I have decided that I want to redo Falling for Criminal because the story didn't go the way I wanted it to. Please read! I'm sure you'll like this one better. Just so you know what happened to the story... I deleted it! Ok! On with the story! Ha!

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I can't believe it! My own mother gave the case I've always wanted to my enemy! Sure she's my boss but come on! I've always wanted this case! It's for revenge! That group of criminals killed him! Who? My father! They attacked his headquarters and they killed him! There were 20 men bur I've had my eye on the guy who killed him. He's one of Christopher McLean's ( Chris ) bodyguards. I want to pound him so bad! Damn it mom! Why do you have to go and give it to Heather! I stomped into the mansion. My mother is rich. She's not a rich bitch. She's just a friendly rich person. But right now I don't think she's friendly at all. My mom was talking on the phone. "Yes. OK. Mmhmm. She's pretty mad about it. Should I give it to her? I need your advise." My mother said. Her back was facing me so she didn't notice I was there. Then she heard my and ended the conversation. "Oh hi sweetie!" She said. "What was that mom?" I asked. She was the 'Big Boss'. "Well um... It was a friend. Anyways... How would you feel... if I gave you the case instead?" My mother asked. "I would feel that your the best mom in the world and I would be so happy to but those guys behind bars." I said. "The call was about the case. I decided that... You can have it. I already told Heather." My mom said. I was the happiest girl in the world. Or Goth in the world. I ran up to my mom and gave her a hug. "THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!" I squealed. My mom hugged me and said I deserved it. I packed my bags with the million my mother gave me. Yes a million. We get access to the money printer and we get to print out as much money as we want. A phone, gun, bullet proof vest, clothes, shoes and a few other stuff and I was on my way to L.A. "GWEN! IZZY'S HERE TO TAKE YOU TO THE AIRPORT!" Mom yelled. I ran downstairs with my bags. This is gonna be fun. Ha. I went downstairs. I gave a hug to my mom and said bye. I went outside to the car and said hi to Izzy. "Hey! I'm like, so happy for you!" Izzy said happily. We drove to the airport. We got there just in time. The plane was leaving in five. I said goodbye to Izzy and went onto the plane. I looked through the files Izzy gave me to pass the time.

Bridgette Davidson

Description: Blonde surfer who loves animals and shiny things.

Age: 18

Height: 5ft 4

Job: Designer

Assistant: Lindsay Tane

Ranking: Bronze

Crimes Committed: Steals world famous clothing, jewelry, shoes, etc.

Status: Dating Geoff.

Geoff Mawry A.K.A The Cowboy.

Description: Blonde cowboy who always wears a hat.

Age: 18 1/2

Height: 5ft 8

Job: Murderer and Stealer

Assistant: None

Ranking: Silver

Crimes Committed: Stole from the White House, murdered celebrities and more.

Status: Dating Bridgette.

Duncan Froy A.K.A The Right Hand Man

Description: Olive with a green Mohawk and lots of piercings.

Age: 18 1/2

Height: 6ft

Job: Murderer, Rapist, Stealer, RCMP's 3rd Most Wanted.

Assistant: None

Ranking: Gold

Crimes C: Raping, Murdered All of the Old Ladies in the retirement home in Canada, Exploded The RCMP's headquarters and more.

Status: Single

Courtney Cominek

Description: Mocha girl with freckles and brown hair.

Age: 17

Height: 5ft 2in

Job: Waitress

Assistant: DJ ( Forced )

Ranking: Bronze

Crimes: NONE

Status: Single

Chris McLean A.K.A The Boss

Age: 27

Height: 6ft 7

Job: Boss, Planner, Murderer, others

Assistant: Lots

Ranking: Platinum

I closed the file folder.

L.A...

When I reached L.A. I rode the motorcycle mom got me and drove off to the closest hotel. I checked into the hotel. But first I had to figure something out. Where was their hideout? I sighed. That I'd have to figure out for myself. I went into my room. I didn't unpack because I was going to go around town. I went outside and took a cab. I put my bags in the trunk. Then I saw something suspicious. I told the driver to stop and let me down here. I got off. I followed the figure that was holding something shiny. Then the person went down in the... sewers. I followed the person quietly. Then I he/she disappeared. Then I saw glitter. I followed the trail into a tunnel and... What the hell? It was... beautiful. OK so think of the most beautiful place on Earth. This place... was waaaaay better. A billion times better to be exact. I walked further into the beautiful 3 story place. There were 2 big doors in front of me. I went in. Then I saw him. Christian McLean himself. He looked at me with wide eyes. "Who are you." He asked. "I'm... Gwen." I said. "What are you doing here?" He asked. "Well... I wanted revenge and to join you." I said with confidence to make it sound realistic. "Why do you want revenge?" He asked. "The police... killed my father." I said. "Oh. Is that so?" Chris asked. "Yes." I said. "Well... I don't know if we can trust you." Chris said. "We?" I said pretending I didn't know who the others were. Chris pressed a button on his desk. Then the criminals came out. "Guys meet Gwen." Chris said. "Who's that McLean? Another one of your girl toys?" Duncan said with a laugh. "No! Shut up or you will be punished!" Chris yelled. Duncan gulped and shut up. "Anyways... Gwen want's to join us and revenge." Chris said. "Revenge for what?" Bridgette asked. "The police killed her father." Chris said. "And my brother and sister. And my pregnant mother." I added. Bridgette, DJ, Lindsay and Courtney gasped. "That's so terrible Greta!" Lindsay said. "It's Gwen." I said. "Oh sorry Greta!" Lindsay said. "I am so sorry for your loss." Bridgette said. "Why do you guys care? I thought you were criminals?" I said. It was true. They murdered. Well some actually. "Well we never murdered anyone before. That's only Geoff and Duncan." DJ said petting a... Bunny? Hm. Must be an animal lover like Bridgette. The others nodded. "Ok then. Duncan since your my right hand man then you get to watch her." Chris said leaning back on his chair. Duncan groaned then sighed. He picked me up and put me over his shoulder as if I were a life sized rag doll. "PUT ME DOWN!" I yelled. He didn't.

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