Scene beacon academy, the tower is destroyed there is a Grimm dragon on the top. The rest of the school destroyed and on fire. On the steps in front of the tower. Jaune Arc laid on the steps beaten and dying.
Jaune felt a strange sense of… comfort, as he laid down on the steps, broken and bleeding. Beside him lay Pyrrha dead. Cinder killed her as she tried to stop her from kidnapping Ozpin. Pyrrha blasted him away to save him. But when he landed he managed to run all the way back here only to watch Pyrrha get killed. Cinder then attacked him and got away with Ozpin. So now he laid here broken looking off into the distance to seeing the school fall. Ren who was still fighting off in the distance with such fire and fury in him that Jaune never thought he was capable of, Ren was desperately trying to protect the fatally wounded Nora. It was a miracle, really, that she was still breathing.
Teams CFVY and SSSN were beaten by the paladins of ironwood. NDGO and CRDL were killed by the white fang. He didn't really know what happened to teams FNKI or ABRN. he thinks they died in the courtyard but he doesn't really know.
As for team RWBY, they were handling the Grimm and protecting the civilians at the fairgrounds. Blake and Yang had been killed by Adam Taurus, and Ruby – bless her soul - had bought enough time for the civilians to escape by overcharging her Semblance with Weiss time dilation. She had taken down dozens if not a hundred Grimm, in a single second, but in return, she had consumed all of her aura… and all of her soul.
Weiss had cared more for her leader far more than she had let on, stupidly running out to try and save her, despite the fact Ruby was already dead. Before she had made it two steps, Adam Taurus killed her.
The White Fang…, Torchwick, cinder and her lackeys. In a way, Jaune had a lot of respect for what they had done, as much as he hated them for it. Their plan had been brilliantly executed. Even when it seemed the Hunters were stopping their plan, they were in fact just helping it, spreading seeds of doubt and chaos, which gradually grew everyone's demise.
That didn't mean he regretted his time spent at Beacon. far from it. This last year had been the best in his life. It was a shame they had been cut short. He growled in annoyance as he thought of that traitorous Ironwood, Cinder, Emerald, they played everyone. It all makes sense now the dance, how emerald and Mercury handed Torchwick over to make them appear to be on our side. And after the Coco and Yatsuhashi. Even more with yang's match. How could he not see or realize what was happening? No, if anything he might have suspected but he never acted on it. He always thought some else would handle it like Ruby and her team, Ozpin, Glynda or his team. It is one thing to count on someone. It is another depend on. So much for being like the heroes in stories. He wanted to be like the heroes in those stories. He didn't want to be the damsel in distress. While his friends fought for him and their lives.
"I have a lot of apologies to make. What is wrong with me I got accepted into this school and I slacked off. Pyrrha I'm so sorry I wasn't strong enough to save you or return your love. Ruby had the same dream as I had. But she was clearly more focused and cared more"
He heard the Sound of someone being thrown
It was Ren he was sent flying by a deathstalker, and hit the side of the building pillar hard, knocking down the pillar which then landed on him.
Ren, Nora. I'm sorry I wasn't a good leader. His last regret was that he wished he had found out what his Semblance was. He laughed at that, mentally this time. It was such a petty desire considering he got it at what felt like the end of the world.
He heard shouts, and he turned to his right, seeing Cardin running to save him. When his teammates died, Cardin had realized how… pointless his bullying was and had learned to treasure those around him. But by then it was too late for him. For all of us.
Jaune saw a White Fang soldier, with a familiar streak of red hair, approaching Cardin from behind. He tried to call out, but his voice wasn't working, so he watched as Cardin fell in half, a line of red marking a blow that had been faster than Jaune could follow. The soldier was actually a leader of the white fang Adam Taurus. Jaune prepared for the end. As Adam looked down on him he scoffed then walked off,
Jaune sighed mentally "I'm not worth dying by his sword. That's how worthless I am". Jaune usually wasn't so reflective… he supposed this was just part of dying. He was glad the pain had stopped, at least. He was also glad that he was the last of his friends to die, so none of them had to grieve him. Over the years he had caused enough pain for them, albeit unintentionally. They deserved to rest in peace.
