GA: Hello everyone! Well, here is my first fanfic that I am posting on Fanfiction.net. I am counting on you reviewers to help me out with a little problem. You see, I have the basic plot down, but I need suggestions for who Rei and Makoto should go with. Thanks! ^_^
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Prologue
Smoke rose from the ashes of those fallen. The great battle between the demon queen Metallia had taken its toll on the people of the Silver Millieumn. The woman walked past the fallen towards to of the living on the field. She watched as her two youngest sons sobbed over the bodies of the two they had loved the most.
Proud Seiryuu of Jupiter, cried over the body of his one pride and joy. His leather wings were drawn protectively around her. Princess Makoto Kino had fallen in battle, drained of her power, and with a spear in her side. Her beautiful green hair was stained with blood, and her eyes dulled.
His brother Suzaku of Mars cried over his fire child. Like her cousin, Rei Hino had used a forbidden attack, and she had fallen as well with an arrow through the heart. Her red hair no longer shone, and her blood was cold.
The two girls had called on their forbidden attacks which had weakened Metallia, allowing them to win the battle.
flashback:
ÒEnjoying yourself, Rei?Ó yelled Makoto as one of the demons hit her in the stomach.
Rei laughed. ÒBut of course, Makoto! We should defiantly do this more often!Ó
Makoto smirked in triumph as she killed the demon who had hurt her. Her eyes flickered over to where Queen Serenity was fighting the demon queen. Dread came over her. The queen of the moon was in pain, and she wouldnÕt be able to use the full power of the imperial silver crystal. Rei also seemed to be having those small thoughts.
As they both looked at one another, and nodded. They began pulling all of their magic together, calling on their planets to help them. At the same time they attacked.
ÒMARS FIRE BIRD SOUL!!!!!Ó
ÒJUPITER THUNDER DRAGON!!!!!Ó
A bird of fire rose out of ReiÕs body, and a dragon of lightning burst painfully out of MakotoÕs. The two attacks flew towards Metallia attacking her. Metallia screamed as she started to burn. All the fighting had stopped, as everyone watched the two creatures of legend battle off the demon queen.
Too late, Suzaku realized where they had come from. ÒRei! Makoto! Stop it! YouÕll kill yourself!Ó
Seiryuu also took up the cry, fearful for his daughterÕs life. But the two girls refused to stop. Unfortunately, SuzakuÕs cry had alerted MetalliaÕs minions.
Rei gave a strangled cry as an arrow struck her in the heart. She fell to the ground, and the phenix disappeared. Makoto stood over Rei, letting her enjoy her last moments alive. The dragon became stronger, as MakotoÕs thirst for revenge grew.
One of the demonÕs threw a spear into her side, and she screamed in pain. In anguish, she sent the dragon flying through the armies, killing everyone it touched. But soon she too fell to the ground, too weak to stand any longer.
At that moment, Serenity managed to seal Metallia and all her demons away. Using her crystal, she performed her last miracle. She sent her daughter and her friendÕs souls to the future.
end flashback.
Taiitsukun placed a hand on both her sonÕs shoulders. ÒCome, let us leave this place, I know a place where we can go, but first you must take on another form.Ó
Her sons nodded, and their forms began to change. Suzaku was turned into a phonix, and Seiryuu into a dragon. They both stared at their new forms in a small pool of water close by.
ÒSo we shall never forget what happened here, shall we? We will always be cursed to remember our daughterÕs last battle.Ó muttered Seiryuu, bitterly.
ÒCome my sons, we must leave now.Ó
A portal opened up infront of them, and Taiitsukun walked through, followed by her four sons. A turtle. A tiger. A phenix. A dragon.
Meanwhile, 10 souls would be reborn in another time and place.
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Prologue
Smoke rose from the ashes of those fallen. The great battle between the demon queen Metallia had taken its toll on the people of the Silver Millieumn. The woman walked past the fallen towards to of the living on the field. She watched as her two youngest sons sobbed over the bodies of the two they had loved the most.
Proud Seiryuu of Jupiter, cried over the body of his one pride and joy. His leather wings were drawn protectively around her. Princess Makoto Kino had fallen in battle, drained of her power, and with a spear in her side. Her beautiful green hair was stained with blood, and her eyes dulled.
His brother Suzaku of Mars cried over his fire child. Like her cousin, Rei Hino had used a forbidden attack, and she had fallen as well with an arrow through the heart. Her red hair no longer shone, and her blood was cold.
The two girls had called on their forbidden attacks which had weakened Metallia, allowing them to win the battle.
flashback:
ÒEnjoying yourself, Rei?Ó yelled Makoto as one of the demons hit her in the stomach.
Rei laughed. ÒBut of course, Makoto! We should defiantly do this more often!Ó
Makoto smirked in triumph as she killed the demon who had hurt her. Her eyes flickered over to where Queen Serenity was fighting the demon queen. Dread came over her. The queen of the moon was in pain, and she wouldnÕt be able to use the full power of the imperial silver crystal. Rei also seemed to be having those small thoughts.
As they both looked at one another, and nodded. They began pulling all of their magic together, calling on their planets to help them. At the same time they attacked.
ÒMARS FIRE BIRD SOUL!!!!!Ó
ÒJUPITER THUNDER DRAGON!!!!!Ó
A bird of fire rose out of ReiÕs body, and a dragon of lightning burst painfully out of MakotoÕs. The two attacks flew towards Metallia attacking her. Metallia screamed as she started to burn. All the fighting had stopped, as everyone watched the two creatures of legend battle off the demon queen.
Too late, Suzaku realized where they had come from. ÒRei! Makoto! Stop it! YouÕll kill yourself!Ó
Seiryuu also took up the cry, fearful for his daughterÕs life. But the two girls refused to stop. Unfortunately, SuzakuÕs cry had alerted MetalliaÕs minions.
Rei gave a strangled cry as an arrow struck her in the heart. She fell to the ground, and the phenix disappeared. Makoto stood over Rei, letting her enjoy her last moments alive. The dragon became stronger, as MakotoÕs thirst for revenge grew.
One of the demonÕs threw a spear into her side, and she screamed in pain. In anguish, she sent the dragon flying through the armies, killing everyone it touched. But soon she too fell to the ground, too weak to stand any longer.
At that moment, Serenity managed to seal Metallia and all her demons away. Using her crystal, she performed her last miracle. She sent her daughter and her friendÕs souls to the future.
end flashback.
Taiitsukun placed a hand on both her sonÕs shoulders. ÒCome, let us leave this place, I know a place where we can go, but first you must take on another form.Ó
Her sons nodded, and their forms began to change. Suzaku was turned into a phonix, and Seiryuu into a dragon. They both stared at their new forms in a small pool of water close by.
ÒSo we shall never forget what happened here, shall we? We will always be cursed to remember our daughterÕs last battle.Ó muttered Seiryuu, bitterly.
ÒCome my sons, we must leave now.Ó
A portal opened up infront of them, and Taiitsukun walked through, followed by her four sons. A turtle. A tiger. A phenix. A dragon.
Meanwhile, 10 souls would be reborn in another time and place.
