Dismantle Me
Author's note: So I finally got around to do something with this account, I've had this account for about 4 years and never did anything with it. Well that's going to change now, decided I'd start writing. This is the first story I've ever written so enjoy and leave me some tips on how to improve my writing if you'd like.
Little bit about the story: I've always been interested in the darker, more emotional stories here on fanfiction . net and I want this one to be just like that. This is going to be a Makorra fanfic with some Noatak/Amon x Korra in there (don't worry it's not that bad, they're both the same age in this story). It's rated M for violence, swearing and maybe a lemon later on because everybody loves a good love making session. Also this story is set in a modern AU.
Enjoy!
Korra's POV:
Cold. Wet.
I could feel something constantly touching my face, it was as if the darkness roughly caressed me into an eternal sleep.
Death. Numb.
I tried to move but for some reason I couldn't, I panicked.
Dark. Afraid.
I could distinguish a pattern, some sort of tempo in the wet substance that was hitting my face constantly as I could hear the wind picking up speed around me.
I tried my best to make out what the hell was hitting me so hard, but I just couldn't yet tell what it was. Was it rain perhaps? Snow even?
As I slowly opened my eyes I realized it had been the icy snow combined with the restless wind that had been tormenting me for the past few minutes. As the snow continued to fall on my face I turned my thoughts from snow to more pressing concerns. Like that fact that I was sitting against a tree covered in what seemed to be snow along with a red substance
that was dripping from my lip.
"Blood?" I thought. I wiped the liquid of my lip, it felt warm and runny. "Jep, most definitely blood."
I tried to keep my cool. "Don't panic Korra, remember your training." I took a deep breath. As I exhaled I scanned my surroundings. A small frozen lake, lots of trees, and a little path behind the lake.
" Where the hell am I?" I decided not to focus on that question. The more important thing was to check on myself first in case I was hurt.
I looked down to my legs. By the look of it I had been here for a while since I almost couldn't see my legs anymore due to the snow that had covered them.
I slowly moved both of my legs so the snow would fall off and I could try to stand up, as I did I could feel that my muscles had become stiff from sitting here too long.
I noticed something didn't feel right. As I touched the area of my left rib, I winced in pain. I could feel that one of my ribs was broken and there was a big superficial wound on top of the broken rib.
"Dammit!" I cursed.
When I finally got up, I scanned my surroundings for a second time. I noticed it was nighttime.
" How did I get here?" I tried my best to remember but still felt a little bit dizzy.
As I looked to my right I saw tire tracks that led from the old path to a nearby tree.
Suddenly I remembered. "Noatak." I whispered.
He drove me here. I remember getting into a fight with him. That explains my bleeding lip.
" Son of a bitch. " I cursed between my teeth. I was going to make him pay, that's for sure.
But first I had to get out of here or I would freeze to death. I started moving forward but immediately had to stop. It felt like the wound was being ripped open every time I took a step.
"Fuck." I didn't know what to do. I felt so helpless, so alone, abandoned, left behind. I could go on with listing all my emotions but I had to move and quick.
"Fuck." I said again, only this time louder.
I don't know why I thought it was a good idea to start yelling in the middle of an empty forest but I did.
"Help, can somebody, anybody hear me?!"
Silence.
A waited a couple seconds, but nothing happened. I gave up and if it weren't bad enough already, I started feeling dizzy again.
As I touched my wound again I knew why I was feeling dizzy, I had lost a huge amount of blood and the wound was still bleeding.
Before I could regain my strength to start walking again I felt like the world was being swept away from under my feet. I fell down and everything went blackā¦
And that is chapter 1! Hope you enjoyed it so far!
As for chapter 2, I'm thinking about updating this story weekly, but if someone wants me to update asap, I'll do my best.
Stay awesome and have a great day!
~ ThreeToOne
