Just a Snippet of what Ive been working on. Its a turning point in the story and it stood out to me. I don't have a beta yet, so please forgive me since I don't have the best grammar skills.
Mike POV
He turned her face to his, he saw the mascara stained tears that rolled down her face and it broke his heart. He wished he never saw that on her face again. But he did what he knew best to do. He took her small face in large calloused hands and kissed the stains. He kissed her forehead, her temples, her cheeks, her chin, her nose and finally her lips. He has been wanting to kiss those lips ever since his speech on the mound. But right now it wasn't about lust. It was his feelings that he wanted to convey to her. He didn't have the words to tell her, he had to show her.
