First fanfic! Tell me what you think~~~!


The two fillies sat in their clubhouse with a notebook, flipping through the pages.

"We've tried all of these! Scootaloo think of some more!" A white unicorn said, exasperated.

"I guess we have, and you think of some." the purple-maned pegasus sighed, fluttering her small wings like crazy.

"Hey, where's Applebloom? She said she'd be here at 4:00 and the clock says 4:01!"

"Sweetie Belle, be patient." Scootaloo said. "Maybe something came up."

"I guess..." Sweetie wondered if the pegasus was right. "Where would she be thou-"

"GUYS!" An earth pony screamed as she raced in, knocking down the door. "I got my cutie mark!"

"What?" Both of the others said at the same time.

Applebloom turned so that they could see. On her flank was a black cauldron with an orange liquid inside, bubbling up. The orange was the same colour of her eyes. "I was helping Zecora with a potion and-and this happened!"

"Wow!" Sweetie belle exclaimed. "Does Applejack know?"

"No, I'm going to go tell her!" Apple bloom said then raced off.

Sweetie belle turned to Scootaloo. "Isn't this AWESOME? She got her cutie mark! It's certain we'll get ours soon!"

Scootaloo nodded, slightly distracted. "Yeah..."


A few days later, a certain pegasus also got her cutie mark. A scooter, just like the one she loved so much and owned. She had gotten it when she had done a flip on her scooter, midair. Backwards.

Applebloom and Scootaloo started hanging out together more, without Sweetie belle. They'd always make some kind of excuse and leave her while they went to Sugarcube Corner and talked about their new cutie marks. Sweetie Belle was kept at a distance, but they weren't being extremely rude. Then all of that changed.

Sweetie belle slowly trudged into the clubhouse, not looking where she was going. She bumped hornfirst into a pony when she reached the doorway. She looked up to see Applebloom glaring at her.

"No blank-flanks allowed." She muttered.

Sweetie belle stepped back in shock. She glanced over Applebloom's shoulder and saw Diamond Tiara, Silver Spoon, and Scootaloo sitting inside eating some cake and laughing about something.

Diamond Tiara looked over to the doorway and smiled, though it was an angry, sarcastic smile. "Well if it isn't my favourite blank flank!" She chuckled. Scootaloo and Silver Spoon laughed as Sweetie belle blinked in confusion.

"Wha...what? Apple bloom? Scootaloo?" Her voice cracked. "I..."

"They hang with us now, so shoo, blank flank!" Diamond tiara yelled and Apple bloom pushed Sweetie belle backwards with her hoof.

"Get out!" She said angrily, meeting her eyes. "We don't need blank flanks." The earth pony turned and the door slammed shut.

Sweetie belle stared at the closed door, then bolted, heading as fast as her little legs could carry her to Carousel Boutique.