Disclaimer: HP and its universe belong to JKR. I just take them and let my
fantasies play a little with them for my own amusement. I do not even
intend making money of this.
A/N: This is my first attempt to write something like a fan fiction. It turned out being a poem but I think that's ok for the beginning. However, I have to warn you that English is not my mother tongue so there might be quite a lot of mistakes. Please overread them.
I always liked the idea of Severus Snape loving Lily Evans or that they might have been a couple at some time. This is written from his POV, I don't know when. Might be in their school days. Maybe later.
To Lily
Like emeralds
On a starlit night
Who haunt me
Like fire
With its licking tongues
Which play around me
Like velvet
On sore skin
That caresses me
Like cherries
On a warm summer's night
That never satiate me
Like music
From another sphere
That hypnotises me
Like perfume
A kind of drug
That bewitches me
Like crystal
In its pure clarity
That catches me inside it
So are you
Most wonderful of all flowers
Even if another one might pick
You still remain for ever mine
Please review so I can have an idea where to improve. I accept positive as well as negative critics. Severina
A/N: This is my first attempt to write something like a fan fiction. It turned out being a poem but I think that's ok for the beginning. However, I have to warn you that English is not my mother tongue so there might be quite a lot of mistakes. Please overread them.
I always liked the idea of Severus Snape loving Lily Evans or that they might have been a couple at some time. This is written from his POV, I don't know when. Might be in their school days. Maybe later.
To Lily
Like emeralds
On a starlit night
Who haunt me
Like fire
With its licking tongues
Which play around me
Like velvet
On sore skin
That caresses me
Like cherries
On a warm summer's night
That never satiate me
Like music
From another sphere
That hypnotises me
Like perfume
A kind of drug
That bewitches me
Like crystal
In its pure clarity
That catches me inside it
So are you
Most wonderful of all flowers
Even if another one might pick
You still remain for ever mine
Please review so I can have an idea where to improve. I accept positive as well as negative critics. Severina
