Ethrins...Just Try to Define it
Hello.
I've rewritten this fan fiction because 1, my recent ideas would require A LOT of time which is one thing I DO NOT have a lot of and 2, I wanted to change the whole plot completely.
Now, this story is based on my school life, so if you flame on that, I'll get more mad at you because you would be flaming my life. My characteristics show up in a couple of characters when they're thinking to themselves.
The school is still in Ethrins and the Ethrins part hasn't really changed.
Ethrins is another planet, where no one knows each other. Because the Mobians and Ethranian's planets had been in a lot of conflict, the Sonic teams have to face discrimination.
Another thing, the Sonic team members that have super natural powers CAN NOT reveal their talents. For example, Tails can't fly with his tails, Rouge can't do her screw kick attack, Sonic can't do his super sonic run, Knuckles can't reveal his abnormal strength...so on, so forth. So here it goes.
Disclaimer: I don't own Sonic or other related characters. I do own my fan characters though
Chapter one: On the Way
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It was a new day on planet Mobius, but to others it was, 'another day closer to death.'
Knuckles was in a very laid back mood and was currently leaning on the Master Emerald looking at the same old view that he looked at every single day of his life.
"Man I need to get out more. Maybe I'll go pay someone a..."
Knuckles thoughts were interrupted, as Bokkun flew in front of Knuckles' face.
"What do you want?"
He questioned with no lack of annoyance.
The irritating robot boy just had a very creepy smile on his face, when he finally spoke.
"Sonic says that he forgot his cell up here! He also said that there's a group meeting at his house. He also said to tell Rouge, cuz he ain't got no communication with her"
There was always a meeting. That was the only time he ever even got to really see his friends.
"Well...thanks...ah...darn, I always forget your name!"
Being Knuckles, he always forgot BOKKUN's name.
"Hey man that's not cool! I've been delivering messages to you for like, a thousand years and you still don't remember MY NAME! HOLY MOLEY RAVIOLI! I need a vacation! And next time the worlds in danger and Sonic and gang need help, I ain't coming to tell you!
Knuckles just looked at him like he came back from the dead
Bokkun flew back with sly eyes.
"Oh and one more thing…"
He dropped his mail bag and quickly flew off laughing and sticking out his tongue.
Knuckles stared at it in question. He reached for it and was met face to face with a stink bomb.
"AHHHH!"
Knuckles picked it up and threw it off his island as far as he could before growling and shaking his fists to the heavens.
"Man…when I see that kid again…he'll regret even looking at me."
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After bathing about fifty times, Knuckles got up and decided to just go. After all, he did need a break from watching over the Master Emerald. Then he heard an irritated voice…a very familiar one at that.
"Aww shoot!"
Knuckles quickly looked around him to see the 'intruder.'
"Who's there?"
Knuckles, as usual, took the voice as a threat. But being a very experienced guardian, he immediately thought of it as Rouge. But there was something that made him rethink that. Usually when she came, all that was audible was a twig snap or a rustle of bushes. Never had she spoken in all of her desperate attempts of getting her hands on the Master Emerald.
He quietly crept to where he had heard the voice. He leaned towards the forest and strained his ears to hear anything else, but with no luck.
Just when he was about to leave, something clamped his shoulders.
"BOO!"
"AAHH" Knuckles screamed like a little girl after being scared by...yeah you got it, non other then Rouge the bat, treasure huntress extraordinaire, watching the 'big bad' echidna clutching his chest, struggling to catch his breath.
"Hahaha! You should have looked at your face! Looks like I scared you after all! Waddya say Knux, wasn't that a good one?"
Knuckles just looked at her like he was going to pulverize her for getting him so worked up.
"Aww come on Knuckles it was just a little joke! Don't tell me you got scared." Being Rouge, she just had to poke fun at him.
"Not even! I'm the guardian of the…
"…Master Emerald! I know, I know! Jeez!"
Knuckles started to walk away without another word. Rouge kind of felt sorry for him, so she started off another conversation.
"So…where ARE you going? It must be really important if you're leaving the Master Emerald."
He said nothing and continued to walk. Rouge decided to poke some fun at him…just to make him talk.
"I'll be glad to watch over it while you're gone."
Finally, Knuckles stopped and turned around.
"For your information, you're coming too."
Rouge honestly didn't know what he was talking about.
"Coming where?"
Knuckles then remembered what Bokkun said earlier
"…tell Rouge cuz he ain't got no communication with her."
