Hello everyone. Due to popular demand I am redoing/continuing the story. The next few chapters will be a corrected version of the original – chapters of "Who Are You". The reason for this is its been 5 years since I last did a Fan fiction and since then my grammar and spelling have greatly improved, though by no means are they perfect I feel I should correct the others and add to them. Please enjoy the next few chapters, and as always reviews are what keep the stories going.
Corrected Version of Who Are You? Chapter 1
Chapter One—Dreams or Nightmares Which is Worse?
There it is again, the dream that continues to haunt my sleeping hours. One dream, the same dream I always have, the dream of my angel. The angle whose name I grasp to recall as though it was once common to me, but now I can't seem to place. Each time this dream visits me, I feel as though there is a hole in my soul. Like a piece has been taken and in its place an endless void has been left. When I think on the void and how empty I am exhaustion roll over me. My eyes become heavy and all I want is to sleep. To cast this sadness from my dreams and have some peace.
But then with eyes are clear as the sky yet deep are the oceans my angel comes to me. He fills me with emotions that had long been forgotten. Those same eyes are filled with compassion for me but then are slowly glazed over with fear. As I watch my angel I feel as though I have forgotten some unsaid thing; however, the feeling seems to be forever etched into my mind. My eyes feel as though they will close on their own soon if I try to recall this feeling anymore.
So clearly I can hear his voice calling to me. Then suddenly there is nothing by silence. I see him straining to tell me something important, the thing that is carved in my soul that I had forgotten, but it is not use. I feel the urgency surge through me but slowly my heavy eyes are closing. I catch one final glimpse of my angel only to see tears rolling down his face.
For a moment there is nothing but darkness in my dream then suddenly I am in a room with no lights. I can hear the rain behind and the thunder rolling through the sky. After I blink a few times my eyes refocus and there before me is the most beautiful being to ever walk the earth. His hand in mind as he looks at me in an expecting way.
MY ANGEL SO RADIENT HE TAKES MY BREATH AWAY
Joy fills me because he has come back for me. He is so perfect in each and every way. Then one more time he calls my name aloud. It resonates in my ears and warms me to my toes. My name does not even seem worthy enough to leave those perfect lips. I look to meet those same blue eyes that visit me every time I dream. I get so lost in those orbs that time doesn't matter it is just me and my angel. It's like swimming in a crystal clear lake. Nothing else matters but staying right were you are. And right now I don't ever want this moment to end.
MY ANGEL WHO I WANT TO BE WITH FOREVER
Who is this amazing being? Why am I so blessed to be near him? Why is he here? So many things I want to know. Need to know. And all they revolve around him. What is his name? He must have a name as perfect as he. Nothing less would be expected. I want to know so badly. Before I could even stop myself the words flow out of my mouth.
"Who are you?"
Those eyes that had been so hopeful, so full of life, seem to flicker and then in an instant to die. Everything leaves them while I stare into the void I have created. Pain surges through my chest as I recognize the feeling in his eyes. Immediately I want to take the words back and the hurt. Though I don't know why my words have damaged him, there should never have been hurt on my angels face. Silence over takes the room as my lifeless angel seems to be in immense emotional and physical pain. I struggle to find the right words to comfort him to make it all better but all I can do is open and close my mouth again and again. Finally, I opened my mouth to apologize but before I can speak he stands and pulls away from me. My hand slipped from his and a chill runs down my spine. For the first time since I had woken up I fell cold, scared and alone. I looked at my angel hoping to make it all well again.
MY ANGEL PLEASE, PLEASE I BEG YOU JUST SMILE AT ME
Smile at me like you did just a moment ago; do not look as though you will cry. Don't be tormented by the words I said. I want to comfort him but still my voice will not respond. All I am able to muster are some chocking noises before he silences me and speaks again. His silky clam voice held no emotion as he spoke his words.
"Good bye Sasuke. Be happy."
Dagger stab at my heart and soul. This had been entirely my fault, I had driven him away. As his gaze met mine I felt my heart break. Tears fell down his cheeks as he smiled at me. The sight was so pitiful it broke my heart into a million tiny pieces that no matter what I ever did I would never be able to mend. I reached for him, praying I would be able to stop him, able to change his mind. But before I could touch his warmth again he was gone. In a second he had crossed the room and was leaping from the window. He didn't turn back to look at my wounded face that now had fresh tears streaming down. No he just jumped and disappeared from my life. 'This can't happen!' Was all my mind kept playing on repeat.
MY ANGEL IS LEAVEING ME
NO! NO! I will NOT lose my angel. Panicking I jumped to my feet. My legs wobbled below my weight. But I didn't stop, I Couldn't stop! Lunging for the window I felt something catch me around the middle. It was Tsunade, but why would she stop me? It made no sense. She saw how I had hurt him. She had to feel something! My body cried in pain as I tried to fight against her. Every passing second put more and more distance between me and my angel. This was not good.
