This is note or less a test to show the revised Version. Chances are I'll go back and add the scenes I skipped it people want me to but please review and tell me what you think. I hope you enjoy this and I plan to update as soon as possible.
Two young looking girls were riding in a car without a word being spoken. That is until one of the girls asked"Are you excited?"
This girl is Lily May. A sixteen year old girl who, although she does not look like it, can and will knock your butt out if you anger her. Especially if you call out her flat chest. She wore a shirt much like Yui's but it wasn't sweater like and was a light blue with dark colored stripes and faded blue jeans with brown boots. She has navy blue hair flipped over to the right with royal blue eyes.
"A little. To tell the truth, I'm a bit nervous." This was spoken by Yui Komori. A girl with light blonde hair and a sweet personality. "But, where is Luna?"
"I'm here." A voice popped into the conversation. Both girls jumped to the other side of the seat, not expecting the appearance of said person. A laugh sounded through the backseat as black petals flew around.
Once they vanished, a pale girl with long, white hair styled in pigtails with long black ribbons and lavender eyes with matching fox ears and a fluffy tail. Her outfit consisted of a black dress with loose sleeves that hung low on her shoulders and chest with a skirt reached mid thigh and trailed behind her in the back. She completed her look with a black chocker with a bell, striped lavender and black socks, and over the knee black combat boots. "Someone was hungry, so we went to find a little snack." She gestured to a stuffed fox with a ribbon tied in a bow on its neck on her head with a fake anger.
Then she yarned, allowing Lily and Yui to see her pearly white fangs that reminded them of a cat. "Did we have to leave during the day? I mean its so bright!" Luna was a rare demon, a hybrid of snake and fox and as such, preffed not to be oit during the day. Yui knows something is different About Luna but doesn't know what she is.
Lily talked with a tone as though talking to a child, which personality wise, wasn't too far off, Lily said in a comforting voice " Because unlike you, these are normal people, you know. People who are awake during the day and sleep at night." Towards the end of the conversation her voice took on a more playful tone.
"You're one to talk, Ms. I have inhuman strength and am a giant pervert!"
"And who's fault is it that?"
Whatever attitude filled response Luna was about to say was interrupted by Yui rolling down the window. Amazement filled her eyes as she slightly leaned out the window and looked at the mansion. Soon they had arrived and got out the car. They got their bags out and the car zoomed away.
As they began their slow walk to the door, it started to rain. "Its raining!" Luna's fur stood on end as she let out a hiss.
Then a loud boom of thunder sent them running to the door. As they were running, Luna used her magic to hold her bag on her head. Lily and Yui both slowed down to get their suitcases to go over the steps, before Yui knocked. No one answered so Yui called out "Hello!"
Lily turned to Luna. "Can't you just teleport inside to open the door?"
"No. I have to know what the place looks like before I teleport otherwise something bad may happen."
Lily walked up to the door by Yui and tried to open the door. However the second her fingers touched the door knob, the door opened. Yui and Lily jumped slightly back and Luna's ears perked up. Yui shyly walked into the house. Lily soon followed with careful glances to each side. Last was Luna who silently shut the door.
"Excuse me, is anyone home?" Yui asked as she paused her walking.
Lily, being the one who hated being suprised and\or scared, said nervously with a slightly scared giggle "Thats funny. Maybe they weren't told we were coming?"
They countinued walking before they stopped by the stairs. "Hello?" Yui tried once more.
"Maybe we should split up? I can investigate up stairs." She didn't wait for a response as she ascended the stairs, leaving her bags at the base of the stairs. Yui, after a flash of lightning saw a boy, and decided to go that way as Lily went the opposite way.
(Since we all know how this scene goes, I'm gonna skip to what changed)
Yui intruduces herself as Lily comes in, not noticing the boys at first. "Yui? Did you-" She then noticed everyone. "I guess you did. I'm Lily May."
Yui continued. "My father said we were supposed to live here."
Reji responded with "I heard nothing of the sort." Before turning to Ayato. "Ayato. Explain this to me."
"How should I know? You never said anything about that, Pancake."
"Thats because you attacked me out of no where! Wait! Did you say Pancake? Are you talking about me?"