It was luck that Ren and Nora had been the last two standing. Team RWBY and Pyrrha had all died thinking their efforts had turned everything around, thinking they had saved their loved ones... and made a difference. He knew that Ren and Nora would be happy just dying together.
As for him, well… he saw no better place to die than one surrounded by the dead bodies of those he most cherished. He did not fear death… he had long since given up that luxury, he was always thought and was willing to give up his life for his friends. But instead, they all died before him. It is not like he could change the past. But he wished more than anything that he could have another chance.
(I would start listening to the velvet room theme from Persona series as background music while he's talking)
(Voice that sounds like Jaune) "Again?"
A voice in his head replied Jaune frowned, or would have if it wasn't so painful. Where had that come from?
?: You have done that before, although last time you asked to forget. The voice continued.
Forget? Forget what? Said mentally
"What your Semblance is, you idiot."
The voice said, annoyed. It was a weird thought that what he assumed was a part of him was getting annoyed at his stupidity.
"Well? You're running out of time. Would you like to use it or what? I thought you wanted to save your friends"
My friends? They're dead though.
"Yes. But I am giving you a chance to save them and prevent all of this. another chance."
Jaune wondered if he was going crazy. It wasn't usual to have a conversation with yourself, was it?
"I am you but not you. I am a past other you"
Well… that made no sense, Jaune thought. The voice growled in annoyance.
"I am the first you, the first that discovered and learned how to use my, our Semblance, but I got a catch worse than the rest of you, "The Other Jaune said.
Uh… didn't you just say we are the same person though? Jaune replied.
"Touché. But that is beside the point. Every time we are near death, we have a dying wish… a reason to do it all over. For the last thousands and so years, I have had to guide the various versions of us in their last moments."
Umm… this isn't making much sense.
"That is because the last version of you told me to wipe his, your memories, let us be quick before we die in this world. What are your regrets? "The Other Jaune asked
That I didn't save my friends. That I was too weak and stupid.
"Okay, you would like to be strong and smarter. How original. None of our previous iterations of us have wished for this. Not like the ones who asked to be weak and ignorant like the one before you. Following the same pattern"The voice said, dripping with sarcasm so heavy he could almost feel it.
"But I should not take my annoyance out on me. Alright, let's. Oh. Wow. Ok. Well, that changes , searching . searching. ah here you go. Talk to you on the other side"
The voice cut off as Jaune's vision started to fade. Everything was turning white, almost like it was beginning to snow, Well… that was interesting, was his last thought before his mind went blank.
"Well, time to get up, my 'hero," The Other Jaune said
Jaune was tired, sooooo utterly tired, but his body insisted on waking up without his permission and had no intention of changing its mind on the matter. He opened his eyes slightly, finding himself staring right up at an unfamiliar ceiling. Wrapped around in a bright red rose blanket. He opened his eyes, rolling over with a sigh, only to find his body stopped by an unfamiliar weight around the chest.
Still, he had at least rolled onto his side. He yawned silently, stretching his arms and legs while his mind attempted to gather its thoughts.
He thought, even though the thought process didn't make much sense.
"What, no thank you? I even nailed the timing! Geez, people these days."
"I want to find my subconscious and punch It." jaune thought mentally
"Hey, I heard that! Never mind that pick yourself up and get ready"
Jaune sighed again, standing up wearily. He notices he was in some kind of motel. with yellow walls. mahogany furniture pieces, with rose-red bed sheets. that seem to make you want to just stare at them. seeing this color of red seems to make you want to wake up. With that Jaune laid up still trying to make sense of where was.
