Hello! SM and MP here! This is our first FanFiction, and constructive criticism would be WONDERFUL! House of Hades spoilers, be aware!

Disclaimer: If we owned PJO, it would not be the lovely thing it is now... So, we don't own it, no matter how much force we use... Wait! Did we say that out loud?


Prologue

A soft breeze rustles the trees on the shore of Ogygia. Walking out in sandals, a beautiful, cinnamon haired girl steps out into the sun. A new wave sweeps across the pale sand, leaving behind shells, silt and a bottle. The girl slowly kneels down, the white skirt of her chiton in hand. Inside, there is a golden-orange, slightly singed piece of paper.

Out comes the cork with a pop! The tube of paper falls into the soft palm her the girls hand. Unrolling the paper, she sighs. The warm sun bathes her in a golden glow, reminding her of someone who left, with a promise. The paper was worn and oddly colored writing drifted across the page in an untidy scrawl. Slight singe marks ring the edge.

Dear Calypso,


And Scene... So there is the first chapter of our In a Bottle fanfiction! We hope you enjoyed. We would love, love, LOVE constructive criticism, so we can improve our writing. Don't worry, the next chapter will be longer.