hi everyone this is my first fanfic so i want all yous people ta let me no wats good and wats wrong wit my story and if it just sucks... well hey you dont have to read my stuff. ima tell you somethin with kagome i all ways give her more attatued because i dont like that cry baby stuff no affens to the people who do : ) well on wit my story
ringggggg. yes their goes the lunch bell im starven inuyasha said with his stumic growling. me too come on let go inuyasha. ya lets go miroku.
while the way to the cafateria inuyasha and muiroku met up with the girls kagome,songo,Nera,Gaby,and vicky. (i add my own characiters based on me and my best frends im nera and the other two are my best friends were all pretty so there.i got a short fuse timper and im crazy funny im model is you either like me or you dont.Gabys attude is happy go lucky ,out going, and the good no it all. vickys attude is a retarted, stuiped funny , and a bitch. and were all black not literaly black but like brown. back to the story) all the girls said hey. miroku and inuyasha said hi songo hi kagome hi nvg (aka nera, vicky, and gaby duhhhh)
Nera: ya'll im hungry i've been hungry ever sence school started
gaby: dang nera you all ways hungry.
vicky: I no rightttt.
Inuyasha : ok enough talking about food im hungry lets get to lunch.
every one hurryed up to lunch nera dipped up the hall way ready to eat
5 mins later every one was sitting down at the tabel exept for nera she sat down bout 3 mins ago.
vicky: dang nera i swear you are a hungry hungry hippo
gaby : ha
nera : yup i shurly would be, i love to eat i finished my food in 2 mins
inuyasha : i bet you do.
giving nera a smirk nera giggled
gaby : awwwwwwwwwwwww look at the to love birds.
just then kagome and songo showed up
songo: hey
kagome: hi who's the 2 love birds
she said with a fusstraded face
gaby gave an evil smirk and said
gaby: them to kagome dont they make a perfict couple
she said in a mysteris voice. kagome didnt say any think she just looked away
just then every one heared a voice every one face expreashion was "oh no please dont let it be her-
kikyo: hi inu babyyyyy
kikyo gave inuyasha a death hug
at the same time
kagome :get off him
Nera: get the hell off him bitch
nera blushed at her out burst and sat down slowly. kikiyo payed no attenchen to them and contioned her hug when they stoped huging every one was silent
...nera's pov...
wat i cant belive he let that hefa hug him he's supose to push that bitch of him let her say somein to me let her say somthin smart ima slap the dirty dust of her ugly ass face think im playin
...end of nera's pov...
...gaby's pov...
ah oh somein bout to happen if kikyo say some thin smart to nera i no she gonna smak the dirty dust off her ugly ass face and ima be right there to back her up ima bang theshit out that bitch think im playin
...end of gaby's pov...
...miroku pov...
oh no truble
...end of pov...
...vicky's pov...
if there's trouble and you no it clap your hands "clap "clap if there's trouble and you know it clap your hands
...end of pov...
...kagome's pov...
inuyasha get away from her
...end of pov...
...inuyasha'spov...
trouble
...end of pov...
...songo pov...
please dont fight its bout to be spring brake
...end of pov...
nera:ima out i''l see ya'll later bye come on you too
vicky and gaby left with nera
gaby: can you beleive that gurl
vicky: i noooooo rightttt hey you no wat...
nera and gaby: wat
vicky:butter biscets
nera and gaby: hahahahaha you clown
lets go home
songo: hey nera are you ok
waving and with a big smile
nera: ya im ok but...neven mind
songo: ok girls lets go
---------BACK AT THE CAFATERIA------
miroku: im glad kikiyo left
inuyasha: me too when will that girl learn that nothin she will ever do will not EVER get my attention.
kikyo: HEY YOU WILL BE MINE!
inuyasha:oh your still there
kikyo: yes i...
inuyasha: wat ever lets go miroku
miroku: yes lets
--------------DRIVE HOME-----------
gaby: dang nera chill out it its ok
nera :im not even thinkin bout that girl any more i was thinking about were are we going to go forspring brake?
