A Blade for the Night: Chapter 1 Crimson Blade
A/n Well I have finally got the first chapter up, and this is my first story so please give me feedback. Also if you like my OC check out the Shadow Trilogy By: William Sable. I gave him full permission to use this OC and it is a great story. One last note any sort this character is not a ponyfied version of me and shows very few beliefs I have. (I put that little note there because Crimson here is a little sexist.)
As the red Pegasus known as Crimson Blade woke up, he began to take in his surroundings. "Where am I?" Crimson asked to absolutely no one in particular. As he fully shook the sleep out of his eyes he noticed he still couldn't see anything "Great I'm in a cave." He stood up and began to look around. Then he noticed something about himself. He realized my gear. He began to frantically feel around himself for his equipment. Dammit nothing, someone or something had robbed him of his gear. He began to walk aimlessly through the cave. After maybe 3 hours of this constant traveling he looked up and found a tiny spec of light showed up in his view. "YES!" Crimson exclaimed. He ran up to light thinking it was an exit, only to have his hope crushed by realizing it was only a slight crack in the rocks. Ah buck it Crimson thought. His dignity could be restored later. "Help! Somepony please help me!" Crimson cried. After about 10 minutes of this he heard light clopping and yelled one last time. Then he got a response. "Don't worry, I'll get you out." I'm being saved by a woman, by celestia this is embarrassing Crimson thought. After listening on and on to rocks being pulled away there was a pony sized hole in the rocks. He climbed out of the hole and turned to look at his savior. She was a light purple unicorn, good looking if you ask me. Dammit brain this is not the time for sexual thoughts. "Thank you for getting me out of that cave misses…" "Oh sorry my name is Twilight Sparkle." She said while looking away blushing. Buck I'm stupid. I completely forgot that I am a pretty good looking stallion. All the mares love me. "Well miss Twilight I don't really know where I am so can you inform me of where we are." "Well we are in the Everfree forest that borders the small little town of Ponyville. Since you obviously don't have a place to stay why don't you come to Ponyville with me?" "Ok" Crimson responded. They began to head towards the small village of Ponyville, Crimson noticed that the area they are in seemed to be giving off a very eerie vibe. "Umm Twilight when are we getting to Ponyville?" Crimson asked "We're actually here now." Twilight responded. He gazed upon Ponyville with awe. But then a very large pang of sadness hit him. Tears began to fill his eyes, It looks so much like home, Crimson thought as he began to walk towards Ponyville. Completely unaware of what will happen to him in the near future.
A/n Ah I just love cliffhangers. What will happen next time? Who knows?