"Hurry up and head to the bathroom already. This is going to take some more explanation than normal."The Other Jaune said
He notices the bathroom, walking to the bathroom. His legs seemed to be lighter to him without thought, even though he didn't really have any knowledge of where he was. He did as he was told and went to the bathroom.
He opened his eyes in front of the mirror and shrieked in alarm.
The person in the mirror was not him… it couldn't be, that was for sure, it was a blonde girl in baggy pajamas. But as he moved various parts of his body, and the mirror did the same, he then pinches himself.
The slight pain you would expect happened and red bump. With that, he had no choice but to accept it. But still. What. The. Hell. Was. This.
"I'm Surprised? You actually picked your own appearance for once, even if it was subconscious. For once I… you… didn't have to do it for you… me, But it was easier for me then. I would have to just go to the next timeline. "the other jaune said
Aaand she was talking to herself as if she was a different person. Yep, this isn't real and she is going crazy. she is going to an asylum as soon she would wake up, finding this had all been a terrible dream.
Wait, she?
"You will eventually get used to it, I'm here to help you get started or restarted. This is what I meant by I have a worse catch with oversight, all you need to do is adjust do being the other gender. Something about parallel universes, alternate timelines, and paradoxes, it is not like it is impossible for you. And you're not talking to yourself… your talking to… yourself."The Other Jaune said
"Glad we cleared that up, Jaune thought, rolling her eyes"
"Just Shut up. And listen to me"The Other Jaune said
"So you're me?"jaune asked
"Yep."
Jaune hit himself in the face. "Worth it."
"You realize that I can't feel your pain, right? "The Other Jaune said.
Damn it, he thought to himself. Okay, seriously, why the hell am I a girl? Jaune demanded mentally.
"As I said, you subconsciously chose this. All the strongest and smartest people you knew were female, so when you were mentally designing a stronger, smarter you…"The Other Jaune said.
Jaune sighed.
"You are joking"
"Nope. I am you remember. I remember when I lived in my timeline and I was with you in the last timeline. You admired your fellow female classmates in awe wanting to be like them, all of team RWBY, Coco, Velvet, Nora. Professor Glynda and most of all Pyrrha. Heroic, stylish, kind, powerful, comforting, Strong and Beautiful. So this girl was the best candidate. Well, I mean as far as the infinite number of universes she just came up first. During the search."The Other Jaune proclaimed(In a joyous tone. Mixed with ridicule and excitement)
"This is a female version me?" jaune asked.
"Yep. Parallel universes and alternate timelines are the same things you know about the multiverse theory. "The Other Jaune said
"I think so?"Jaune responded
"Of course you do. With every choice everybody or anybody makes they make a world some so similar you can barely tell the difference. Others are so dramatically different that you can't believe they're possible. Like in this one and a bunch of other timelines where you were born a girl. This girls name is Joan Arc. Oh wow, mom and dad in this timeline. 8 times and 8 daughters. So yeah that is one thing different you can tell about it. Maybe you will find out more about yourself and this version of you."The Other Jaune said
"What happened to the real Joan?" jaune asked
"Well, whenever this happens the previous person just disappears. Or think of this as a video game. It is like you were just handed the controller. Whatever the last person who had the controller doesn't have a direct and force on you. Maybe?"The Other Jaune said
"Maybe?"
"I mean it you might see consequences to the choices they made while they were in control. Oh and maybe some neural impression. Like there was a version that was put in the next version and that version had a huge craving for cookies. But then that versions got overwritten with the one that didn't so. He might have kept that trait but he chose to eat cookies and but he didn't and it went away."
"What?"
"Point is you are still you and you decide from here on out. How you are. From here on out it is completely up to you. You have complete control. "The Other Jaune said
"This feels wrong I stole this girl's life."
"Ah right on cue. Listen to me Jaune or Joan now. There is nothing you can do to change this. What done, is done? This just happens with our semblance other parallel versions of us use to or do it too. My advice to you is to make the most of it. Especially since I can immediately see how you have more advantages in this version already. You can become a maiden knight. That stopped the fall of beacon and saved her friends. That is if you're still determined to save your friends."The Other Jaune asked.
