Hey , King Spike Rules here and this si a story with the help of my good friend, Lexboss.
Chapter one.
It was a calm, sunny day in Ponyville as Fluttershy was in the middle of the middle of feeding some of her animals lunch when she suddenly heard yelling that caused her to jump and looked around to see if she could see who was screaming. She could not see any one around her and she could have sown that it was getting louder until she looked up, seeing a figure falling from the sky and hit the ground with a loud thud.
"Oh dear." she said in horror as she flew over to where the figure hit and she gasped as she saw a normal human, just laying there in the grass and groaning as she saw he was wearing a black leather jacket, white t-shirt under it, and blue jeans with boots on. She slowly walked up to him and gently poked his cheek as she said, "Ummmmm, y-you alive?" She waited a few moments for an answer and then saw his eyes slowly began to open, he turned to look at him as she gave him a small smile. His eyes widen as he looked at the pony-human girl in a white shirt, green skirt and boots. He through the was dreaming as he noticed she also had a horn and wings coming out of her back. He began to stutter a little before passing out.
The young man groans out loud as he slowly placed his hand on his head and began to open his eyes as he looked up at a ceiling, noticing how nice it looked and he groaned again before closing his eyes again. But he then heard a light hum coming form the other room and he turned his head to see the winged girl in the kitchen to his back.
"Ummmmm, h-hello?" he called out to her and watched as she gasped out loud before turning to look at him as she was panting a little as she was looking at him.
"S-sorry." she said as she slowly walked towards him and looked at him as he was laying on the bed watching her as she continued, "A-are you okay?"
"Y-yeah, I'm okay. Thank you." he said as he rubbed his head and groaned more as his head hurt when he heard the door open, and they both turned to look at the door to see a young girl their age with white skin, blue eyes, and golden wavy hair along with a horn and wings like the yellow girl.
"Hey Fluttershy, who's that?" she asked her as she looked at him and began to glare as he gulped out loud, seeing she looked mad at him.
"S-she helped me when I got hurt." the young man said as he explained that he was just walking, minding his business when he suddenly found himself falling to the ground and then saw Fluttershy who helped him.
"Oh, then your safe." she said smiling as she walked over and gently kissed Fluttershy on the lips, causing her to blush and for him to blush too as she stopped before saying, "My names Dawn by the way and this is Fluttershy."
"Nice to meet you, I'm Raven." he said smiling as he shook her hand and Dawn smiled as she began to explain all of things he needed to know about Eqeustia, and then she explained about how she and Fluttershy were alicorn. Which he nodded and smiled as he looked at them before he asked, "So, do you have any way of sending me back home?"
"Hmmm, let me think of it." she said as she began to think it over and tried to figure it out who could help him when she suddenly she had a thought as she said, "You could always go and ask Twilight Sparkle if there is a way she could send you home."
"Twilight who?" he asked her as he was confused at who she had just said as she looked at him confused fro a few seconds herself before remembering he was not of their world.
"Oh, she's a friend of ours that can help who lives in town." she explained as she began to write down a note before handing it to him while saying, "Give this to the girl inside the large tree in the middle of town." He smiled as he took the note and thanked them both before he head out of the cottage, heading the way he was told to go and leaving them alone. Once he was gone Dawn smiled as she flipped Fluttershy's skirt up and looked at her white undies as shebblushed hard while looking down at her.
After leaving the cottage, Raven headed to the town of Ponyville and he quickly found himself in a market place full of females all over the place. He smiled wide as he walked through the crowd and looked up a few of their skirts, getting a slap in doing so until her finally reached the library inside a tree and knocked onto it as he waited for the door to open.
"Hello." a young girl answered it their age who was wearing a light purple shirt and purple skirt with long purple hair with a pink streak inside it along with a horn in her forehead.
"Hello, my name is Raven and I was told you could help me with my problem from Dawn." Raven said as he took out the note and handed it to her, which she took hold of and began to read it until she looked at him smiling,
"Sure, come on in." she said smiling as she turned around and began to walk back in with him following her close behind. She walked through the library, looking through books of all color, shapes, and sizes as he used her magic to read through as many as she could until she smiled wide as she found it. "Alright, I have the answer." she said smiling as she gently put the books away and placed the book on the desk as Raven walked over to look over her shoulder, shocked at seeing the words and he could not read it.
"Ummmm, sorry but I can't read it." he said blushing as he looked at her and she looked at him confused until remembering he was not from their world.
"Oh, right. Well, it explains that to send you home will require three items. A rare type of rock, a piece of cloud with loving rain, and cider from a farmer." she said smiling as she wrote these down and then handed it to him as he took it nervously and looked at the note as he still could not really read it.
"Ummmm, o-okay." he said smiling as he walked out of the door and opened it, turning to look at her and watched her wave him off as he let out a loud sigh before leaving the library.
After leaving the library, Raven began to walk down the street as he looked at all the girls who where walking and talking about stuff as he looked at the list he was give. He was a little confused as to what any of these things met and how could he get a piece of a cloud was a main thought of his mind, but he was caught off guard when he saw a young lady bouncing down the street. She had curly pink hair, skin, and was wearing a white t-shirt with blue sleeves and pink heart in the middle of her chest, a large pink skirt with three balloons on it, and matching boots. Yet the thing he noticed most was that as she bounce down the street, her skirt flipped up and her undies were in clear view for any one to see. He watched her bounce towards him while also opening her eyes, revealing she had big, blue ones, and she looked at him with a big smile.
"Hi yay, dad." she said with a happy tone and stopped as she bounce in front of him as he looked at her, confused as he watched her jump up and down in place.
"Ummm, excuse me?" he asked her as he was trying to make sure he heard her right and it was not just him hearing things.
"Oh, I said hi yay, dad." she said smiling as she repeated what she said as she was smiling at him and he looked at her even more confused as he took a step back from her.
"B-but I can't be your dad. I just arrived in this place and don't even know your mother." he said as eh was not sure what he should do now and tried to take a few steps back as she moved a little closer, giving him a better view of her skirt moving up and down with every jump.
"What's that?" she asked him as she took the paper from it and looked it over as she read it all, and then tossed it back at him as she said, "Oh, you need to head to Applejack's."
"Apple who?" he asked her confused as she continued to bounce around him and he could not help but stare at her constant reveal of her undies to him as her skirt flew up.
"She's a friend of mine that live on a farm just outside of town." she said smiling as she stopped bouncing and placed her hands in his as she continued, "I'm just so happy your back and we can finally have a lot of fun together dad."
"I really not sure why you keep calling me dad, but I should get going." he said as he pulled his hands away from her and was about to walk off when she grabbed his shoulder.
"Wait, I have something for you." she said smiling as he turned around to ask her what when she suddenly shoved a pair of undies in his face. He took them and looked at them in shock before looking at her, watching her wink at him and then began to bounce as he looked, seeing her flank bounce away with a mark of three balloons on both of her thighs. Raven blushed hard as he looked at them in his hand and then looked back at her for a few moments before shrugging his should, and then pocketed them as he followed down a path that lead out of the town.
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