MY ANGEL I CAN NOT LOSE YOU!
With venom in my voice I turned on her. "Release me this instant!" she glared at me.
"No, there is no reason to follow him. Now calm down." The sternness in her voice all most had be convinced but not this time. This time I had something I had to do. No matter what the consequences I would find him.
"If you don't let me go now then I will never forgive you. I feel as though I'm losing something I shouldn't. And I WILL find him no matter what I have to do." She eyed me curiously.
"Why?" her question threw me off. Why was I so set on following him?
Weakly I answered. "I don't know why. But is doesn't matter why! Something deep inside is telling me I should. And I have never ignored my instincts before so I will not start now. I am going to follow this feeling to the end. No matter what that end may be." By the end of my speech I had regained all my confidence. I was going to find him!
MY ANGEL WHO BY THE INSTANT WAS VANISHING INTO THE NIGHT
Abruptly she released me. She turned away from me as I jumped from the window. I had no time to waste. Every movement my body cried in protest. Every touch tingled in my now numb body. Nevertheless I would not stop, no matter what. Even if my heart stopped beating I would continue on. Physical pain was nothing compared to the whole in my heart at this moment. This pain that was just too real. Like thousands of knives traded turns stabbing at my already weak heart. I clutched it as I ran to make sure it knew I was still alive. I had to hold it together. Other wise it would be too late.
I wasn't sure if I was even running in the right direction. I could only hope I was. My legs kept moving though my mind was going numb along with my body. Everything seemed to go in slow-motion as I ran. The rain seemed to fall in rhythm with my heart as I reached the gate to the village. And then everything stopped.
There beyond the wide doors stood my angel. And never in my life did someone seem so far away. His back was too me as he walked slowly out of my life. Anger pulsated through my body at how easily he was going to leave me. NO! I won't let you go!
MY ANGEL I WILL NEVER LET GO
"Stop…wait, please." My breath hitched in my throat as I tried to talk. It burned to breath. I tried to fellow after him but then of all times my body gave out. My legs collapsed below me as I fell to my knees in the mud. Again I called to him with all the strength left in my wilting body.
"DON'T LEAVE ME ALONE!" I don't know why those were the words I chose. But even as I said them I realized this was why my angel couldn't leave.
I didn't want to be alone again.
MY ANGEL WHO SAVES MY SOUL FROM AN ETERNAL HELL.
That is the reason I chase after my angel. That is the reason I feel so attached to him. Because even though I have forgotten something about him… I know one thing…
I LOVE MY ANGEL!
So don't ever leave me alone, please. Stay with me forever. It's too scary to be alone. I hit the ground hard because of my weakness. Then I look up hoping to catch one last glace of the beauty I might never witness again.
There ahead of me is my angel who I love so much it hurts. The doors close as he stands just beyond them watching me. I go to stand up but he shakes his head no. the rain pounds the earth so hard I can't hear what he's saying. I watch his moving lips wishing I could hear the words he spoke. But none reach me. I am no longer sure if it's just the rain running down my face or if my eyes have betrayed me and started to release the pain I can no longer hold back in the form of tears. The swell in my eyes and the doors are only inches from closing. Suddenly a surge of dread courses through my body.
If those doors close will I ever find him again? My body finally moves thrusting forward to the closing gate. My angel's eyes get big as I slowly tremble towards him on unsteady legs. He smiles at me again with that same sad look from before but this time there is something else. He holds something out in his hand. Though I can't see what it is I can tell it is important to him. A secret treasure he will never part with.
Only feet spate me from him and then with a loud bang the doors close in my face. Like that I can no longer see my angel. Anguish runs through my blood.
"NooooooooooooO." I scream to the cruel fate the world has dealt me. Emotions overflow in my body as I bang on the wall. But it dose not give, not even an inch. Only a wall separates me from my angel. One wall…that's all that's stopping me. I can feel my body fading as I bang and scream to my angel. I plead with him to come back to me. Not to leave me. But my words don't reach his ears. Darkness clouds my mind as my body succumbs to exhaustion. I fall to the ground in defeat. But the last thing I can see is my angel's face as he looks at the item in his hand. The object that is so precious to him, that for the first time that night since I opened my mouth, he truly smiles. Then reality hits me.
MY ANGEL HAS LEFT ME ALONE.
As the darkness takes me I hear a name. A name of someone I should remember. But the harder I listen the quieter it is. Then unexpectedly it's screamed. I bolt awake. Silence is all that greats me when I wake and when I sleep all I feel is sadness. What is this world I live in? I try to recall my dream but once I am awake it all is forgotten to me. It feel so important this name I can't recall. So important it just might break my heart in two.
As always reviews are appreciated. The more support I get the faster I will pop these out. Hope you enjoyed the fixed version. I might take the story in a little different direction. Was consulting my notes on where it was going and I think I have a better idea.
See you soon!