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Dothacker16: Hi, it's been a while
Edward: try a few years
Dothacker16: whatever~ anyway, I figured I'd give this a shot and redo it because college has transformed me and I am now an educated writer
Edward: oh, how the naïve work
Dothacker16: -_- ….by the way to all my fans this is Edward…non twilight or FMA
Edward: I'm her own special blend
Dothacker16: …yeah, he's here in place of Seto because well…I have no idea what happened to Seto….pretty sure it was Edward's fault somehow though
Edward: or maybe you just lost touch after you stop writing fanfictions
Dothacker16: possibly ANYWAY, Here's the redo I don't own David Bowie or Labyrinth, Enjoy!
-Chapter One: Sara-
Crying was all she could do.
She cried when her mother left, she cried when her father went out with other women, she cried in her slept, in her dreams, alone, and most of all, she cried when she stared at the newspaper articles that showed photos of her beautiful mother posing for large audiences, oblivious of the fact that she had a loving husband and a pretty daughter. It seemed that this poor girl could create a new ocean with the tears she produced. Even now, the young girl sat upon her bed surrounding her 10 year old body with the many stuff animals, pillows and blankets she could find. She squeezed a teddy bear dressed as a knight against her chest and rubbed her tearstained face on it as she cried over the news that her father had told her.
She was going to have a stepmother.
"Oh Lancelot what will we do?" she asked the bear, "I don't want her to be my stepmother, she's evil! I'll be just like Cinderella having to do all the hard work."
"IT'S NOT FAIR!" she cried tossing the bear aside as a fresh wave of tears overcame her.
"If it is not fair then why not run away?"
She blinked.
"H-Hello? Who's there?" she asked gazing around her room for the source of the strange, alluring voice.
"If you do not wish for a stepmother Sara, then run away." Repeated the voice.
"H-how do you know my name?" The girl asked cautious of the voice that resounded throughout the room.
"I know many things, I know that you wish your mother, I know that you hate your father for remarrying, and I know that you wish to be free of this house and all who have hurt you."
The girl leaned over the side of her bed and searched as she spoke back to the voice. "It's no use running away, daddy will just call the police and then I'll get in trouble."
"Then go somewhere where you can't be found."
"But where is somewhere?" Sara asked
"Why does it matter? You will not have to worry about a stepmother where you will be going." It said as the door to the girl's room began to radiate.
The young girl tilted her head and examined the door. "I'm not so sure about this." She said slipping down off her bed and advancing towards the glowing door. "How do I know you're not some weirdo trying to kidnap me? How do I know that this isn't just a dream?" She asked stopping a few feet in front of the door.
"Open the door and be free of this place Sara."
She gazed at the door for a long time before her small hand began to reach out towards it. When her fingers were inches away from touching the door she Just as her small finger were about to touch the doorknob she stepped back as an uncontrollable laughter took over her.
"I feel like Alice going down the rabbit hole!" she laughed holding her sides. Once she settled down she wiped away the tears that had stained her face from her hysterical laughter. As she dried her eyes her mind dawned on the fact that she was still dressed in fuzzy pink pajama with little, happy, yellow fish swimming on them.
"Well if I'm going to run away I should probably put some real clothes on." The girl said. "I'll be right back I promise so please just wait a little bit." She finished running over to find appropriate clothes.
On the other side of the door, a tall, slender male dressed in a tattered, hooded robe leaned against the wall grinning as he listened to the gentle footsteps of the young girl disappear.
"I'll wait for you Sara."
-Continued-
-Rants-
Dothacker16: ok, so that's the redo…I'm pretty sure I've redone this story like a MILLON times
Edward: that's an understatement
Dothacker16: shut up, and I'm REALLY sorry for making people who like this reread it, but I feel that this is the only way I can actually finish it. I promise it should go a LOT quicker now
