This is actually my first ever fan fiction! But just because it's my first fanfic doesn't mean I don't want you all to tell me how I can improve on my writing, 'k?
Disclaimer: I do not own Yu-Gi-Oh! Never have, never will. No matter how much I want to…TT^TT Nah, just kidding! I wouldn't want the rights—too much work for lazy 'ol me! xD
Warning: Killing, Language, Sociopaths, Abuse, etc;
''Death is not the greatest loss in life. The greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live.''
-Norman Cousins
Everyone Has Secrets: Prologue
I watched in detached amusement as they finally registered the dead bodies of their friends. They screamed; their faces contorted in fear and grief. One of them; a girl with blue eyes and short, brown hair; cried out, ''you sick fuck! H-how could you?" She fell to her knees and, holding her head between her knees, began to cry hysterically. I smirked cruelly and watching them like a predator watches its prey, I pounced.
Shrieks of terror filled the small apartment once again.
I tugged at my too long bangs and, letting a quiet cackle escape my lips, returned to the run-down apartment building I called home.
Review (or Flame) Please!
I have the basic premise of the story, so I know where I'm going with this story. I just need to type it and put it up. Oh, and I'll be using the character's Japanese names—not the American ones. They're stupid.
