Yes, I finally did it. This is my new story. Hope you enjoy. All human no wings. I changed the ages around a lot. Max Fang Iggy Nudge-16 Ella-13 Angel Gazzy-8. On to the story.


"No"

"Maxie come on"

"I am not going"

"Ugh, your sooo stubborn"

"And your annoying"

"Please" Bambi eyes

I can't resist bambi eyes

"Fine but nothing pink"

"OK!"

And that my friends is Ella my baby sister. I'll explain myself. I'm Maximum (Max) Ride. I'm 16 a Sophomore at Coronado High School in Scottsdale,AZ. I live with my mom Valencia Martinez. My 'dad' is underneath a jail. He was a wack job sisters are Angel and Ella and my bother is Cody but everyone calls him Gazzy. My bestfriend Nick (Fang) Smith. My close friends Jeff (Iggy) Smith. Monique (Nudge) Franta . My boyfriend is Dylan Monroy. Thats my life. Right now my Sister Ella is making me let her dress me for the first day of school. Ugh everyones so dramatic. It's just the first day of school. She said to flaten my hair so thats what I'm doing right now.

"And finished" Ella said proudly

"Oh my god" I said in amazment

"I know right!" Ella exclaimed

"This is amazing"

"Wow Max its cool to hear YOU say that Ms. I-Don't-care-for-clothes"

Ok so I don't care but this was amazing. I was expecting a dress,heels,and makeup. Nope. I got my favorite shirt. A Batman shirt with ripped skinny jeans and my DC* sneakers. Right now I love Ella.

"Thank you so much Ella." i gave her a quick hug and then pushed her out to change. After I changed I looked in my mirror. I love this look. I went down stairs and took some bacon mom made.

"Honey you look..."

"I owe it all to Ella"

"Really?"

"Really"

"She didn't make you...girly"

"I know I love her when shes like this"

"OK hurry up before your late and you need to take Ella to school, I already dropped Angel and Gazzy off"

"OK mom will due"

"Thank you"

"Yep" I walked to the end of the stairs.

"ELLA" I screamed

"WHAT" she screamed back

"We need to leave"I said now seeing that she was right there

"Ok I'm coming"

"Hurry"

"Mkay"

I hurried up and brushed my teeth and hair one more time. Ella still wasn't down here and ready.

"Ella come on"

"Kay coming"

she came down and was nothing but pink. Pink shirt pink skirt and pink flats.

"Wow you give me a headache"

"Ha ha Max very funny"

After that we went and got inot the car and left. I pulled into her schools parking lot and she took off. Oh well she was here so i left. When I got to school all I saw was a bunch of students.

"Hey" Fang said

"Hey" I said

"Where are hte others" Fang said

"I was just about to ask" I said

"Maaaaax" Nudge called

"I think there over there" I said pointing

"No duh" Fang said

"Don't get all smart with me"

"OOOO I'm so scared"

"RAWR" I said

We busted out laughing. See I love times like these. We walked over to are friends and family.(Nudge and Iggy). Then she showed up.

"Hello" Lissa said. We were enemies. I just don't like her. She was Fang's girl. He could do much better though. She dresses like a slut. I mean can those shorts get any smaller. No.

"Hi" everyone said but didn't want to. I just stood there. She had Fang wrapped around her finger. She just took him away from us like that.

"I hate Lissa" Nudge said

"Join the club" me and Iggy said at the same time.

Thats it for now! Hope you enjoyed it. Let me know about anything just pm me or review. speaking abot reviews can i get some maybe. 3

~Luna