"Oh yeah I forgot to tell you. The gang is meeting up at Sonics house for something and told me to tell you."
Rouge had an offensive look on her face as she hence her head.
"Since when am I part of your 'gang'?"
Knuckles saw her bitter expression.
"Hey, who said you weren't?"
She looked up and saw him smiling in a very sincere way.
'I love this side of Knuckles! It makes him so much more attractive.'
She managed to smile. Then he turned around and started to go towards Sonics house, as Rouge followed.
And so together they went.
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Amy had been walking towards Sonics house without her usual happy expression she wore when she went to meet Sonic. Amy looked ahead; the path she walked on had a deep wide rut because of all the walking.
Anyone that followed the path would end up in the front of Sonics house. Amy furrowed her brows in anger as she looked at the rut. Then suddenly, she kicked the ground with her red boots.
For the past week or so, she had been thinking a lot about sonic, and not in the usual way, which would be wondering where Sonic was, how he was doing and Who he was hanging out with. No. She was thinking about all the years she wasted in, what she personally called, 'The Pursuit of Sonic.'
It would always be the same thing. She would run to him, he would run away from her, she would give up, drag back home and think about Sonic yet again. It was like a repeat of an episode that kept on playing and playing.
Well, she was now finally sick of it all. She was sick of Sonic, love and life. She hated to admit it, but she honestly had nothing to do but chase Sonic and watch T.V ever since Eggman was imprisoned.
She sighed and stopped, letting herself unwind. As if they were taunting her, she saw a purple chao chasing a yellow chao making happy sounds. The yellow one stopped and the purple one collided with it, bringing them down. They both nuzzled each other.
Amy clenched her fists and screamed at the chao.
"STOP IT! SHUT UP!"
The two chao's quickly got up and quickly flew away as fast as they could.
Amy gasped, surprising herself with her bottled up rage just suddenly popping up. She felt tears go down her cheeks but refused to make a sound, even though she had knots in her throat and her lips quivered.
She quickly straightened her back and wiped her tears away.
"I WILL NOT act weak. Not in front of anyone, not in front of myself"
Amy continued to Sonics house like nothing ever happened.
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Rouge was following Knuckles rather close. She just looked at him, eyes scanning his whole body.
Rouge's point of view:
Oh my god he is so cute! His muscle, his 'hard to get attitude, his eyes, his smiles, his buff chest, his strength, his innocence…aww he just kills me! If he weren't so stubborn I would have had him millenniums ago! But I guess I like that characteristic. Hard to get.
Rouge paid no attention to Knuckles as he called her for the fifth time in a row; he was getting quite aggravated when he finally blew.
"ROUGE! FOR THE HUNDRETH TIME, COME INSIDE!"
Rouge was too in her thoughts, but she snapped out of it.
"Wow we're here already?"
She hadn't been paying much attention to where she was going because she was too busy observing someone.
"Yes Rouge 'we're here all ready'! Now, while I'm still young, can you get inside?"
'Man, somebody is mad.!'
Once they got inside, Rouge pressed floor 11 and held the door open, waiting for knuckles. When she noticed he wasn't there she peeked outside the elevator doors, seeing Knuckles taking the stairs.
"Why are you going up the stairs, Knux?"
"Because I want to"
Rouge put on a competitive smirk as she cocked her hips, leaning on the elevators door frame, to prevent it from closing on her.
"Race ya."
Knuckles stopped and looked down at her matching her smirk with his own.
"You're on!"
Rouge got in the elevator and pressed the 'close' button as Knuckles ran up the stairs at full speed.
"Finally some spice!"
Rouge tapped her foot impatiently against the floor of the elevator waiting to get out because the elevator music was KLILLING her!
Knuckles ran a little faster as he heard a little rumble pass him, thinking that it was the elevator. It was hardly a challenge for knuckles to be doing this, since he trained every single day.
Knuckles finally reached the last step as he quickly opened the door and ran past the elevators to door 1104. Right at that moment, the elevator door opened and out came a fuming bat as she saw a blur of red go past her.
"HEY!"
Knuckles reached the door and smirked at Rouge who turned the corner running. Rouge smirked
"Well, I guess you beat me, but no ones getting a gem for winning so I'm cool."
Knuckles rolled his eyes at the jewel obsessed bat.
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So that was chapter one rewritten. I hope you guys don't mind
Knuxnbat ;D 9:47 PM