Hey people, this is my very fistMobiumshipping story and I don't know if I did ok . You will tell me in your reviews. :)
Disclaimer: I don't own Yu-gi-oh, only the plot. :)
For those who don't like lemons don't read between the bold.
Enjoy~
Curious innocence
It was a sunny day, people were working hard, some teenagers were at the pool having a great time, others were busy running around town. But two special teenagers were having the time of their lives.
A small figure of black,blond, purple and white flew through the clouds,it was followed by a tall blond teen."I'm going to catch you Yugi, one of these days." the blond teen said with a grin on his face. The teen was tall, had blond hair and warm chocolate eyes. He was dressed in white and had two fluffy white wings on his back.
"Ha, like that's going to happen Joey." the smaller teen said with a big smile on his face.
Said teen was small for his age, had a child like face and a bit of baby fat, but you could see the maturity in the boy. He had two big jewels for eyes, they were amethyst and were shining with innocence and curiosity, his hair was star shaped and try-colored, blond bangs adored his face, in the middle was black hair that became purple at the tips.
Like Joey he was dressed in white and two big wings were sticking out of his back.
The two teens flew around and through the clouds laughing and smiling and eventually they started chasing each other.
Before they knew it, they were far from paradise. Yes, they were angels, and one of the angels stopped to take a break, they were panting and their wings were slightly heavy.
"Good chase Yugi, they don't call you the king for nothing." Joey said as he tried to tame his hair a little. Yugi only nodded as he was starring in the distance. Joey noticed that his friend was spacing out,but the look on his face said something els. Looking at the direction as his friend, he saw black and purple clouds. How high were they anyway? The only thing they could see were clouds.
"Yugi maybe we should, be getting back." but he didn't listen, he was in some sort of a trance. Flying to the strange clouds, he stopped just in front of one that looked like a portal.
"Yugi." Joey said as he finally caught up with the other angel. He waved a hand in front of his buddy's face,than snapped his fingers, but nothing worked. Getting fed up with this behavior he finally pinched Yugis right wing and suddenly the teen blinked a couple of times.
"Joey?" said teen let out a breath, that he didn't know he was holding.
"Finally, you snapped out of it."
"From what?"
"You were in some kind of a trance, I had to go as far as to pinch your wing, for you to snap out of it." Yugis face suddenly turned red from embarrassment.
"Sorry." Joey grinned and patted Yugis shoulder.
"Hey, no harm done. Now let's go back." Joey started to fly away, but when he turned to see if Yugi was following he wasn't there, he was still in front of the portal thing.
"Yugi come on let's go back. This place isn't safe." the older teen said as he tugged on Yugis sleeve.
"Wait Joey, maybe we were brought here for a reason."
"What kind of reason. To get killed?" Yugi shock his head.
"Think about it, you said I was in some kind of trance, maybe someone needs help." Yugi said as he extended his hand to the portal. But Joey was quick and grabbed the pale angels hand.
"Don't even think about it Yugi. This place might be dangerous." Yugi only smiled.
"Joey, please. God always said that we need to help people who are in distress. Maybe someone is calling us."
"Don't do this Yugi, please." Joey looked at him with sad eyes. Yugi only shock his head and smiled.
"Come on what's the worst that can happen?"
"Get killed." Yugi rolled his eyes.
"We won't Joey, trust me." a comforting smile spread on Yugis face. Joey took a deep breath and let it out.
"There is no way I can stop you is there?" Yugi only shock his head. Slowly Joey let go of Yugis hand.
"Just be safe Yugi."
"I will."
As Yugi extended his hand and touched the cloud, it suddenly started to glow. He turned his head and nodded to Joey to follow, but as soon as he went though, the cloud disappeared.
Joey looked around, but saw no black clouds, just normal white ones.
"Yugi."
"Yugi" he started to panic and flew around in circles.
"Yugi" no answer, he knew that he shouldn't have let Yugi go, he should have tried to make him stay. But no he had to let Yugi go.
Joey gripped his hair and started to fly towards the palace.
'I just hope nothing bad happens. Please be safe Yugi.' Joey thought and he continued to fly.
Just as Yugi went trough the portal, he felt a strange calming and relaxing sensation take over. He blinked and shock his head, turning around to wait for Joey,he was met by a wall?
Touching the smooth surface, he started to panic.
"Joey?"
