hey just made this off top of head enjoy
"talking"
'thinking/ talking with inner self/demon'
"kyubi Naruto speaking"
'inner self/ demon talking'
chapter one: the house
It was around 8:00 am in konoha, the ninja were all up, and about. Doing missions around konoha an ect. . Today was October 9th, a day before the celebration for the "death" of the kyubi no kitsune, the nine tailed fox demon. All of the children and genin of the village were helping parents set up various stands and other festivities, but this of course is not true for one boy. Uzumaki Naruto, the jailer of the kyubi. He was now looking for a place to make a camp outside of konoha for tomorrow's normal occurrence where he would get beaten by the adults that knew the secret only they knew soon he had found a reasably nice spot he made shadow clones to do the work while he went into the forest to let himself drop his mask for a moment "dammit!! Why me! Of all the villagers of konoha why meeeeeee!!"Naruto roared as he let some of the kyubi's chakra slip from the seal, his nails started to get sharp and long, his fangs grew twice their size, and his whisker marks more defined. Then, without warning he started to use the nearest tree as a dummy, ripping it to pieces. When he started to calm down, at an chance of a million to one, he had somehow found an abandoned, large house hidden in the forest, still clean somehow. Now Naruto was curious he started to talk to kyubi to see if he had anything on the matter 'hey, fox do you know where we are?' 'how would i know kit konoha is huge and were only ten miles from the village kit why ask me!?" 'because fox you know this place more than I do' 'well kit, i don't know why don't you just go and see where we are' ' fine, fine I'll go but if i need help i'm counting on you to give me some of your chakra fox!''Fine kit I'll agree to that' and with that Naruto walk towards the house.
(One hour later)
Naruto, being not as smart as the rest of us, decided since he didn't have a key, he would use the second application of the rasengan to make a small hole, no larger that a man's fist, to unlock the door instead of using the key under the mat at the front door. Once inside he found a note tied to the higher part of the door he grabbed it and after reading it, ran to konoha to find a little pink-haired knochi we all know and love. Said note read:
Dear son: if you found this note that that means your old enough to leave the village, if this is not my son, Uzumaki Naruto than you are a good soul but put this note back if where you found it. Anyway if you are my son I am youndime (sp)Hokage. this may be my last written letter so listin i know you may hate me for sealing the kyubi inside you but you must understand, you are my son, you were the most powerful person in the village aside from me and the saninn so it had to be done. My dying words to them will to praise you as a hero not a monster. As a first and last birthday gift sealed at the bottom of the note is my scroll for learning hirashin, my yellow flash technique. And the deed to the house.
Signed, Arashi (i don't know his last name)
(With Sakura)
It was now noon and Sakura was presently working with the rest of team 7 "kakashi-sensei where is Naruto no baka?" she said as they were hanging banisters proclaiming joyous things about the kyubi being "dead" "he is probably outside of the village and not helping, after all he is a dobe" saskue replied in his emo like voice answer "oh saskue!! I love the why you think your probably right any way" she said dreamily, only to be brought out by a soft and full of sadness "oh" being sakura she quickly turned to see naruto in his fathers cloak (the white one with flames on it) "Naruto no baka!! What are you doing in the youndime's robe!!" naruto suddenly sighed and said "wouldn't you want to find out." He mocked with his signature fox-like grin after which he handed her a small note which said when you guys are done meet me at the western gate to find out!p.s bring sleeping stuff and don't eat dinner I have it all covered Naruto and with that naruto disappeared. "Well, well look's like naruto has a little secret that only we are going to know" kakashi finally said after reading the note.
(Five hours later)
It was know five o'clock at night and team 7 (excluding naruto were heading towards the west gate, they were tiered and hungry and as for sakura and saskue very angry. When they got to the gate they saw him standing there at the center of the doors. I took all that sakura had to not beat him to a pulp when he said "I'm not the real Naruto I'm a shadow clone. Now if you would follow me he said as he started to walk towards the gate. Half-an-hour later they arrived at his "home" if that's what you could call it as they approached the door the clone dispersed and the real Naruto opened the door "hey I see you followed my clone's instructions" naruto said with a smile on his face, he was wearing his father's cloak, and a fishnet shirt, and kaki shorts showing off his toned body, which, to his surprise, made sakura drool a little bit out of the corner of her mouth " well then I guess we are going to have dinner then?"