So this is an entry for my University's Harry Potter Society. We are having a fanfiction competition to write the worst fanfic, My Immortal style, so all typos and cringeyness is intentional . If you haven't read My Immortal then do, seriously. :) If you wanna check out any of my friends' entries then message me and I'll link you cause they've written some pretty awesome ones, in a bad way of course. ;)
Snapee entered the park. He was weraring his typical black robe that he always wore and never took off. He had two of them so that he could change, I mean he wasnt that disgusting for high wizard's sake! It was the park where Lily and him had hung out together as young people, before they went to Hogwarts when they were still friends nad when he still had a chance to be with her forever and ever. He cryied as he entered, he would never get over his love for Lily Evans. He couldnt think of her as Lily Potter, she was his. She should have been Lily Snaoe. She was his soulmate, his love for always and forever. HIS! If she had only been smart enough to choose him over the stupid idiot Potter boy. NOt that Lily was stupid. She was the britest witch of her age. The britest witch ever.
Snape walked to the roundabout where he and Lily had played as children. He began to cry as if he had never cryed before. He grabbed the bar of the roundabout and ran around. He pretended that his Lily was on the roundabout. "Your going to fast, Sev!" He heard her scream. He stopped in one second and hoped that he would see her sitting there and grinning and smiling and looking beautiful. But she waz not there. He cried again for the sixteen billionth time in the last hour.
SNape pulled a flask out of his long black cloak that he wore over the top of his long black robe, it was a cold day in December after all. He took a swig and almost threw it all back up again, It was a foule potion that tasted of puke and earwax and crap all mixed in together, not that he was an expert in how that tasted because he wasnt. Eww. It was poollyjuice potion. It contained a hair from his hairbrush. But it was not his current hairrbush becasue there would be no point in that. It was from his hairbrush from when he was twleve year old. He kept all of his old hairbrushes because his hair was important to him. It was his prized possession after his Lily. It hurt him when people said that hiis hair was gross and greasy. It wasnt. He washed it daily with anti-frizz shampoo and conditioner. It was soft and glossy and he loved to flick it over one shoulder like an angsty teenage girl who has just been insulted. So yeah, he had put a hair from when he was twelbe in the potion. He drank it and it tasted disgusting, like siriusly gross (A/N: see what I did there? ;) Hahahahaha.) but he had to drink it anyway so he did. Suddenly, his face begins to crumple and buldge in strange ways almost as if someone was trying to push their way or like a hundred balls were being thrown about inside his head. Suddenly, he was not old Severus, he was twelve years old again and just like a young boy. He new now that he had to work quickly becasue he did not have long to work before the was going to be old Severus again.
He put the timeturner in the middle of the roundabout quickly and began to run again. He twisted the timeturner around by running around the roundabout. He ran around about a hundred times counting carefully and making sure that he reached exactly one hundree. Once he reached exactly one hundred he stopped. Suddenly, he was no longer in the park where he had been before. Now he was in Hogwarts and twenty years ago. He was no longer an old man he was now just twelve years old. He smiled, the roundabout had been turned into a portkey. It was prefec.t He wasnt; sure if it would work or if he would have to have found another portkey after he had goen back in time but it had worked perfectly. Now it was time to do what he had come to do.
Sevarus Snape walked through the large corridors of Hogwarts School of Withcraft and Wizarding. It was strange to be back as a twelve year old and not an old man in his thirties. It was alos strange to be back with knowing that Lily Evans was someewhere in this castlye. It was time to do what he came for and find her and declare his undying love for her. First of, he had to find himself though. not in the metaphorical kind of way where you find out what kind of person you are and you want to b but in the literal needing to find out were the other him actually was at this moment in thyme.
He wandered towards the Slytherin common room. It was probably where he was most likely to be found if Snpae had any luck in any wayy at all. When he arrived in a hurry, he panicked.
"WHat the hell is the assword these days?" Snape demanded. He hadn;t thought of that. "Shit."
"Hey, Severus!" A voice yelled behind him. "You forgotten the apssword again?" He turneed around and there was Lucias Malfoy. The prick. He hated him back in school, he hated him in the future as a Deaath Eater, as Drzco;s father and he still hated him now as a twelve year old all over agiain. He did look remarkably liek his son though aside from the long hair that had always been his trademark thing.
"Yeah, whoops. What am i like?"
"Severus Suckium." Lucias laughed. I honestly thought that he might wet hismelf he was laughing so much. "Pure bloods." The wall opened allowing entry into the common room.
"OKAY, bye!" I said, going to find younger Severus. Except that we were the same age now.
Snape ran to the dormitories and found other him. "Sorry, I'll regret this in a few hours." He said to the sleeping him, then he smacked his other self across the head with a large copy of a potions textbook that he had obviously just fallen asleep reading. He would now be out for precisely two hours, giving Snape plenty of time.
He found Lily out by the lake. It was still sunny.
"LILY!" He jumped down beside her. She was reading a book but not a textbook, she liked to read for fun because she was a bit of a nerd like that. but it didnt matter because she was his nerd.
"Sev, what''s up?" She grinned that pretty and sexy smile that made him want her right there and then. Even if was stuck in a twelve year old's body.
"I just want to tell you that i love you." Lily opened he mouth to respond but did not have a chance. "I mean it. I dont mean just like a friend. I am so deep in love with you that i think i might actually e drowning. Like in the lake. in fact drowning in the lake would be easier. But not nerly as fun." He added as she began to freak out. "I will love you forever."
"Um, Sev, your pretty great too."
"YOu don;t love me back." Snape's eyes welled up and tears poured down his face.
"Yesh, I do. I'm teasing with you, silly billy! I love you too Severus Snape! I want to be with you." Lily pounced on him and kissed his lips with all her might. Severus began to cry but in a good way.
"Always. Always. Always." Snape whispered as Lily kissed him. He would love her forever no matter what.
After a long time of kissing and moving to skinny dipping in the lake, Severues suddenly became himself again. Lily screamed. She was now skinny dipping with an old man.
"Lily, it's still me! I still love you!" Snape called after her as she ran away out of the water. "No, don't leave me! ALWAYS!"
"Stay away from me you creppy old perverted weirdo creep!" Lily yyelled.
Snape cryed again and hit himself in the forehead with his palm. Idiot! He swam to the bottom of the lake and grabbed the old black boot that was there. It was a portkey too. It took him back to the park, back to the roundabout.
Old Severus lay on the roundabout, not moving, just collapsed. Lily still didn't love him back and she had still been killed by Voldumort. He hadn't saved her or their love. He cried again.