Hai,this is my first you like it.
Daisuke and his friend are in the digital world. They have a picnic with thr digimon. Taichi and the other also here. They all having really fun but until... a loud sound came from the west.
''What is that sound?'' ask Miyako in the shock.
''I don't know. But it came for the west,''answer Ken
''Let's go! Who knows maybe a digimon in dangerous,''say Daisuke while he's running.
''Daisuke! Wait for me!''say Veemon while running toward his patners.
''Daisuke, wait for us!''ask Iori.
''Fine. Hurry up!''he stop running and wait his friend while they still far from him. Iori come first,''Daisuke, you run... so fast...uh hah uh hah.''Iori fell very tired all that run.
''Iori, do you have some water,''ask Armordimon ( if I was right about his name).
''Here,''Iori give a bottle of water for Armordimon.''Thanks Iori''say Armordimon.
''There you guy are,''say Mimi along with Palmon, Koushirou, Tentomon, Taichi, Agumon, Hikari, Tailmon, Takeru, Patamon, Miyako, Hawkmon, Ken, Wormmon, Yamato and Gabumon.
'' That longer than I thought,"say Daisuke to try annoying people
"And, you have to learn to wait people,"say angry Yamato.
"Now, do you know where the sound came from?''ask Taichi. Koushirou open his computer and he was shocked.
"Wow,there is a weird area. It straight a head."Koushirou point ahead.
They all ran ahead and saw something. It like a machine. It look it's doesn't work any more.
"Hei Koushirou, do you what is this?" asked Hikari.
"Hei, there a word that I can understand,"say Ken.
"What is it Ken,"asked Miyako toward Ken.
"It say 'The Time Past Live'. What it means?"ask Mimi towardthe other. All the sudden, the machine start to move. They all shock."Why this machine move?"ask everybody was thinking, they head Daisuke.
"What did this button do,''Veemon almost press it...
"DAISUKE, VEEMON WHY YOU... wait did you say button?"ask Miyako."Yay... this button say 'replay',"Daisuke answer it."Hey Veemon, try pressing it,"ask Patamon."Okey then". A voice recorder was played.
"I...I...I...rissss...rissss,"a voice of a man was try to say try to make it clear sound."I...risss... RUN NOWWWW." Everyone was shock."What was that"
Sorry but I have to find more idea.
