ok NEW story, becuase people stopped reviewing my old one hopefully this one is better i had it up before but the gammer thing bit me in the ass so heres the new and improved version.
please tell me what you think

lov

Sapphire

CHAPTER 1

Lily slipped into her deep purple satin dress.

She laced the laces tight to accent her breasts, and make her waist seem smaller.

She sighed as she summed herself up in the mirror. "One last thing." she muttered as she slit her dress up to her mid thigh and tore the threads that held the straps on.
"Perfect." she whispered just as she heard a knock on her door.

"Alright Mac im coming," she replied dryly. Lily was a whore. No denying , she was the best whore in Tortuga, but she still hated her life. Pleasing men but never finding pleasure.

It was boring.

She opened the door to find the ferverent old man wringing his hands nervously, he stopped and gaped.

"Lily Lamont, I've known you to dress dangerously but this.. this is.. well..." Mac couldn't think of any words to describe her.

"Oh but you haven't seen it all!" she said whirling around to show the extremely low V cut in the back of her dress behind the satin laces that held it together.

"Bloody hell. You won't be out there for long!" he smirked

" That's the plan." she said smirking back.

Lily slinked downstairs whirling about to show how her dress clung to her hips as eyes began to wander in her direction.
She saw the hopeful eyes of a few drunkards, which made her smirk, then she saw the angry look of the wenches already on their laps, which made her smile grow.

She noticed a rogue pirate at the back of the tavern with at least 2 girls on his lap and probably 3 sitting around him flirting.

"Must be worth having." She mumbled ,deciding to decend upon her new found prey.

Jack was telling his story to a few hopeful whores , noticing that none of them were really at all attractive, just well built, as he would put it.

Then she walked by.

She was gorgeous. Her dark eyes alluring, almost the same deep amethyst as her dress, her loose dark brown curls were hypnotizing as they bounced, reaching just past her shoulder blades, then as she passed he saw the back of her dress was cut almost past her waist line, revealing a very famous tattoo. He had heard tales from many seafarring men in his travels about that tattoo. A new one in tortuga. The tattoo that would be found on the most satisfying harlot in the caribbean.

At that moment Jack knew what he had to do.

Lily felt a hand on her nearly bare shoulder When she turned she saw it wasnt the man she had tryed to seduce, but a larger stout man with yellow teeth.

"Ello miss" he slurred.
"Ello sir." she replied

"I must tell you before you decide to purhase a night with me, I am currently engaged to the govenor of ...um... France... and , well if he finds out we've slept together.. he'll kill you." she lied Jack overheard and couldnt keep from smiling, she was a terrible liar.
The drunken mans eyes widened in horror at the thought,
"Oh, well my apologies then miss," he said dissapointedly.
Lily smirked and leaned towards his ear and whipered huskily, letting her words drip like venom.
"A kiss wouldn't be too much trouble though ..." she heard the man gulp and passionatley pressed her lips against his.
Jack watched highly amused...oh yes... he had to have her.

Lily pulled back and smiled as the alchohol finally caught up with him and he passed out.

"Dont worry mate, happens to the best of us." she smirked realizing all eyes were on her.

Before she could take a breath about 50 men swarmed around her trying to make offers to buy her.

Suddenly she felt someone grab her arm and pull her from the mass of men.

She turned and was realieved to see it was the handsome man she had been trying to charm.

He was even more handsome close up. He had a red bandana underneath a worn leather tricorne hat, that held back his mane of hair. Mane was the only real word to describe it, a huge mass of dark hair, with an unusual assortment of beads and other odds and ends. His deep chocolate eyes were hypnotic and even more so because they were outlined in kohl.

"Ello luv, " He said in a rich husky voice " Ello,.. Lily Lamont." She offered her hand and he took it in his, brushing his warm lips against it "Captain Jack Sparrow." He said " I would like to take adavantage of yer services"
"How much are ye willing te pay?" She asked not really caring, she'd snogg this man for free!
"10 shillings." He offered.
"Done." She said smiling widely


first chapter done

RnR!