This is the first chapter and sorry about the mess up I accidentally put my unfinished story inside so sorry. : )
Chapter one
An unexpected visitor
It has been two years since Keitaro came to Hinata-sou. Mutsume, Naru and
Keitaro have become
Todai graduates. But all of the Hinata residents will be shock. One beautiful
morning, as Shinobu was setting up breakfast some body knock on the door.
Shinobu asked Motoko to answer the door for her, "Motoko can you please
answer the door for me?" The sound knocking door became louder and Motoko
became annoyed by the sound. I'm coming! I'm coming! When she opened the
she saw a guy that almost looked like Keitaro but a little taller and carrying a
kendo stick. The unknown person asked Motoko, "May I see Haruka and Keitaro
please?" Motoko was puzzled and asked the stranger," Why do you want to see
them are you the police. Didn't the manager of the dorm told you "I" was coming
to stay here. But this is a girl's dorm man are not aloud in here. That jerk really
didn't tell you? Oh I forgot to introduce myself I am Keiichi, Keitaro's younger
brother. What did you just say? I am Keitaro's younger brother. Excuse me for a
second please. Motoko rushed up the stairs and ran to Keitaro's room and open
the slide door and shouted at Keitaro," Keitaro you idiot your brother is here.
Nani? Keitaro ran down the stairs and open the front door and saw his younger
brother Keiichi standing there with his fist clenching. Before Keitaro could say a
word to his brother he got punch straight to the stairs and was screaming.
Shinobu came out of the kitchen to see a out-cold Keitaro. Everyone came out to
see Keitaro out-cold. Why didn't you tell the residents of me, Keiichi? Your
younger brother. Haruka came inside the hinata sou to see Keitaro lying down
out-cold. Keiichi what are you doing here? Obaasan! Keiichi you really have yours
brother attitude and I am not an old lady. You sure look like one Haruka-san.
What did you just say Keiichi? Haruka punched Keiichi right through the walls of
hinata-sou. Keiichi was not injured but totally out-cold. All the residents in the
same tone, "this two are truly brothers." Both of the brothers woke up from
"Sleeping place" aching. Kitsune said "Man your brother can really recover faster
than you Keitaro. Keiichi why are you here? I didn't receive a letter from you.
What! You didn't receive the letter bro! Who usually give the letters?
B.R.O.T.H.E.R? Usually is obaasan. Haruka, I know you have it hand it over. Okay!
Okay! Here Keiichi. Thank you! Bro read this letter. Keiichi will be the insistent
manager of Hinata-sou next to your side to take care of the lodge. Sincerely from
Your grandma. J Nani!
This is the end of chapter one please email me if you have any ideas. My e-mail is JutahJ2@hotmail.com. Sayonara