Hey, this is my first story so can I please have some consturctive critisism.

Disclaimer: I do not own naruto, if I did I would have died from a heart attack.

On with the story.


I just saw who I thought to be, the love of my life, just get killed by my best friend. I saw his lips form a couple of words and then, my whole life crashed down. I felt cold and hot all over. I started to shake, my brain shut down and I couldn't stand anymore.

I woke up and found myself surronded by white walls. Everything was white. For a minute I thought I was in heaven. I felt myself float up. I felt weightless. I felt so alive. I look down and Im wearing a white dress. My pink hair floating around me like a halo. When I look straight ahead I am horrified with what I saw.

Lying peacefully on the bed was me. I start to hypoventilate, 'What is going on,' I think. I look around and I see all my friends around me sheading tears. I'm dead. Thats the only thought that registirs in my mind. 'How'. I hear a door open. I turn around and next to me is Tsunade.

"Tsunade how did Sakura die," asks a frantic Naruto.
"My guess is that she couldn't live with herself anymore and her heart just gave up. Remeber Sakura was already suffering from an unkown illiness, so dont beat yourself up about it, Naruto, alright." Tsunade said. I'm glad she did, who knows what Naruto will do if he thought it was his fault.
"Yes Tsunade" said a sad Naruto

And now i have no reason to stay in this half state form. My unfinished business is done and now I can move on to the afterlife. As long as Naruto is happy and have his friends around him, he will do fine.

Suddenly everything started turning in a swirl of white and then everything went black, the only thing going threw my mind was the last words Sasuke said.

"Thank you."

The End.

please review i really want to know what you guys think.

lonely tiger