"Of course I am but I didn't know you meant this way." jaune responded
"If you're feeling that bad then next time you're close to death and decide to try life again I can erase your memories if you want. "The Other Jaune stated
"Again? Is that why my memories were erased last time?" jaune asked
"No that was a different reason. You have asked me to erase your memories for countless different reasons. I won't go into that given that the last time a version of you told me not to tell next version of you why. There's one version in which I did tell him why the previous one's reason and he did not take it well and told me not to tell other versions of you. If anything it is just a courtesy for you, me, them and future versions of you if there are any. Who knows maybe you might succeed but I'm not that optimistic anymore. Having tried and failed in myself and seeing countless other versions of me do the same. Does a number on morale failing that many times."
"You sound like you have given up." jaune said
"No this is something different. And I and you are still here." The Other Jaune said
"But you want to save our friends right? You have told other versions of me right so why not tell me how to save" he was cut off.
"I have my own reasons and it's my own choice to tell you or not tell what I know and what I have seen. Honestly, it's one of the few that I can actually still make myself. You have your memories from your timeline, you make your own choices. If anything you'll come across some of them and can somewhat guess my other reasons as you live this life. Different timelines tend to change how you see life. You will probably come up across one as soon as I leave."The Other Jaune stated.
"Can you at least tell me who is behind this? At least that, there shouldn't be any harm right? At least give me a clue. And if it does backfire then you can blame it all on me not yourself." jaune stated.
(Sighs) fine, the name of cinder's boss is Salem. don't waste this. don't waste your new life and with that, it is time for me bid you adieu. Take care. It is up to you to figure it out. I will see you the next time you are close to death.
With that, Jaune felt the presence in her mind fade. He hadn't even been aware of it until it was gone. He bit her lip, slowly looking back at the mirror as if hoping what was there would change, even though she instinctively knew the other her had been telling the truth.
Before her stood a girl in baggy pajamas. Who looked kind of what Jaune would imagine himself as if he were female. Jaune felt embarrassed like he was a being stared at by a pervert. And at the same time, he was staring at her body, he also felt and felt a slight sexual attraction at herself, but that's normal right she, he was originally a guy it actually felt somewhat normal.
Wait… if she was a girl does that mean he had date a guy? Jaune started having a slight panic attack. What if she was attracted to someone like Cardin? Suddenly, Jaune calmed down, repulsed by the thought. She was repulsed by the thought of being with men that meant she wasn't attracted to them, right? But still attracted to girls like Pyrrha and Weiss. Does this make me gay or a lesbian now then? Huh is this what the other Jaune meant by timelines tend to change how we see life.
He sighed in confusion, and took a few seconds to study his… her… new features. The eyes, in particular, were captivating. they were silver like ruby's had been, They captured a LOT of attention, just looking in the mirror, even though they were her eyes, she felt like she could stare into them all day.
Her face was just as pale just as before, only a lot smoother. She no longer had a strong jaw, and her face was actually quite feminine. Although come to think of it, it had been feminine to start with, she thought in embarrassment. Her hair was another attention catching detail. Blonde long reached to mid spine,
Her shoulders and arms were clearly strong, although the muscles were nowhere near as prominent as they had been before, after Pyrrha's intensive training. She was… well endowed, she thought and was surprised that she wasn't embarrassed by the thought. The more she looked at it, the more… normal and familiar her body seemed. Her eyes gazed down further. She had a nice figure, good legs somewhat tall or about the same height and body type as Pyrrha, deciding it didn't really matter if he was a girl now. He or she now is still the same person. For some reason, this whole thing was no longer nearly as difficult or as bad as she had first thought. He or now she as the other Jaune best put it was strong and beautiful. what's wrong or not to like about that. It doesn't change the fact that he wants is to save his friends.