"Joey? Can you hear me?" a few tears fell from his amethyst eyes.
"Joey." he said barely above a whisper. He folded his hands into fists and his body shock. Big tears were rolling down his pale cheeks.
'I should have listened to him. He said it was dangerous But I get this feeling that I need to be here. But why?' Yugi thought as he wiped away his tears.
Yugi looked around, but only saw darkness.
'Where am I anyway?'
Starting to walk he put his hand on the wall and tried to listen to something anything, to get an idea where he was.
Listening closely he heard someone move and he felt that the wall ended. He popped his head around the corner and saw two guards that looked like monsters leave. He put a hand on his mouth to keep himself from gasping. What was this place?
Slowly and silently he approached the door that the beasts left. There were two doors, and they were big. They were carved with ancient hieroglyphics and two bat like wings stood in the middle.
Touching the door it cracked open, just enough to be hidden, but to see what's inside.
Looking around the room, which looked like a Pharaoh's room from Ancient Egypt, his eyes stopped on the bed. Two figured were lying on it and one was moaning and arching his back.
(Lemon start here )
The figure that was slowly rocking in a teasing manner was tanned and his hair was black with crimson tips, blond bangs could be seen too. Two black bat like wings were sticking out of his back and were spread to maximum. His tail was intertwined with the person below him, which could have passed as his twin. But only he had pale skin and had less blond bangs, his wings were fluttering from time to time and his nails dug in the skin of the man above him.
"Atem please." the pale teen said in a pleading but firm voice. Said person smirked.
"What do you want Yami?" as he continued his teasing pace.
"Please Atem, harder. Faster." Yami pleaded. Smirking again he decided to have mercy on his lover and started a fast pace. Trusting hard and fast, with each trust striking Yamis prostate, Atem closed his eyes in bliss as Yami screamed in pleasure. Giving a hard trust Yami screamed and released on their stomachs. After a few more trusts, Yami's walls clamped around his member, making him release his seed deep inside Yami.
Both lay there, panting, than Atem leaned down and kissed Yami passionately.
Yugi bit his lip and continued to hold his hand on his mouth, but he bit harder than intended and blood started to fall.
Atem snapped his head up and made a motion with his hands and the doors flew wide open. Yugi gasped and stumbled in, but managed to regain his balance. Looking up he was met by two pairs of lust filled crimson eyes. Taking a step back, he found out he couldn't, trying desperately to move, but with no luck. A deep baritone chuckle reached his ears, he snapped his head up and saw that Atem was smirking.
"Well, well, well what do we have here?" Said Atem in a deep baritone voice that send shivers down Yugis spine. Suddenly he heard another chuckle.
"It seems that we have a little intruder in the palace." said Yami.
"Your right Yami, he is no problem at all is he?"
"No not at all. He can easily be crushed." both teens smirked and Yugi gulped and he tried more and more to escape.
"Don't even bother, you will never break the spell puny angel." Atem spat and looked at him through narrowed eyes.
"Don't be so hard on him Atem, he is only an angel." Yami said and smiled wickedly.
"You're right, we can have some fun with him." Atem said as he slipped out of Yami who groaned in disappointment. Yugi only looked at them with curious eyes. Both teens on the bed noticed that and raised an perfectly shaped eyebrow.
"What are you looking at?" Atem almost hissed.
"What were you doing?" Yugi asked bluntly. Atem and Yamis eyes widened and then they both smirked.
"You don't know what we were doing? Yugi shock his head.
"You mean this? Atem asked and with one roll of his hips he was buried inside on Yami who moaned in pleasure. Atem started to move, hitting with every trust Yamis prostate, who was moaning uncontrollably.
"This? You don't know what this is?" Atem asked without ceasing his trusts. Yugis face became red and his private part had suddenly started to react. Not trusting his voice he nodded. Atem smirked at the boy,somehow watching the boy shift from one foot to the other and his red face and big eyes were very arousing. He gave one particular hard trust and Yami screamed and he groaned. Something white came out of Yamis member after that he fell back on the bed after he had arched up. Atem removed himself from Yami, his member was still a bit erect.
"This is called sex, little one" Atem said as he moved his hand though his sweaty hair.
"Sex" Yugi said under his breath, but both teens heard it because of their hearing. This dirty word coming out of that little pretty mouth was arousing, both groaned.
