Okay, people, here's the scoop: I tend to make up a spaycial (funnyword) character in my head and kind of push her into the story lines.Which is one reason why I take so long to read books. Because I'm constantly jumping up and creating my own lines for my character. Here's a perfectly good example. This story is about a girl named Niki Rettop. She has this fantastic ability of being able to transform into one of the elements of which there are five. She is Heart. There is also Water, Air, Earth and Fire. There can only be ONE heart element..er during a lifetime, and there can only be TWO different other elementers for the other four. Now, the majority of Elemental lore will be explained in the story, granted that you all like it enough for me to continue.And you don't care if I change a few lines of the book. Its not that Harry Potter NEEDS To be changed, I love the books as much as the next bloke, but I'd just like to get my story out there, you know? So, here it is, the first chapter of........
Harry Potter and the Elements
Scene: this is when Harry is speaking to the order of Phoenix.
"You have been telling people haven't you?"
Sirius opened his mouth to answer, but another voice chimed in, one that hadn't been heard before.
"We've been trying to, but people will only believe so much Harry." The voice was destinctly American, but it had a slight british tone to it. Harry turned to see who had spoken. It was a girl, with light brown hair, and startling green eyes that shone behind glasses as she leaned against the door frame. She wore muggle clothes that had the air of robes, but still passed in their world. A wand poked out of her pocket, and she touched it reasuringly as she straightned up and nodded to the memembers of the Order.
"Was your trip sucessfull?" Lupin asked the girl.
"Sure, if you call sucessfull almost being caught and having to apparate in a second flat. But, I did get the item you requested, so... yes." They all blinked. Americans did talk very fast.
"YES" she said clearly, and slowly. Sirius nodded and stood up.
"I'd like a word with Nik, if you all could fill Harry in" They nodded, and continued their conversation about what they'd been doing the past summer, as The girl called Nik and Sirius left the room. Harry watched the doorway for a few seconds, then turned back to the Order. Sirius plodded back in a few minutes later, followed by Nik, who walked around the table and stood behind Bill as the conversation continued to Voldemort.
"That's enough information I think," Mrs. Weasley said from the shadows "I want you all in bed Now."
"you can't boss us-"fred began, but Mrs. Weasley cut him off.
"watch me. You might as well induct Harry and the rest with all you've told him."
"I'll join! I want to join" Harry said, with exitement.
"NO." Lupin pronounced. "The Order is only made up of overage wizards. Wizards, who are out of School." he said distinctly to Fred and George.
"What about Niki then?" George asked. The Order all glared at him, obviously not wanting Harry to notice, nor know about her.
"She is a HUGE exception. Besides, she is an elemental,she has powers none of you could grasp."
"I wouldn't say that, Remus. Even if they can't have the power, I'm sure they could understand the leathalness of it." Niki added.
"Any discussion or demenstration will HAVE to wait till morning." Mrs. Weasley said fearcly.
"Molly's right,"Lupin stood up, and begrugingly, everyone else did too. Fred, George, Ron, Hermione, and Harry all plodded off to bed, Niki trailing behind.
"No talking, straight to bed with you all."
They walked up to the second landing after leaving Hermione and Niki off at the first.
"good night Ron, Harry"
"Night"
"Sleep tight" Fred Winked.
Ron went tossed some owl treats on the wardrobe, then bolted the door.
"Kreacher,"He muttered. "Don't want to wake up to him rousing about."
They began wispering about what they heard.There was a break in the conversation, and Harry asked:
"Ron, what's an elemental?"
"OH, you mean Niki? It really cool, she can like, controll people's will and stuff. Really neat, I only saw a bit of it, but I wasn't supposed to. Mum got really mad at me then, and you should see when Kreacher tries to take anything of mum's. Its scary."
"Why is she in the Order?"
"well, as far as I can reckon, she's so supernatural and all they want to keep close tabs on her, so she doesn't go over to HIM. Not that she would, You-know-who killed her parents, she hates him more than you do I think. And she's a dead good witch. Probably better than Hermione. She knows all this stuff about apaparating and wizard history and everything, even potions. especially about her element stuff. Ask her about it, you'll get the full detail. Plus, she already has her aparating liscense. Got it early, lucky devil. I'll tell you more in the morning Harry, right now, I'm dead tired."
"right, thanks, good night Ron"
There was a loud CRACK and Ron screamed, but it was muffled by some one's hand.
"QUiet you! You want to wake the whole house?" Came Fred's voice from Ron's bed. Someone crossed the room and sat on the edge of Harry's bed.
"You apparated on my KNEES"'
"Sorry, its harder in the dark."
George laughed slightly, and then asked them "So ,have you got there yet?"
"YOu mean about the weapon Sirius metioned?" Harry asked,
"Yup."
" Suppose he's already got it?"Ron asked
"I doubt that, or they wouldn't be lookin' for it. And, Niki wouldn't be gone half the time lookin for old relics to help in the battle"
"Oh, yes, Can't forget about Poor Niki, can we George?" Harry could almost see George blush as he threw one of Harry's shoes at Fred.
"Can't forget about beautiful Niki, not even in your sleep. Always muttering her name. Keeps me awake all the time"
"stuff it Fred"
They spoke in quiet wispers about what they had heard in that room, until they heard Mrs. Weasley thundering up the stairs.
