This is my first story so please help by commenting on the story.

Prologue

Noel Machirant is only about two months when his parents are killed by a verydark sorcerer. and is taken in by the special commando group, that will train him to become the best General the world has ever sen. Twelve years later Noel going to indirian school of magical capabilities, where he has a very special mission, to find the Queen of life, the King of death, the lord of light and the lady of darkness. Follow Noel as he completes his mission all while trying keeping it hidden.