"Yes , sex, little one." Yami said as he rolled on his stomach
"Hey, stop calling me little one. I have a name you know." Yugi tried to glare, but it came out as a pout. A smile graced both teens faces, which disappeared as quickly as it came.
"Oh do tell, what is your name, little one?" Atem asked as he lied on his back and his arms behind his head.
"It's Yugi."
"Yugi, game. I like it." Yami said as he put his head on Atems chest.
"Well Yugi, it's a pleasure to meet you." said the dark skinned teen.
"Who are you anyway and where am I?" Yugi looked around the room again and spotted a lot of jewels and a crown.
"You are in my kingdom of course and I'm am the King." Atem said as he got up and walked towards Yugi.
"And Yami is my mate, and we like to experiment with new things." Atems black wings folded behind his back and his tail was twitching. Snapping his fingers Yugi fell on his knees, right in front of Atems member.
"Suck." he commanded.
"What?" Yugi asked and tried to move, but found it impossible yet again.
"Do you want to know, how it feels when having sex?" Atem asked as he crossed his arms on his chest. Yugi looked at him with two big amethyst jewels and his member twitched.
"Yes."
"Than suck." Atem commanded again. Yugi looked at him with curious eyes again, than looked at Atmes cock. It was thick almost to his bellybutton, it was just the right size. Not too thick and not too long.
"How do you do this?" Atem looked at him and blinked.
'Does that kid even know what a penis is?' Atem thought. Yami chuckled and the king glared at him.
"Listen to what I say. Put your mouth on the head. Yesthat's it, now flick your tong-AH" Atem moaned as Yugi took the tip in his mouth and started to suck on it, he could taste the cum from his previous activity with Yami. He found out he could move his hands and moved one hand to the base of Atems dick. He moaned again as Yugi licked the tip and the slit. Atem was starting to melt in a puddle of goo. Yami had given him blowjobs, but this. This was true heaven. He was almost regretting what he was about to do, almost.
As Yugi licked the tip again, he slowly started to take more of Atem, looking at Yugis pale skin against his own tanned one was beyond erotic. Yugi, licked the tip again, and looked up and saw Atem had closed his eyes and Yami watching them intensely with darkened crimson eyes. Gulping at the intense look, his throat clamped around the kings member. Atem, fisted his hands in Yugis hair and moved the teen back, than pushed him back on his member. Yugi screamed as Atems member touched the back of his throat.
"Easy, there little one. Don't struggle, just relax your throat." Yugi looked up and was met by the kings deep red eyes. Yugi put his hand back on Atems member and relaxed his throat and took more of the king. Groaning, at the heat and tight cavern that surrounded his member and that talented tongue, he groaned again and gripped Yugis hair as he came. Yugis eyes widened as he tried to move away, but the hands on his hair prevented him from escaping. Tears started to fall down the his eyes as he struggled. Removing his member from Yugis mouth, the teen immediately tried to spit it out, but Atem grabbed his chin and forced him to look him in the eyes.
"Swallow it." Atem said, but the teen shock his head.
"I said swallow it." Atem glared at him and from reflex, he gulped, swallowing the seed. Coughing a bit, he massaged his throat. Some cum had fallen down his chin and his tunic, making a mess.
"Now look what you did. You made a mess. Well, we can't have that." Atem smirked and snapped his fingers and the tunic disappeared, leaving him in his birthday suit.
Atem roamed the teens body, suddenly he head a purr from the bed. Turning around he saw Yami looking at Yugi intensely, roaming him body.
"Like what you see?" Atem asked teasingly.
"Very." Yami said licking his lips. Atem went to the bed and kissed Yami hungrily, pushing his tongue in the all too willing mouth. Starting an open mouthed kiss, Yugi could clearly see their tongues, dancing with each other.
A whimper escaped his mouth as he put his hand over his member.
Atem watched their little one. Wait their little one? Hmm... he liked it. Atem pulled away and walked to Yugi, cupping his cheeks he pulled him up with ease.
Looking up, he could see the kings eyes, they were such a dark red that it looked almost demonic. Atem brought their lips together and the little angels eyes almost popped out of his eyes. What was this called? He had heard Joey say it, key, ki- kiss, that's it kissing, Atem was kissing him. And this was his first kiss,somehow this felt special. Suddenly Atem licked his bottom lip and he gasped, giving the older teen the opportunity to slip his tongue in his wet and hot mouth.