Better get used to introducing and referring to myself as Joan. Looking at the mirror and saying "Hello my name is Joan Arc. I am Joan Arc." A couple of times.
Looking around it was a motel room but where and why is she here. Why was she not at her dorm or home? What is this place?
The motel room was rather nice it was not like the kind you would see on the side of the road. It was like a tiny home. The bed and the red rose sheets were definitely comfortable. Noticing the stand next to the bed. A vase of fresh roses and a menu. she picked it up it read summer roses inns. the emblem was the exact symbol of a ruby wore on her huntress outfit.
She then made her way outside to the motel room. Weather was very cloudy like it might rain but still, some shines of light were gleaming down. Looking around seeing some people just talking and texting on their scrolls one walking out of the check-in lobby building. Parked cars and in one of the parking spots was yang's sports bike. And off on the other side of the motel was Glynda.
Feeling of joy as she realized that both Glynda and potentially yang were around she walked over to look at the plate. It was bumblebee. That is yang's bike realizing she has to be nearby. Maybe Glynda could tell her. She made her way over to Glynda.
"Um hey excuse me this is going to sound weird but can you answer some of my questions. I swear I am not crazy but. Can you tell me where and what year this is?" Joan asked
"Are you alright Miss Arc?" Glynda responded
Joan mentally "So she knows me. Good"
"I'm fine or I'm going to be. I just want to make sure of something things. I had a horrible nightmare it seemed so real. I would just like some reassurance. Please." Joan said.
Glynda Looking at her in a consoling way.
"You are in vale, in the city of vale, this is a summer rose's inn's motel, it is Monday, September 3, 78, 8:10 am.
Joan is thinking mentally"78? It is the last year. yes since before I died in my. Wait,September 3 that's the first day of beacon."
"Are you reassured?" Glynda said
"Yes thank you very much it do you know how far it is to the transport station that takes students to beacon?" Joan asked
"Why are you not going to take the bus to the transport station?"Glynda said
"Bus?"
"The bus that takes you and the rest of the students here to the transport comes at 9:00. you forget that do to your nightmare."
"Ah yes, it does thank you for reminding me. But I have one last question is Yang Xiao Long here. She is a friend of mine and I would like some reassurance from her as well."
Glynda searching. "Yes. She is in room 148. The one with the yellow bike." Glynda replied.
"Yes thank you again, "Joan said
Glynda looking at her in an odd way as she leaves
Joan makes her way over to room 148. Stops in front of the door of the room. And knocks on it
Nothing happens tries knocks again harder. The hardest on the third time and nothing
"What is she still asleep or not here?"
Mentally thinking maybe it is for the best. She doesn't know if she evens knows her and what would she even say. "Hi I am Joan I am here to warn you about the future". No, if anything she should just meet her and all her other friends like she did the first time.
And at that moment yang opened the door
"WHAT!" yang screamed?
Ah Joan shrieked and fell on her butt
"We are trying to sleep here!" Yang said.
"Ahhh. Um hi, I am Joan Arc. I am a fellow classmate."
While getting up
"Yang Xiao Long. Why did you wake us up?" yang asked
Joan was standing there nervous trying to think of an excuse and then remembered the bus.
"I was asked to by Glynda to make sure you were awake. The bus comes in 45 min."
With a frantic realization tone voice
"The bus? 45 minutes. Oh no ruby wake up we have 45 minutes to get ready."
Hearing that ruby in frantic tone as well responded
"What! Why didn't the alarm clock go off?" Ruby asked her
Noticing a broken alarm clock on the corner of the door?
"Yangggg" ruby screamed at her
"Well thank you for waking us up. We have to get ready now. Maybe we can hang out later when we get to beacon."
Yang closes the door.
Joan sighed in relief then hearing both yang and ruby through the door having an argument of how much trouble they would have been in if Joan didn't wake them and who was going to shower first.
