put in a quarter. "Next…you." Lucian pointed at Sarah.

"Are you married?" Everyone stared at her but Jimmy looked away hurt. However Lucian seemed a bit shocked, "No, but I have a girl friend that I think could go all of the way."

Nazz smiled, "That's so romantic. I wish I had a true love." Eddy stuck out the jar and Sarah placed a quarter in it.

- Later that Night -

"I made a killing!" Eddy stared at the full jar of quarters. "And it's all thanks to you!"

Lucian was sitting in a chair in his room writing something in a book. "Yah. I would have done the same when I was your age." Eddy looked intently at Lucian.

"What are you writing?" He asked. Lucian held up a book. It was golden like with many interesting pictures on it with the large text, Radiata Stories, on it. "What the heck is Radiata Stories?"

"It's a book I'm writing. It has knights, fairies, guilds, and dragons. It's quite interesting." Lucian replied.

Eddy looked at the book some more. "Can I read some of it?"

"Sure." Lucian answered, "Go ahead." Eddy crawled into bed and opened it up. He read the first few words and grew drowsy. Reading wasn't a strong point, obviously. Eddy fell asleep in his bed, but the book's pages flipped. They slowly grew in speed and soon it began to glow a bright light. The light began to envelop the room as Lucian stared at it awe-struck. "What's going on here?" The light consumed him.

- Double D's Room-

Double D walked into his room and put a stack of new books on his desk. Then a weird light caught his eye from his window. "What's that light?" He asked himself.

The light was growing slightly and consuming the area around it. Double D picked up his backpack and slipped a few books in there. "In my novels expanding lights usually mean something…" He kept witching intently until the lights reached his house. By this time every other house was already consumed…

- ???-

Double D awoke on a platform hovering above a large open area. Around him was all the Cul-de-sac kids. Sarah, Jimmy, Kevin, Nazz, Johnny, Ed, Eddy, Rolf, and…May, Lee, and Marie?! Everyone began to wake up and look around. They were all scared and unsure of what was happening. "What's going on here?!" Lee shouted.

"Ugh. Why's my head hurt?" Kevin asked.

"Your head?" Nazz asked, "What about your eyes. That light killed mine."

"Sarah! I'm scared!" Jimmy ran over to Sarah and fell down and curled into a ball. Double D looked over and saw Rolf and Johnny looking down at something. Eddy asked, "Hey sock head. What are you looking at?" Double D's jaw dropped.

"Everyone look!" He shouted. They all looked down and saw, what looked like some sort of two-headed dragon made of water. In front of it was a man in bluish armor and blue hair. Next to him was a tall teen-ager, and they were both wielding swords. Not far behind him was a short, bulky armored knight with a red Mohawk and a mace in his hand.

"What's going on?" May asked confused.

Rolf looked at the kids, "It's a fight. Between Kelvin, the water dragon, and humans. They all looked at him. How did he know this?

"Look the humans are making their move!" Johnny shouted excitedly. The man and the teen-ager ran at the beast as one of its head shot a geyser of water. Ward Water!! They heard a familiar voice shout. A flaming shield appeared in front of them and evaporated the water.

"Amazing!" Double D gasped.

"What was that?!" Jimmy shrieked. The man leaped into the air and attempted to stab the monster but the other head shot a geyser at him sending him back. Both heads opened their mouths and shoot barrages of icicles at them. The two of them merely swung their swords and destroyed all of them.

"Awesome!" Johnny and Ed shouted at the same time. Marie took her eyes off the fight and looked at the smartest Ed. She walked over acting scared and clamped onto him. "I'm so scared Double D!" Lee and May looked at her as if she was a hero.

"I must insist you move!" Double D said to her, "You're blocking my view." For granted, the fight was pretty interesting. She let go and looked down. The man suddenly picked up his sword and looked like he was going to thrust with it. Once again he charged and jumped up to stab it. Both heads shot geysers of water. Ward Water!! The flaming shield appeared in front of him turning the water to steam. "HUMAN NO!" Rolf shouted.

The man's eyes glowed red as he thrusted his sword into it. "EEEK!" Jimmy shrieked in terror as he and all of the girls (minus the Kankers) recoiled.

"Awesome!" Ed was hoping up and down.

Johnny was as well, "Look at his eyes!" He pulled the sword out from the dragon and an extremely powerful shockwave was emitted. The wave crashed into the platform sending the Eds, Marie, Kevin and Nazz, Sarah and Jimmy, Rolf, Johnny, and the other Kankers flying. Their screams filled the air as they plummeted from the sky to the land below. Double D's backpack flew off and he looked down (His up). He saw a small village and a lake right below them…

- Jack's/Adele's House-

"Are you done with the dishes?" Adele, Jack's older sister, asked.

Jack scrubbed the dish harder getting the spot out, "Almost sis." Suddenly a large crash came from beside the house. "What was that?!" Jack exclaimed.

"I'll go check it out." Adele said, "You finish the plates." Jack moaned and Adele left the house. The sky looked darkish red. That was unusual for this time of year. She walked around the side of the house and into the crop yard, right beside the house. In it was a backpack. She looked at it puzzling and picked it up. She opened it up and saw a few books inside, including a journal with the name: Eddward, Double D. "Weird." She muttered to herself. She took it back inside with her.

"So what was it?" Jack asked as he scrubbed vigorously.

"Just this backpack." She held up Double D's backpack, "But I'm not sure where it came from." Another sudden noise startled them but this time it was three splashes.

"Something landed in the lake!" Jack exclaimed. He dropped the dish into the sink and ran out of the room. "Jack!" Adele yelled after him. She sighed and sat down at the table. Could it of been more backpacks?

"People!" Jack screamed. Adele shot up from the table and ran towards the pond. By the time she got there Jack fished the three boys out of the pond and were all breathing, unconscious, on the path.

"Are they all right?!" Adele asked.

Jack replied, "I don't know. They weren't awake when I got to them." They looked at them for a little bit. "Where did they fall from?" Jack asked. They both looked up.

"Could it have anything to do with the weird look in the sky?" Adele asked. "Well anyways, we should take them back to our house."

"Ok, I'll take the short one." Jack looked down at them.

"No." Adele smiled, "I'll take him. You get the other two."

"Aww." Jack moaned. They grabbed them and dragged them away. "Hey sis. Will we have the money to support five people?"

"Jack…" Adele sighed, "We grow our own food and water is free." Jack sighed.

"Will I have to share my room?" He asked. Adele just ignored him and kept walking.

"Hey!" He called after her, "Wait up!"


So whadaya think? Like it, don't? I'm ready for constructive critisim, but don't go full out flame please. Please R&R, or get further in the story. Yah.