Yugi suddenly moaned, completely melting against Atem. Putting his hands on the other teens chest he got on his toes and kissed back. Atem was a bit taken aback, but quickly got over it.
The kiss turned more heated and passionate. There wasn't only lust, there was something els. As they broke apart for air, Atem heard Yami groan, turning around he saw that Yami was literally fucking the silk sheets, chuckling at that,Yami glared at him.
"Do you know how arousing was that stunt you pulled?" Yami said.
"Hmm I would like to see." Atem said with a smirk on his face. Hearing the words Yami got up and with inhuman (not that they were human anyway) and slammed Yugi against the wall. Yugi gasped at the sudden impact, and Yami attacked his lips, slipping his tongue inside. Yugi moaned and arched his back as he felt Yamis wings touch his own.
Unconsciously, Yami intertwined their fingers and continued to kiss the little one senseless.
Yugi was running out of breath and his grip on Yamis hands tightened. Sensing that he let go of the teens mouth a thin line of saliva connecting them, which quickly snapped, he attacked his neck. Yugi could only gasp and moan.
This was all to new for him. Feeling something in his stomach tighten, painfully he let out a whimper. Yami stopped his ministration on Yugi neck as he heard the teen whimper.
"It hurts." suddenly the teen said. Yami smirked.
"Where does it hurt?" he asked innocently.
"Down there." Yugi said with a blush on his face.
"Oh you mean here?" Yami said gripping the little ones dick and starting to pump it up and down.
"Ohh, ahh," the teen in a matter of seconds became a writhing mess. Yami started to pump him faster as the coil in Yugis stomach tightened more and more and finally it snapped.
"Ahh." Yugi screamed as he came, his seed spilling all over Yamis hand.
Yami brought his hand to his lips and licked the little angels seed.
"How does he taste?" Atem asked. Yami turned around and saw Atem sitting on the bed his legs crossed, his member fully erect and throbbing with need.
"Why don't you find out." Yami went to the bed and kissed Atem. He wrapped his hands around Yamis wrist as Yami wrapped his around his neck. The kiss turned heated and a battle for dominance started, which Atem won. They were interrupted by a low moan. Breaking the kiss, both turned around and saw Yugi, shifting his legs to hide his erection.
Atem snapped his fingers and Yugi found himself off of the floor and on the bed. Both the king and him mate, looked at their pray.
Both arms tossed above his head, one more to his ear, and one leg bent. Both licked their lips.
"Mmm little one. You look so delicious." Yami said as he crowed to Yugi and straddled his hips. Leaning down, he captured those rosy lips in a passionate kiss. Yugi moaned in the kiss and gave Yami the opportunity to slip his tongue inside. Touching his tongues with their little one, he started a little war. Yugi tongue moved in unimaginable ways, almost making him louse the fight. He quickly regained his senses back and kissed back more dominantly and won the war. Giving the little one time to breath he looked at Atem.
"Mmm, he tastes divine. Come, join us Atem." Yami purred, his eyes half lidded. Atem licked his lips and crowed to them. He took Yamis lips in a kiss then, let them go. He started to nip at Yugis neck , Yami did the same, but on his right side.
Yugi was moaning and panting. Atem looked up from Yugis neck and looked Yami in the eyes. He nodded and stood up from the bed. Yugi whimpered from the loss, but Atem kissed him passionately and he quickly forgot.
The king felt the bed dip and saw Yami had returned with a bottle in hand. He gave it to Atem who slicked tree finger, but before he could do anything, Yami grabbed his hand and licked the tip of his middle finger.
"Strawberry. I think he's going to enjoy it." Yami said smirking. Atem smirked and chesterly kissed Yami.
Atem kissed Yugi again and Yami attacked his neck, making him moan, slowly making his way to his chest and taking one nipple in his mouth, teasing it. Slowly the king trailed his hand between Yugis legs. Deepening the kiss more, he circled one finger around the little ones entrance, Yugi noticed something at his entrance, but Atem kissed him deeper. Slowly pushing his index finger in the tight entrance, Yugis eyes shot open and he desperately tried to get away.
"Shh, little one. Relax." Atem said as he trailed his other hand's index finger over Yugis cheek. Meanwhile Yami took the other nipple in his hand and started to massage it while he sucked on the other .That made Yugi moan and loosen up. That gave Atems the opportunity to slip his finger in to the hilt. Tears pricked at Yugis eyes.