Returning to the room Joan made her way to the closet opening and notice some familiar but mostly different stuff. Weapons, Armor pieces and a hoodie. As well as a suitcase and a large steamer trunk.
"I wear a pumpkin Pete hoodie here too. Glad to see that pumpkin Pete exists in this world too."
Noticing the sword in the closet it was Crocea Mors just like the family air loom he had in his timeline. Nice to see that some things don't change. But if his dad had all daughters in this timeline then why did she have it and not one of her older sisters?
Noticing the armor that must have been Joan's armor. Female knight armor pieces. And what she wore underneath it was somewhat like a dress. With color ultra-marine blue with cerulean stocking and circulation armbands. The dress length it went down to her knees a little more pass her was somewhat thin yet still enough to protect. Then notice the gauntlets greaves both of them different, cuirass, shoulder guards, fauld and Sabaton were a sterling silver color.
Picking up the gauntlet greaves noticing that the one on the right hand was like yang's shotgun gauntlets. But the one on the left wasn't. But it had something two compartments on the outside facing away part of the greaves. And on the part facing inner it had buttons. Pushing the button on the side and "sling" the shield came out on the other side. The shield was medium sized round and it was reflective white. Except for the symbol the shield was different. It was tilted like 90 degrees to the left. Or was she just looking at the wrong way? Oh yes, she was. It's the same she had in his timeline.
Pressing the other button the shield fell to the ground. Pressing it again and it popped back up attaching itself back to her arm. Magnetic shield? That folds up in the greave.
Joan then stares at the dress
"Am I going to have to wear a dress forever now? I wore one for the dance. But for every day now. Well, it is not like anyone would laugh this time."
Scene bathroom.
"oh boy, this is going to be awkward, might as well get it over with?" Joan thought
She sighed and got in the shower, deciding she may as well get ready for the day. Skipping the awkwardness. After the shower, she got dressed or attempted to
"arrgh come on. Arh, how do girls put these on and off?"
After struggling of how to put the dress on more time than she thought and realized she only had like 10 minutes. She realized she should just put on her hoodie and jeans like she did in her timeline or at least until she figured out how to put it on the dress faster. Going over to the suitcase.
"skirt, skirt, skirt, shorts, shorts, shorts, shirt, shirt, shirt, jacket, underwear? Staring at golden colored underwear and bras. Just stick with the sport ones for now. Yoga pants ah finally at the bottom she found pants as she pulled it out. Then notice the bottom. There were stacks of lien in the bottom. She poured the rest out of the clothes out of the bag and notice the entire of the bottom inside was filled with lien. Like the way, you would expect to see with criminal drug dealers.
"what was this girl? How did she get this much money."
Then she notices the tall steamer trunk taller than her. And decided to open as well .it this one, however, it had mixed feelings. Inside it was like a mini work station with cabinets.
(I would picture the Mayfair Black Steamer Trunk Secretary)
There was a smaller steamer trunk inside. it had dust crystals and vials. Back to the bigger one it was placed in it had scientific supplies, makeup. A Computer. A music boom box. CDs, Maps of regions, cooking supplies, water filter, gun and magazines, lock picking equipment, a bit of money, food rations, first aid kit, emergency kit, flare gun. Rope, books, electronics magnets like the one on her greaves with a remote, a camera drone, makeup box. Eye colored contacts. A letter of admission of her being accepted to beacon. A journal and her scroll. Grabbing the letter, her scroll, and the journal
Dear Miss Arc,
As headmaster of beacon academy. I hereby invite you to attend beacon academy. Considering your past and rumors of about you. I have decided to give you a chance to study to become a huntress at one of the world best schools. If you are interested please report to the transport station or to the summer rose's inn in the city of vale for the bus that will take you to the transport station. On the 9th of September 78.
We would look forward to having you attend signed. The headmaster of beacon Ozpin.
"so I was invited to attend in this timeline. I didn't sneak my way in with fake transcripts. Was I like some famous warrior like Pyrrha? But the letter said my past. What did I do something? Looking over to the journal."