( oh just to let you no were in a car driving to my house)
vicky : ya were are we going to go
gaby: haha we dont mean you vicky just me and nera
vicky: fake crying why are you guys so mean to me whyyyyyyyyyyy
nera: shut up we were only playing you big cry baby
vicky: so i can go
gaby: yes vicky
nera : ima turn on the radio
boody boody boody boody rokin every were boody boody boody boody rokin every were rokin every were
I found you miss new boody get it ta gava and bring it back to me
gaby: turn that up
every one started dancing
nera: hey i got it how bout we go to miami dont you no that 5 star hotel named bcc
gaby: hey wat do bcc stand for any way
nera: i dont know think boody cheaks
gaby and vicky: hahahahahaha
gaby: the boody cheaks hotel
vicky: discised her voice as a man hi this is the opening to the boody cheaks
nera: ya'll some clown its not even that funny wats funny is i wonder if the hotel looks like butt cheaks and when they be cooking do the smoke make it look like it got hott bunns get it
gaby: haha nooo
nera: hey you stole my smart remark... hey were here
every one gets out the car and race to the house nera came in first gaby second and vicky last. they entered the house (the house is big its all most like a monsion but its not its a tan house 16 bed room 9 bath rooms 2 ketchens 3 entertanment rooms 7 living rooms 1 big dinning room 4 play rooms a large in side pool and 4 hot tubs. that wat the house looks like. i wish my real house looked like this boo hoo back to the story)
nera: hey any body hunger
gaby: wat you is?
nera: yup im still wondering were is all the food going im skinny like hek i only way bout1 120 or 123 pounds
gaby: i no were the foods going
nera: were?
gaby and vicky: your butt hahahaha
--------------BACK WITH INUYASHA----------
inuyasha was driving home songo, kagome, and miroku was in the car with him he was going to drop off kagome and songo at songo's house.
inuyasha: hey guys were are we going for spring brake?
every one shrug there shoulders
inuyasha- oh come on no ideas
every one: nope
inuyasha: ok i'll call nera and ask for an idea
miroku: ya you do that
inuyasha takes out his phone diels a number.
ringggggggg ringgggggggg
nera on the line: hello
inuyasha: hey nera can i ask you some thing
nera: no
inuyasha: why not
nera: ok shut up go a head
inuyasha: do you have any ideas on were we should go for spring brake
nera: oh i was going to call you about that. see me and the girls are going to to miami...
inuyasha:MIAMI
nera: yes miami and i was woundering if you guys would like to come. oops
inuyasha: wat?
nera: i for got to ask the girls if it was ok
inuyasha: wat for ge... he was cout off my nera
nera: HEY GABY, VICKY IS IT OK FOR INUYASHA AND THE GANGE TO COME TO MIAMI WITH US.
vioces in the back ground YESSSSSSSSS
nera:srry inuyasha they said no
inuyasha:s ok mirokus picking you guys up tomorrow morning at 6:00 am ok bye
nera:DID YOU JUST HEAR...
inuyasha: hung up the phone
inuyasha: guys were living at 6:00am and miroku's picking every one up in a van
miroku: hey who said im doing it, you dont no if im going some were or doing something
inuyasha: 1-i did and 2- are you?
miroku: no
kagome:inuyasha you dont have to be so mean.any way im not evin warried about it beacuse...
kagome and songo:WERE GOING TO MIAMIIIIII YAYYYYYYY
inuyasha: there you go ladies
------------end os first chapter------------
hey I no the chapter was long but i hate reading short chapter's so i make mine long ok last chapter was kinda boring but now it starts to get inter reasting in later chater their will be a suprice so if you stick with the story the suprice will blow your mind (that was cornny) their will be some arrguments and some fighting plus wresling my story is bout to get crazy.