Hey, sorry about the first chapter! It was kind of messed up, because I forgot to put quotation marks…in the whole story. My bad! So here is the re-written chapter!
Now for…everything else I have to give a lot of thanks to Dracorri and khazia! I hope I spelled that right! If not tell me and I'll write it in the next chapter! The reason I'm thanking them is for telling me how to post a story! I also want to thank huffpuff for driving me to do this!
Also, to let you know this is my first story here, so it may be not the best you've read but I will improve!
Well I guess I should stop killing you with my never-ending mouth! Read on!
I Remember You!
"Sir, we need to travel to the fire nation to make arrangements with the local merchants, or the water tribe will cease to exist," said an old woman in a slightly angry tone. She was quite old, her hair in a ceremonial braid, and was wearing a blue parka. "OK", said a slightly younger man with brown hair that was really nice looking who was also wearing a parka. The ship will be here in three days. "Gotcha", said the man.
As the man walked out of the tent into the cold snow, which didn't seem to effect him much, a little girl with his hair ran up to him yelling "daddy". She looked about 6 years old; she was tan and she had her hair in a traditional water tribe braid .She also had stunning blue eyes.
"Well hello there how are you katara?" She just looked up, and smiled.
"So katara, would you like to take a trip?"
"Where to?" The curious little girl asked.
" To the fire nation."
"O.k. daddy."
"Thank you for being here, goodbye," said a cute little boy about the age of eight. He had black hair, was kinda pail his hair was back in a ponytail was dressed in all red and black and had capturing warm golden eyes. "I can see you being the fire lord more and more every day Prince Zuko," said an old kindhearted man he was sort of bald with a bun and mullet thing.
"Thank you uncle Iroh. I can feel it in my blood I'm gonna be fire lord, and I will be the best fire lord I can be!"
"That's the spirit zuko. Here Ihave something for you" as he drew his nephew closer.
"What is it?" Asked the curious prince.
" A dagger", as he pulled it out. A beautiful, very sharp dagger with a 'Z' inscribed on it engulfed in flames.
"Oh WOW! Thank you so much uncle it's great! I love it!" Zuko said excitedly. "You're welcome Zuko. Come lets go have some ginseng tea." "Uhhh… o.k." Said Zuko with distaste on his face and they both left.
"Well Katara are you ready to go?" Said Majone.
"Yes daddy, I'm ready," said katara.
Suddenly, a woman came up yelling" Katara, Katara, wait. I have to give you something."
"What is it mommy?"
"I got you a new bracelet," said the kind woman.
Gasp "It's so pretty", as she held a blue-beaded shining real diamond bracelet.
"I'm glad you like it."
"Thank you mommy!" She said with much excitement.
"Be safe on your trip wile I stay here with sokka, ok."
Then, just as she said that a little boy in a blue parka, brown hair, and those all to familiar blue eyes, came running up.
"We will mommy." To reassure her mom.
"Mommy, where are Katara and dad going?" Asked the little boy.
"They're going on a trip to the Fire nation." She replied
"Good-bye sweetie, love you," said the woman.
"Love you too mommy."
"Now say good-by to your sister Sokka." Said the woman.
"Good-by Katara." Then a little tear trickled down his cheek.
"Sokka are you crying?" Asked his mother.
"No! Some snow dust got in my eye!"
"Uh-huh sure you did" she retorted kindly.
"By Sokka, see you soon."
"Good-bye Majone, I'll miss you."
"I'll miss you too. Stay safe."
As they boarded the ship they took their last wave.
"Hey daddy, when will we get to the fire nation?"
"In a few days."
"Awww, really. It's gonna take that long!"
"Yes dear."
"Wow, what am I gonna do until then?"
"I don't know, maybe you could look at the ocean or the moon. Tonight's the full moon."
"I guess" she said boardly.
"Come on Katara lets go to the room. We have a while to wait."
"Yes father."
Then they walked away to their room for the long wait.
"Katara, come quick we're here," yelled majone.
Katara came running up. "What is it, are we there yet?"
"Yes honey, we're here. Look it's the fire nation."
Then she run up, but being too short her dad picked her up so she could see.
She looked out to see, a gigantic place filled with so many buildings, and shops with bustled streets. Right dead centered of it all there was a huge black and red palace with a flag with the fire insignia on it. The palace was a large, majestic, yet dark like evil, but at the same time it's beautiful. (No she's not evil!)
"Wow, someone great must live there!" (She doesn't know the half of it!)
Then her father sort of grimaced at the idea. "Yea, great all right" in sarcasm, but she was too little to notice.
Then a loud deep voice said, "The boat has been docked, every one off the boat".
"Come on, let's go!" Then he carried her off the ship.
Well, That was chapter one! I hope you liked it! I know it was a little ahh, but it had to in order to get the story going! next chapie up soon!