Hi! I'm back! Here's the long awaited (or maybe not) sequel to Brother My Brother. I've decided to drag the story out more and use chapters. Since some people complained that Brother My Brother was too short. Who knows, maybe if a few people ask, I'll revamp Brother My Brother. Anyway, here's the first chapter of I Wont Let You Get Hurt Again.
Disclaimer: I don't own DBZ.
I Won't Let You Get Hurt Again: Chapter 1: Kidnapped
Goten and Gohan have been living peacefully after the events in Brother My Brother. They had just finished a training session and were both very hungry. "Gohan, I'm hungry. Can we go home and eat?" Goten asked, tiredness evident in his voice. "Sure bro, mom's probably finishing up lunch about now." Gohan replied.
Gohan took to the sky and started home, Goten following. When they were almost there, Gohan looked behind him, only to see that Goten was nowhere in sight. "Goten? Hmm… maybe I went to fast for the little guy…" Gohan said as he started to go back to where they were training to see if he could find Goten.
Earlier on…
Goten had been looking down at a family of deer, a few feet behind Gohan. He looked back up, only to be grabbed by something from behind. A cloaked figure grabbed Goten and threw him into a ki-resistant cage, then disappeared. Goten was to hungry, weak, and surprised to do anything so he just sat in his cage.
'I hope Niichan's ok. I wish he were here…'
Back to Gohan…
Gohan had gone to the training spot and back, but didn't find Goten. 'Hmmm…maybe he's already home. I'll check there' Gohan quickly raced to his home. He landed and went inside.
"Mom! I'm home!" No reply. "Mom?" Gohan went into the kitchen and found Chichi on the ground. She appeared to have fainted. She also grasped a piece of paper in her hand. Gohan slowly walked over and read the paper. It said: Dear Sons, I have your youngest child within my possession. If you want any chance of getting him back alive, send your oldest child to 47934 Mountain area 562. We'll discuss the child's fate there. If you don't come, I'll be forced to kill him. It's your choice…
Gohan dropped the note and stared, dumbfounded. "GOTEN!!!"
There you go. The first chapter. Will Goten be safe? What will Gohan do? Who is this evil person? And what do they want with Gohan? Find out Soon! And please R/R! I worked hard on this and I won't continue it unless I get at least 1-3 reviews. The more the better. They're what keep me writing. Until next time!
Disclaimer: I don't own DBZ.
I Won't Let You Get Hurt Again: Chapter 1: Kidnapped
Goten and Gohan have been living peacefully after the events in Brother My Brother. They had just finished a training session and were both very hungry. "Gohan, I'm hungry. Can we go home and eat?" Goten asked, tiredness evident in his voice. "Sure bro, mom's probably finishing up lunch about now." Gohan replied.
Gohan took to the sky and started home, Goten following. When they were almost there, Gohan looked behind him, only to see that Goten was nowhere in sight. "Goten? Hmm… maybe I went to fast for the little guy…" Gohan said as he started to go back to where they were training to see if he could find Goten.
Earlier on…
Goten had been looking down at a family of deer, a few feet behind Gohan. He looked back up, only to be grabbed by something from behind. A cloaked figure grabbed Goten and threw him into a ki-resistant cage, then disappeared. Goten was to hungry, weak, and surprised to do anything so he just sat in his cage.
'I hope Niichan's ok. I wish he were here…'
Back to Gohan…
Gohan had gone to the training spot and back, but didn't find Goten. 'Hmmm…maybe he's already home. I'll check there' Gohan quickly raced to his home. He landed and went inside.
"Mom! I'm home!" No reply. "Mom?" Gohan went into the kitchen and found Chichi on the ground. She appeared to have fainted. She also grasped a piece of paper in her hand. Gohan slowly walked over and read the paper. It said: Dear Sons, I have your youngest child within my possession. If you want any chance of getting him back alive, send your oldest child to 47934 Mountain area 562. We'll discuss the child's fate there. If you don't come, I'll be forced to kill him. It's your choice…
Gohan dropped the note and stared, dumbfounded. "GOTEN!!!"
There you go. The first chapter. Will Goten be safe? What will Gohan do? Who is this evil person? And what do they want with Gohan? Find out Soon! And please R/R! I worked hard on this and I won't continue it unless I get at least 1-3 reviews. The more the better. They're what keep me writing. Until next time!