"Come on Yugi, relax, it would be easier and less painful." Yugi slowly relaxed his body and Atem started to pump the finger in and out, when he felt Yugi had relaxed enough he added a second finger. The little angel cried out at that, tears falling down his face.
"Please, stop. It hurts." Yugi cried out as Atem pushed his fingers out and back in again.
"You were the one who started this Yugi. Don't you dare back down now." Yami said and looking him straight in the eyes. Yamis expression softened as he saw those big teary jewels. Kissing him for distraction, Atem slowly started to pump his fingers in and out. Yamis hand slipped to Yugis member and started to pump it. Suddenly Yugi broke the kiss and screamed. Atem smirked and pushed his fingers in once again, making the little angel scream in pleasure.
Inserting the third and final finger he twisted them, making them rub against Yugis walls and making him produce choked screams.
Pulling the fingers out Yugi whined and both man chuckled."Look who's whining now, I remember just minutes ago someone begging for me to stop." Atem mocked. Yugi groaned and opened his lust filled eyes. Both mans breaths stopped and almost came on the spot. Yugis look was so erotic and his innocence was a plus.
Atem was barely restraining himself, so was Yami. Atem grabbed the bottle, but tiny hands snatched it away. Yugi pured a generous amount on his hand and slowly and tortuously lubed Atems cock. The king closed his eyes in bliss, Yugi slowly started to fist his cock, but Atem grabbed his hands."You don't want me to cum just yet little one. Wait until we are inside you." Atem purred the words in Yugis ear, then he started to nibble on the lobe, making the little one moan.
Suddenly Yugis eyes widened and he pulled back.
"Wait did you say we?" Yugi felt a sharp nip at the back of his shoulder and turned around to see the kings mate.
"You haven't forgotten me have you?" Yami asked playfully, kissing Yugis shoulder again and biting at it. Yugi closed his eyes and shock his head.
One question was playing in Yugis head and that was 'How are they both going to take me?'
He was all too new to this, but he was a fast learner.
Atem fell back on the bed and took Yugi with him. Somehow the angles bottom ended up right at the kings cock.
"Now, relax Yugi, try not to squeeze me too much." Yugi nodded and he placed his hand on Atems cheeks and kissed him. He felt the kings hands on his cheeks,spreading them. Yugi willed his body to relax. Slowly Atem started to penetrate him and Yugi squeezed his eyes tightly.
"Shh, relax,let Atem in." Yami said as he started to kiss down the teens back.
"Ra, Yugi you are so tight." Atem and Yugi were both panting and a thin layer of sweat covered their bodies. Yugis hands fell from his cheeks and gripped the bed sheets, tears started to fall from the angels eyes. He wanted to stop,but if he told them he would feel like he was giving up on everything. Strange huh?
Finally Atem was buried to the hilt and tears were falling down the pale face.
The king removed one hand from his bottom and wiped the tears away.
"Just relax, it will start to feel good soon." Atem whispered to the boy and kissed his forehead.
Why was he so good with this person, well angel? They were too soft. He wanted to just fuck the teen senseless, but something tugged at his hear and wouldn't let him. Looking up at Yami he knew that he felt the same.
Yugi wiggled his hips a bit, making a hundred emotions explode in Atem and Yami. Both crimson eyes teens looked at each other. How did Yugi have a mind link with them? Those were his emotions. Searching his memory he remembered how he found the boy, blood.
Well, they were going to keep him anyway.
Atem slowly pulled out and pushed back in, making pain flow through the link.
"It hurts." Yugi whispered, but they heard it anyway. The king kissed Yugi and Yami nipped at his shoulder. The angel moaned at that.
Slowly starting to trust in and out, Yugi relaxed a bit, the pain was slowly disappearing. Atem felt that Yugi was relaxing and angled himself in a different direction , which made Yugi scream.
The king smirked and with every trust hit Yugis prostate. Yugi screamed in pleasure and arched his back, suddenly he felt something thick and hard push against his entrance.
Yugi abruptly turned around and saw Yami. The black winged teen pulled him in a passionate and distracting kiss. Atem pumped his cock and was trusting in him. Slowly Yugi lost his mind and relaxed just enough for Yami to slip in. Yamis tip pushed in and Yugi broke the kiss and cried out. He felt like he was being ripped in two. Falling back on Atem he gripped his biceps and the king winced a bit. He felt Yugis pain, and it was a lot.