Flipping through it but she couldn't really read it, it was in ciphers probably to make anyone that finds it unreadable. Something she did make out was vale contacts, vaccuo, menagerie, and white fang contacts. And another letter in the back of the journal. Seemed older compared to the one Ozpin sent.
Dear Joan.
I just want to say I am proud of you. I believe you did the right thing. I believe you when you say that you didn't do this for gain. I know you are not under the control of Vaccuo. That you did what you did because it was the right thing to do and I know you are committed to this. You're all alone now and on your own. This sword I sent to you is named Corcea Mors it belonged to me and my father and his. Your older sisters never wanted it because they thought they were ineffective in today's time and had better ones now. I thought that if I ever had a son I would give it to him. But now even if I had a son it would be better in your hands. It may not be like the one your mother had made for you or your sisters. But it is still a good weapon. Keep this not just to protect yourself with. But also as a reminder that even though the rest of the family has denounced you. I believe you and I am supporting you. I am proud of you. I love you and I know you will grow up to be a great woman. Be safe.
Joan noticed Letter was worn out like it was crumbled up and cried on.
Joan mentally "so that is why I have Corcea Mors and not my older sisters but. This raises more questions. What did I do? Vaccuo? I'm alone? My family denouncing me?
Searching through her scroll nothing unusual. After contemplating the many different and possible situations of how this girl could have gotten all that money and the items. And what kind of person she was. Joan reminded her self that she was in a hurry and only had 5 minutes left. She quickly put the clothes back in the suitcase and then tried stuffing in the dress in the suitcase .after a while of struggling to put it. She eventually manages to close it.
Then she then just put on the pumpkin Pete hoodie, pants than the other armor pieces and got her sword and suitcases and head out for the bus.
The bus scene
Outside the clouds were like shining down on them. Joan, mentally" it is like the world is shining down on me. my future is looking bright." Seeing the other Students lined up as Glynda was checking them in line noticing some friends like Ruby, Ren and Nora, getting checked off then putting their stuff in the hold and getting on. She got in line.
"Miss Arc?" Glynda said
Glynda looking a bit perplexed at her.
"Is there something wrong?" Joan said
"Are those eye colored contacts?"Glynda asked
"What no," Joan responded
Glynda leans in close to Joan.
"You have silver eyes," Glynda stated
"Um, I don't understand what is going on?" Joan asked
"It's just that the picture you gave us looks different," Glynda told her.
Showing her the picture. Of how the original Joan arc looked. For one she was wearing the dress with her armor but her hair was in a double twisted low buns style. And she had blue eyes.
"I'm wearing blue eye colored contacts in my photo?" Joan asked
"Yes. you are. You look so different you're not wearing your dress and your hair isn't done."Glynda said
"I just didn't have time to style it. And my dress had problems you know the nightmare I had. It slowed me down and it really has me off. I am a student"
Going opening her journal and pulling out the letter
"here is my acceptance letter"
"I know it is you Miss Arc but" "HONK" Glynda was cut off.
The bus driver honked to get her attention. The bus driver told her they are on a schedule.
"Miss Arc If you ever need to talk to someone to work through your struggles. Know that I am here as the school's counselor. Please board the bus."Glynda said
The sound of a sports bike behind them it was yang looks like she was going to follow the bus. Having her stuff placed in the hold. Joan bowed, stepping into the bus making her way to the back lucky it was empty. Glynda sitting down in the front of the bus.
Glynda got out her scroll and typed a message to Ozpin "I just found another silver eyed girl"
The bus took off almost immediately after Joan sat down in the back.
The writer notes: OK so I took the advice about using quotations marks. I think this is what review meant. As for the paragraph breaks don't really know how to do that. I press shift and enter but it doesn't show up. Listening to it now should sound better now hopefully. I have the first what 5 chapters written but I got to remake them into like this. anyway I hope you guys enjoy this story.