"MUM!"
CRACK. they were gone.
Harry fell into sleep, and into his dreams.....
So, what do you think so far? Here's the deal, I'll do 3 chapters, and then you can tell me to sod off or not right? Right.
MOre of Niki in later chapters. Next chapter really.
later days.
"As they said"
Harry Potter and the Elements
Scene: this is when Harry is speaking to the order of Phoenix.
"You have been telling people haven't you?"
Sirius opened his mouth to answer, but another voice chimed in, one that hadn't been heard before.
"We've been trying to, but people will only believe so much Harry." The voice was destinctly American, but it had a slight british tone to it. Harry turned to see who had spoken. It was a girl, with light brown hair, and startling green eyes that shone behind glasses as she leaned against the door frame. She wore muggle clothes that had the air of robes, but still passed in their world. A wand poked out of her pocket, and she touched it reasuringly as she straightned up and nodded to the memembers of the Order.
"Was your trip sucessfull?" Lupin asked the girl.
"Sure, if you call sucessfull almost being caught and having to apparate in a second flat. But, I did get the item you requested, so... yes." They all blinked. Americans did talk very fast.
"YES" she said clearly, and slowly. Sirius nodded and stood up.
"I'd like a word with Nik, if you all could fill Harry in" They nodded, and continued their conversation about what they'd been doing the past summer, as The girl called Nik and Sirius left the room. Harry watched the doorway for a few seconds, then turned back to the Order. Sirius plodded back in a few minutes later, followed by Nik, who walked around the table and stood behind Bill as the conversation continued to Voldemort.
"That's enough information I think," Mrs. Weasley said from the shadows "I want you all in bed Now."
"you can't boss us-"fred began, but Mrs. Weasley cut him off.
"watch me. You might as well induct Harry and the rest with all you've told him."
"I'll join! I want to join" Harry said, with exitement.
"NO." Lupin pronounced. "The Order is only made up of overage wizards. Wizards, who are out of School." he said distinctly to Fred and George.
"What about Niki then?" George asked. The Order all glared at him, obviously not wanting Harry to notice, nor know about her.
"She is a HUGE exception. Besides, she is an elemental,she has powers none of you could grasp."
"I wouldn't say that, Remus. Even if they can't have the power, I'm sure they could understand the leathalness of it." Niki added.
"Any discussion or demenstration will HAVE to wait till morning." Mrs. Weasley said fearcly.
"Molly's right,"Lupin stood up, and begrugingly, everyone else did too. Fred, George, Ron, Hermione, and Harry all plodded off to bed, Niki trailing behind.
"No talking, straight to bed with you all."
They walked up to the second landing after leaving Hermione and Niki off at the first.
"good night Ron, Harry"
"Night"
"Sleep tight" Fred Winked.
Ron went tossed some owl treats on the wardrobe, then bolted the door.
"Kreacher,"He muttered. "Don't want to wake up to him rousing about."
They began wispering about what they heard.There was a break in the conversation, and Harry asked:
"Ron, what's an elemental?"
"OH, you mean Niki? It really cool, she can like, controll people's will and stuff. Really neat, I only saw a bit of it, but I wasn't supposed to. Mum got really mad at me then, and you should see when Kreacher tries to take anything of mum's. Its scary."
"Why is she in the Order?"
"well, as far as I can reckon, she's so supernatural and all they want to keep close tabs on her, so she doesn't go over to HIM. Not that she would, You-know-who killed her parents, she hates him more than you do I think. And she's a dead good witch. Probably better than Hermione. She knows all this stuff about apaparating and wizard history and everything, even potions. especially about her element stuff. Ask her about it, you'll get the full detail. Plus, she already has her aparating liscense. Got it early, lucky devil. I'll tell you more in the morning Harry, right now, I'm dead tired."
"right, thanks, good night Ron"
There was a loud CRACK and Ron screamed, but it was muffled by some one's hand.
"QUiet you! You want to wake the whole house?" Came Fred's voice from Ron's bed. Someone crossed the room and sat on the edge of Harry's bed.
"You apparated on my KNEES"'
"Sorry, its harder in the dark."
George laughed slightly, and then asked them "So ,have you got there yet?"
"YOu mean about the weapon Sirius metioned?" Harry asked,
"Yup."
" Suppose he's already got it?"Ron asked
"I doubt that, or they wouldn't be lookin' for it. And, Niki wouldn't be gone half the time lookin for old relics to help in the battle"
"Oh, yes, Can't forget about Poor Niki, can we George?" Harry could almost see George blush as he threw one of Harry's shoes at Fred.
"Can't forget about beautiful Niki, not even in your sleep. Always muttering her name. Keeps me awake all the time"
"stuff it Fred"
They spoke in quiet wispers about what they had heard in that room, until they heard Mrs. Weasley thundering up the stairs.
"MUM!"
CRACK. they were gone.
Harry fell into sleep, and into his dreams.....
So, what do you think so far? Here's the deal, I'll do 3 chapters, and then you can tell me to sod off or not right? Right.
MOre of Niki in later chapters. Next chapter really.
later days.
"As they said"
