Disclaimer:
I do not own the characters of Harry Potter, these belong to that wonderful author JK Rowling and the various publishing companies used to publish her works. I am however borrowing them, no not to make money but for fun and fun only.
Summary:
How My Immortal should have ended if I had my say. Most of you will thank me, no really you will. Rated for violence and horrible fashion.
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Her name was Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way, and that was only the first thing wrong with her. The second was how she dressed, when she thought she could get away with it she would ditch her Hogwarts robes and go about clad like a two bit whores from hell. That infamous day she was clad in a black leather corset with black lace at the top, a black leather mini skirt, pink fishnet stockings and black combat boots. Her hair was dyed an unattractive wear combination of black with pink, green, blue and yellow dyed tips. She had red eye shadow and black lipstick and despite the cold of winter this was al she wore. Even whores in Knockturn Alley had more self respect and would not dress as she would.
She was out in the snow and a pale young man with short white blond hair with pale gray eyes smiled as she came up. He was clad in a school uniform and had the look of one who is enthralled with someone. In fact he was, he was enthralled with Ebony, but not in love, she had a hold over him and one that was very unhealthy. Draco Malfoy deserved a lot of things but a slutty vampire was not one of them. But he could not help himself and had no choice but to stay with Ebony. The only thing the really had in common was music but nothing else even though they were both in Slytherin though no-one could remember when she had joined even though she clamed to be a seventh year.
Things were very grim as it was not bad enough there was Ebony Dark-ness Dementia Raven Way, no there was Willow, Wandering Temptress Stone. She was too thin, wore much the same as Ebony and was not liked at all really. The professors had tried to get rid of them but had not been able and they were at a loss as what to do about the whores, I mean student whores, what ever, they had to go! They were distracting and slutty and who knew how many diseases they had with all the boys they had seduced and had sex with. They were not even eighteen and it was rumored they had twenty boys, each, this was not a good number, no not at all and nothing to be proud of.
On a cold winters day salvation finally came. A tall man clad all in black leather with skin nearly as dark as the leather, with very short black hair and shades. His leather overcoat moved around his legs as he strode onto the lawn of Hogwarts. In one movement he took out his sword and strode up and attacked Willow first. She proved to quick and strong but not strong enough to get away from Blade. In short order he had hacked off her arms and head and turned on Ebony who whimpered and was killed before she could start to cry, her head rolling next to Willow's. Draco shock his head in a daze, saw the dead girls and gave Blade a handshake and ran off to get back together with Pansy. The whole of Hogwarts cheered and the world was right again.
The End