"Of course I'm talking about you, stupid. You're as flat as pancake." Then he turned towards Lily. "You, too. You're just as flat as her!"
Reji, as though he didn't her at any of the last conversation, "I wasn't informed of this."
Yui turned to him. "Excuse me, but who are you?"
"We shouldn't talk out here. Come with me. Take care of their luggage." He turned and walked down the hall. Yui gasped, looked at Ayato, and ran. Lily had her fists clenched and felt like punching him but decided against it for now and ran after them.
Yui and Lily and sitting next to each other on the sofa as Reji begins with "Now, in the interest of formality, let us begin by having both of you tell us about yourselves and how you came to enter this house. "
Yui started. "Um, right, I …"
She, however, was interrupted by a voice saying What have we here? Is it true? Are there really two cute little human girls here?"
Then that guy was startled as a voice behind him said while mocking his tone of voice " What have we here? Is it true? Is there really a perverted little vampire here?" He turned around, shock filling his features as he was met with the sight of Luna standing there with a smirk on her face.
Reji then turned to them and asked " And you are?"
Luna vanished in her flurry of black petals before appearing in front of him. She held out a hand. "Luna Anei. I'm the other girl who shall be staying here."
She shook his hand just as Yui gasped. Luna quickly turned around.
A purple haired vampire licked her check. "She's sweet." Lily jumped over, hoping he wouldn't lick her to, but was too slow.
The perverted vampire with the hat had appeared behind her and got her. "She's not sweet." Lily turned to swing at him but he moved.
"Now you two," began Reji. " Don't you think that behavior is impolite to two girls you just met?"
The pervert continued. "What? But doesn't everyone want to taste something that looks yummy? Don't you Kanato?"
It was at this moment Luna noticed the bear in Kanato's arms. She once again vanished in petals. This time she appeared next to him. "Aw! Thats a cute bear. Kanato, right? Whats his name?"
He didn't have the chance to answer because Ayato interrupted. "Yours truley saw Pancake first. Yours truely will be her first everything. "
"Lame."A new voice said. "I'm so sick of you calling yourself yours truely."
(The next part goes on like normal until)
"I thought it smelled like human in here. So it was you. How dare you interrupt my precious sleep?" A white haired boy said.
"How dare she interrupt your precious sleep? " Luna mimed back to him with a cruel smirk. "I'm sorry, but do explain. How did she interrupt your sleep? Did she walk up to your room and drag you down here? Or did she somehow mind control your weak mind into coming down here? Last time I checked she didn't." They thought she was done until she turned to Lily with a knowing smile and said "Oh and Lily, close your mouth or you'll catch flies. And is that drool I see?"
Lily's face lite up as she said "Shut up!"
Yui, trying to avoid conflict, asked "How did you get in?"
Instead of answering, he punched a wall and said "My question first!"
Luna couldn't resist laughing. "Anger issues much?"
Reji said "Does anyone know anything about the ladies who has come to live with us?
"Are you three the women he mentioned?" A new voice asked.
Reji being the one of the few of not the only one still trying to figure out the truth then asked "Shu, do you know something about these girls?"
( The next part also continued like the anime until..)
"That means we're gonna have a very long relationship with her." Laito, being the pervert we know he is, said.
"Wow! Lily, I think I found someone who is a bigger pervert than you! Where are the flying pigs?" Luna jokingly said as she threw herself onto the back of the couch with a cupcake from god knows where.
(Back to the anime, throughout the phone scene)
[The next scene continues like the anime but kana to is by Luna]
Luna quickly turned to Kanato with a Cheshire cat smile. "So thats why you smelled strange. Yui, you were right. By human standards they are weird. But that's because they are not humans. They're all vampires!"
Laito backed up from Yui. "You say that as though you're not human. "
Luna smiled showing off her fangs and flashing her eyes. Then all nine tails revealed themselves as a strange aura flowed around the room. "Thats because I'm not human." She took a step forward resulting in things lifting off the ground. "I'm a demon. "
"Luna! You've proved your point! Thats enough!" Lily called out. She had instinctively got closer to Yui as if to protect her.
"Huh?" Luna reverted back to normal as everything settled back down. "Sorry. There was so much chaos, I couldn't resist. "
