Chapter 1 Training

It was a sunny day in Ooo, prefect for sword training. "Elizabeth, First part of sword training you will have to first learn how to hold a sword safely" finn said to me. "Ok" I said. You see I am another human that finn and jake found in the forest fighting a monkey dog thing and losing the battle because I did not know how to use a sword. I have blond hair, hazel eyes, skin like finn's, ware brown clothes so I can camouflage, and I am 11. "So, like this" I asked careering the sword with my two hands away from my body. "Ya, like that" finn said. "Now what do I do" I asked. "You swing it at this dummy we made for training" finn said. "Ok" I said as I ran towards the dummy then slashing it into little wood blocks.


How is that for the first chapter?