"Yami stop." but Yami was too lost in pleasure to hear him.
"It hurts." Yugi said, big, fat tears falling down his face.
"Yami." Atem hissed. The king closed his eyes and concentrated, sending the pain that Yugi felt through their mind link, Yami finally snapped out of it. He looked down and saw Yugi shaking and crying, and his knuckles white from holding tightly at Atems biceps.
"Oh no, I'm so sorry." he unconsciously moved back making Yugi scream in pain. He dug his nails in Atems arms.
"Please it hurts." Yugi whispered with a broken voice. But they were too far to stop now. Yami gulped and looked at Atem who took a deep breath and nodded. He gripped Yugis but cheeks tightly and kissed him for distraction. Yami took a deep breath and with one trust he was completely buried in Yugi. The angel ripped his lips from the king and screamed on top of his lungs. He gripped and scratched at Atems arms, making blood fall. Yugi was shaking and crying. He felt like he was ripped in two.
Above him Yami was shaking from pleasure. Yugis walls were squeezing him in just the right places and the rubbing of Atems dick, was just so pleasurable, he could have cum on the moment, if it was not for the pain coming from their link. Looking down he saw Yugi shaking and crying. Atem was whispering sweet nothings in his ear, raining him with kisses and trying to loosen up Yugis death grip on his arms. Yami blinked a couple of times to get rid of the fuzzy vision. Slowly he leaned down and kissed Yugis back and rubbed soothing circles at his lower back. Slowly he felt Yugi loosen up and moan. After a few more minutes, he gave an experimental roll of his hips and hissed in pain. Atem kissed him and slowly drew out,Yami did the same and slowly pushed back in. They touched Yugis prostate and the boy gasped. Taking it as a good sign, they drew away again and pushed back in, making Yugi moan. They kept the slow pace for a while, just enjoying Yugi moan and squeeze their members. Yugi closed his eyes in pleasure and started to push back on their cocks.
"Please faster." Yugi whispered and both complied. They drew away fast and pushed back in hard. Yugi screamed and pre-cum leaked out of his member. They didn't dare go very fast, in case of hurting their little one kept the fast pace, but not very fast for a while, but they got bored from it. Taking their chances they withdrew much faster and pushed back in. Yugi screamed and arched his back. Connection with Yamis chest, he turned the angels head and kissed him, slipping his tongue inside he started a little war. Atem started to fist Yugis cock making him scream louder. His screams soon turned hoarse. Atem set up, that made him go deeper and kissed Yugi. He moaned in the kiss and Yami left love bites on his neck. The king pulled away and look Yami straight in the eyes and both nodded. Both started to kiss Yugis neck, their fangs rising. In the same time they both bit him making him let out a scream and cuming . Both man trusted one more time and felt Yugis walls clamp around they as the groaned and sunk their fangs deeper as they both came almost at the same time. Yugi fell limp in their arms, completely exhausted. Yami and Atem drew away and licked their lips. Atem wrapped Yugis arms around his neck and lifted him up. Both slipped out and Yugi hissed in pain.
(Lemon End)
Laying him on the bed, they both laid on either side of him. He curled around Atem and Yami wrapped an arm around his wrist. Atem kissed his sweaty forehead and Yami his cheek.
"Little one?" Atem asked and Yugi looked up with sleepy amethyst eyes.
"To answer your question. Welcome to Hell." both man chuckled as they saw Yugi only nod, not registering what they said and fell asleep. Suddenly something white caught his eyes. Looking down he saw Yugis wings, they were still white but the tips of the feathers, were black. Caressing a feather, Yugi moaned unconsciously. Both demons chuckled. Yami kissed Atem and intertwined their tails, than he snuggled to Yugi and fell asleep.
Atem chuckled and kissed Yugis forehead again and caressed his feathers.
"Yes, welcome to Hell little one. Welcome to Hell."
A/N
Well now please tell me how I did. I sort of figured out that writing a mobiumshpping story is hard.
It sort of took me two days to write it.
When you sleep on it you have better ideas. :D
So you know. I'm going to do one more chapter, because some things aren't clear. I think.
R&R please.
*Gives out ice cream. You choose the flavor.*