NDA: Characters don't belong me,so don't be surprise!
Don't hurt me if you find mistakes, I'm french!
It's my 1st story in english, be cool and click at the bottom, in left to submit reviews. Thank You, you're nice!
He was so sad. He felt like a storm, sometimes he was happy, sometimes he was torn. As at this moment. He was starving at the lake when he saw a girl who were very beautiful. Her brown hairs went until her shoulders, she was wearing a white coat and a black pant. Her eyes were brown with a little gold. She sat next him and they were looking at the sun which was setting, painting the sky with red, orange and dark blue. It was wonderful, he thought, but not as the girl who was sitting next him. He looked at her. She was serious, as usually. She changed during the summer, she wasn't miss I know everything better than others any more. Apparently, she didn't learn her books by heart as she used to do. She leant modesty and assurance. He ignored the storm who was blowing in him, and he took her in his arms. Thoughts was mixed up in her mind. She was looking at the horizon. A tear formed beads on her eyes. She was sad too. But it wasn't for the same reasons than the boy.
She was crying because she love that boy. He cried because his godfather died three months ago.
But the sky was dark now, the moon was full, and they thought about Moony. Moony was a friend of the boy's godfather. And of his father, who died 15 years ago, with his mother.
He must to live with his aunt and uncle, but they don't like him much, to no say not at all. His cousin is a pain, but the record of the more painful boy on the earth is Drago Malefoy, who is arrogant, and he see his father as a god, and he behave like a god. He can't have a day without swearing at Harry, Ron and Hermione. Severus Snape is a pain to. His lessons are boring and difficult.
The boy stood up, and he returned at Hogwarts Castle. The girl was still crying, but she knew that she had any luck going out with the boy. It was impossible, because he went out with Cho chang, a superficial and stupid girl. She still crying until Rusard caught her and she went to the headmaster's office.
He took a piece of paper, a pen and he begun writing. He would write to his godfather. He must to.
But he remembered that he was died.
It's very short, I'm very sorry, but I'm french, and I don't speak english very well. Do I follow or not? Give me your advice! ;)
