Well, this is the first chapter of my first story. I don't own YYH, it belongs to Yoshihiro Togashi, but I do own Yuzuki in this chapter . Please review after you read it. Please and thank you...enjoy!!
TWIN DETECTIVES
CHAPTER 1: AWAKENING
In the city of Tokyo, there were twins named Yusuki & Yusuke Urameshi. Yuzuki is a very energetic girl, she is kind hearted, andshe also loved martial arts, Yuzuki also adores her brother. Yusuke is an energetic boy, he loves to fight, and very protective of her sister. They also had a childhood friend named Kayko, they always play together in their childhood. In school, they are very popular because they are very smart and the toughest kids at school. Nobody wanted to fight them because they knew that they couldn't beat them, accept a boy named Kazuma Kuwabara. Kuwabara always asked Yusuke to fight with him, but he always got beaten. Then he asked Yusuki to fight with him because he thinks that Yuzuki is a lot weaker than her brother, but in fact Yuzuki is the same as her brother and Kuwabara also got beat by Yuzuki.
"Brother, do you want to go to the park with me after school?" asked Yuzuki.
"Of course I do," answer Yusuke.
When they're on their way to the park a ball came to Yuzuki's leg, the ball belongs to a little boy, Yuzuki gave the little boy his ball.
"Thank you, big sis," said the little boy.
"You're welcome little boy, be careful when you're playing on the streets ok?" said Yuzuki.
"I will, big sis," said the little boy.
Then Yusuke and Yuzuki continue on their way to the park, Yuzuki saw the little boy across the street picking up his ball then there is a car that is going very fast towards the boy. Yusuke and Yuzuki run to the street to save that little boy, they managed to save the little boy but in exchange of their life. When they both woke up they found that they are floating through the sky.
"Brother, what's happening to us, what are we doing up here?" asked Yuzuki.
"I don't know sister, I'm confused as well." said Yusuke.
"Brother, I have a question, are we a ghost?" said Yuzuki.
"BINGO, we have a winner," an unknown voice said.
"I didn't expect for anyone to figure out that fast, oops I forgot to introduce myself how rude of me, my name is Botan, I'm a grim ripper. " said a girl
"I thought grim ripper supposed to wear a black coat," said Yuzuki.
"Me too, sis. Anyhow could you explain what is happening to us now and what are we suppose to do from now on," said Yusuke.
" My, my, we aren't expecting for you two to die now, the Spirit World doesn't have any place for you," Botan said.
"WHAT!! What do you mean you don't expect us to die, do you want that little boy to die?" said Yusuke.
"Brother, please calm down, Miss Botan could you explain to us what do you mean by that?" asked Yuzuki.
"Gladly," Botan said as she open a book. "Yusuke and Yuzuki Urameshi, 14 years old, loves to fight, have good scores at school, always kind at their friends, but sometimes gets into trouble because of fighting." Said Botan as she giggled.
"HEY! Stop laughing at us" Yuzuki said as she blush.
"Okay, okay, the boy that you save isn't going to die, he is going to live with a scratch in his left shoulder. So you're sacrifice are useless," said Botan as she laugh hysterically.
"Shut you mouth or I'm going to hit you face," Yusuke said angrily.
"Brother, calm down, this is not a time to get angry, we have to think of what are we going to do from now on." Said Yuzuki calming her brother.
"Oh. I almost forgot, because Spirit World doesn't have a space for you two, I have been given a job to give you a trial so you both could be bring back to live, and for details you have to ask the lord yourself," said Botan.
"Miss Botan, I don't think that anyone wanted us to live because we always makes trouble for anyone else at home and at school," said Yuzuki as she show a sad face.
"Sister, come on cheer up, I'll always be at your side, I will protect you if anything happen to you," said Yusuke cheering up his sister.
" Thank you, brother" Yuzuki said as she smiled at her brother.
"Now, now, don't give up hope yet, I'll give you two some time to think about this trial, OK?" said Botan.
"Thank you, Botan," said Yusuke as he and Yuzuki saw her leaving them.
At their funeral, they saw a lot of their friends crying for their death even the teachers are crying for them. Kayko had the loudest voice of them all. Their mother is crying loudly in the house and their father is crying too. Then they heard a loud voice and that voice belongs to Kuwabara!
"YUSUKE, YUZUKI, WHAT ARE YOU DOING YOU COWARD, ARE YOU TWO RUNNING AWAY FROM ME SO THAT I COULD NOT BEAT YOU!!" yelled Kuwabara.
" Kuwabara!!" said Yusuke and Yuzuki as they looked at each other, confused.
"Um… brother, how do you know Kuwabara?" asked Yuzuki to her brother.
"I also wanted to ask you the same thing," said Yusuke.
"I know Kuwabara because he asked me to fight with him, he was babbling about I was far weaker than you, brother," said Yuzuki.
"He certainly doesn't know us, we are at the same power because we always train together right?" said Yusuke as he smiled at Yuzuki.
"Yes, brother," said Yuzuki. Suddenly Botan came, " Yusuke, Yuzuki, have you think abou it?" asked Botan.
"Yes, and we're going to take the trial," they said.
"Ok then, let's meet the Lord of Spirit World," said Botan as she dragged Yusuke and Yuzuki to the sky.
After a short while they finally arrived at the gate of Spirit World. When they open the gate they saw a lot of strange creature running in the hall. "These are called Ogre," said Botan. " Lord Koenma, we have arrived," said Botan.
"Good job, Botan," said a toddler. Yusuke and Yuzuki laughed so hard that his laugh fills the big room.
"Gosh brother, he's so cute," said Yuzuki as she laughed harder.
"Stop laughing! Even if I'm a toddler, I'm not a baby, I'm already 7500 years old!" said Koenma.
"Oops, sorry," said Yusuke and Yuzuki.
"Oh well, back to the explaining, I'm going to give each of you an egg, you have to take care of it with gentle hearted manner because it eats you spirit energy and if you take care of it with brutal manner it will hatches to an despicable monster and eat your soul so you can't come back to life. If you took care of it with gentle manner it will hatches to a monster that pictures the inner you," said Koenma.
"Oh, Ok, thank you for the explanation, Koenma, brother, I think we have to come to mommy, daddy, and Kayko's dreams to explain that they don't have to burn our body, if we don't tell them we can't go back to life," said Yuzuki.
"You're right, sis, anyway thanks toddler," said Yusuke as he laughed.
"Brother, you're going to Kayko's dream and I'll convince them not to burn our body ok?" said Yuzuki as she giggled at her brother's reaction.
"Kayko's?! Are you crazy! She will not believe me sis I think you should go to Kayko's dream and I'll tell mom and dad," shout Yusuke.
"Come on brother! I know that you both like each other so she'll believe you anyway and she'll be happy because you're the one who talk to her not me!" said Yuzuki.
"Um… when did you know that sis?" asked Yusuke.
" Since you go on a date with her yesterday and the day before." Said Yuzuki. "How?" asked Yusuke.
" Oh come on brother don't act dumb, you left your agenda at the desk and peeked a little and I saw you writing about you're date with Kayko, come on brother we must hurry," said Yuzuki.
At Yusuke and Yuzuki's house,
"Mom, dad, can you hear me?" asked Yuzuki.
"Where are you Yuzuki?" asked her mother.
"Mom, dad, please don't burn our body now because we're going back to life and we will tell you the details after we're back to life ok?" asked Yuzuki.
"Of course dear, and make it fast because we're going to have a special dinner after you two came back to life, oh, and where's your brother?" asked her mother.
"Oh, He's at Kayko's house he's going to tell Kayko that he's coming back to life, oh, and mom, when they grow up I think you should engage those two, mom and dad already know that they like each other right? And don't tell brother about it or I'm going to get beaten after we came back to life," said Yuzuki as she giggled.
"Of course dear," said their mother as she also giggled.
At Kayko's house,
"Kayko, can you hear me? It's me Yusuke!" said Yusuke.
"Yusuke! Where are you?" asked Kayko.
"I'm still dead but I'm going back to life and I'm going to tell you the details later because I need to check on my sister because now she's explaining about this to my mom and dad, you could also asked my mother about this," said Yusuke.
"OK, promise me that you'll definitely came back to life OK?" asked Kayko.
"OK, I promise, OK now, bye!" said Yusuke.
The next day,
"OK, now you'll give me your egg and it will hatches for another month or so, so now you both could came back to life, and I'll give you two a job as the Spirit Detectives," said Koenma.
"What did they do?" asked Yusuke.
"They're gonna fight some evil demons and you two are the perfect team," said Koenma.
"Yay! I'm going to fight some demons," said Yuzuki as she jumped.
"Yeah sis and we're going to beat them all, now let's go to our body so we could go back to life," said Yusuke.
"Ok now I'll escort you two to your bodies," said Botan.
"Thank you, Miss Botan," said Yuzuki.
"Just call me Botan," said Botan, "Okay, thanks Botan!" said Yuzuki.
Botan escort them back to their bodies and their mom, dad, and Kayko are waiting for them to come back to life. When Yusuke and Yuzuki woke up, their father and mother and Kayko are very happy and they all hugged them. "I'm so happy brother," said Yuzuki as she said a tear. "Don't cry sis" said Yusuke. Yusuke and Yuzuki tell them everything that happened to them. Kayko and Yuzuki's father and mother were worried about their job as the Spirit Detectives, but Yusuke and Yuzuki convince them that they'll be allright because they are the toughest kid in the block. Yusuke and Yuzuki can't wait for them to go to school and tell their friends about their adventures, but they're not going to tell them about the dangerous job because they don't want their friends to worry about them.
§To be continued§
Well, this is my first story, I hope you like it. If you had any problems, please do tell.
The villain is going to appear in the next chapter, so please read it, I'll really appreciate it.
AND PLEASE NO FLAMES!! I got scared if you do that... ;;