Author Note: This is a rewrite of Hero of Kiri. It will contain many of the same stuff that I'm reusing from the original. There will be some improvement.

Warning: I suck as a writer, so if you hate reading with a lot of mistakes, don't read. If you don't like it, don't read it. Just leave. If you do read it and hate it, I will consider it a win for making you spend your time on an amateur's story.

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Naruto

Fate/Stay Night

Five years ago, the Kyuubi escaped, but was subdued. Today is day of the Kyuubi's Festival. The day that the Fourth Hokage, Minato Namikaze, defeated and sealed him. During the night the kyuubi got free, the Hokage's twins were born. The twins of the hokage are Naruto Uzumaki Namikaze and Mito Uzumaki Namikaze. Naruto looks more like his mother with the red hair and oddly enough gray/steel eyes and Mito is born with Minato's blonde hair and eyes.

FLASHBACK

"Where is the masked man?" Kushina asked tiredly.

"Don't worry, I drove him away. We need to focus on resealing the kyuubi" Reassured Minato. "I have an idea. We have to seal them into the twins." said Minato.

"NO! They shouldn't bear the fate of being a jinchuuriki! It full of loneliness and pain. I don't want them to face that kind of pain!" Kushina screamed at Minato.

"We will be there for them. No matter what, we will protect them from all the pain and loneliness. They will grow up strong and happy so we can be proud of." replied Minato.

"I trust you." Answered back after a minute of thought.

"The only way for my plan to work, is by splitting the Kyuubi's chakra into yin and yang. With the soul remove from it. You will be receiving the yin portion so the extraction process doesn't kill you and the yang will be sealed into Mito because she most likely inherit your ability to suppress the kyuubi. And the soul would go to Naruto." said Minato.

"Why?" whispered Kushina. "Why! Why does Naruto have to be involved! He doesn't need to bear the burden! I can take the soul myself!" Screamed Kushina when she heard Naruto will become a jinchuriki as well. Believing only Mito and herself is enough. She wants to spare him the burden of being a jinchuriki of any form.

"This is the only way for all of us make it out alive. It's this or I use the Reaper Death Seal. Like I said, they won't be growing up alone. I know this is selfish on my part, but I want all of us to be together. With me alive, I can better protect you and the kids from Iwa and the likes of Danzo." replied Minato.

"Fine let's do this" Kushina reluctantly replied.

END OF FLASHBACK

Naruto just sit on top of the Hokage mountain. On top of Third Hokage's head.

"Stupid villagers" whispered Naruto. "They can't tell the difference between a bijuu and a demon." Throughout his life, Naruto was forgotten by his family. They were too busy paying attention and training Mito into controlling Kyuubi' chakra. She is the one with the burden. Many villagers noticed that Naruto wasn't given any form of love or affection from them. 'Hey, the hokage-sama would never ignore anyone right? So that must mean he really is the Kyuubi with his power gone.' A painful memory that Naruto recalled.

The villagers and several shinobis would constantly hunt Naruto down on their 'Fox Hunt' and leave him on death's door. They refused to give them the mercy of death. Many believe that torturing the boy that imprison the soul of the beast would be good punishment for the beast. Not knowing or caring that they are hurting the son of the Hokage. However, they didn't see him as the Hokage's son, but saw him as the Kyuubi himself.

Occasionally, the Sandaime (Third Hokage) would visit Naruto. He is one of the few that would give him the attention that all children need. He is the one of the few that taught Naruto how to read and write when his parents and Godparents, Tsunade and Jiraiya, would teach Mito. He would always question them that if Mito needed all those teachers. They would reply with a 'yes' and not care that Naruto is left out of a the lessons. Naruto would always call the Sandaime, jiji(Grandpa) whenever he sees the kind, old, perverted hokage.

When Naruto was 5, he would ask the Sandaime if he was a demon, as the villagers would call him as they chase him with kunai and pitchfork. The Sandaime would tell him that demons are like humans. They live like humans, but due to their power and appearance, they were viewed as evil creature. True demons are those that do great evil deeds. That apply to everyone, not a specie.

He told Naruto that the kyuubi and the other bijuus are only mass concentrated chakra that became sentient. They took on the appearances of demons because they prefer that appearance.

"Don't worry kit. I'm still with you." Kurama told Naruto.

FLASHBACK

"Kill the demon!"

"We have to make sure it doesn't poison the mind of our Hokage!"

"DIE YOU STUPID DEMON!"

Yelled out by the good people of Konoha, during one of their fox hunt. Naruto laid down in a pool of his own blood. Waiting it for it to all end. Only to look up and see he was in a sewer.

"Come here." said an eerie voice.

Naruto followed the voice into a caged room.

"So you are my jailor." said the kyuubi.

"Y-y-you are t-the k-k-kyuubi?" asked a frighten Naruto, but not being scared from the kyuubi. It is from the villagers recent attack.

"Why, yes I am human. Now release me if you want the pain to stop." ordered the kyuubi.

"Okay" Naruto replied after he calmed down from the attack.

blink blink

"You do know that this will kill you and set me free to do whatever I want." he said "That include killing your mother and sister to get my chakra back." He bluffed.

"I don't care. A family is people who love you unconditionally, blood related or not. They can die for all I care." answered back

"Why?" the kyuubi ask curiously.

"There is only pain in my life and very little love. I can't stand it anymore. I just want a family that would be there and protect me. Nothing else matter to me."

"You do know that I'm the mightiest bijuu to ever walk this earth. I'm full of anger and malice. I could very well destroy the world." continue to question his odd host.

"Why?"

"Why what kit?"

"Why are you full an anger? Anger doesn't appear from nowhere. You can't be born angry. Something had to happen to make you angry."

'This human is smarter than others already.' thought the kyuubi

"Betrayal. Did you know that betrayal is the most common way to make anyone angry. Especially humans. I was betrayed once by you filthy humans" answered kyuubi.

"You are right. Betrayal does make people be angry. But why me." he whispered the last part. " I don't feel angry." he said as he start to tear up. " I only feel pain and sadness. I know my family betrayed me, but I feel nothing for them. Not jealously. Not anger. Not pity or sadness. Only nothing. WHY. WHY. WHY. WHY." cried out Naruto weeping in front of the kyuubi.

'This kit, can he be the one that father talked about. The one to bring peace to all of us. The one to accept of no matter the difference.' thought the kyuubi. To see a child that hold no malice for the parents that betrayed him is something odd.

"Kit, I'm sorry. This is all my fault. If I never fell under controlled, then you won't be in so much pain" the kyuubi said in a way to test him.

"Under-controlled?" he asked as he pay attention to the fox.

"Some Uchiha in a mask put me under a powerful genjutsu after extracting me from your mother. Nothing was of my doing. There was a brief moment that I was trying to get away from the village to protect my freedom, but your, father stopped me and sealed me up." The Kyuubi answered.

"It's not your fault then. It's the Uchiha fault and Minato's fault." Naruto said as he refuses don't care. They want to hurt me no matter what." answered back.

'He really is the one that father spoke about. The one to understand another.' thought the kyuubi.

"Wipe your nose kit. Don't shed a tear for anyone part of this village. They aren't worry of you. To tell you what, I'll be your friend." said kyuubi with a genuine smile.

"Really. You want to be my friend" said Naruto while wiping his tears away.

"My friends call me Kurama. If you ever need help or need someone to talk to you, I'll be there." replied Kurama.

FLASHBACK END

From that day they became friends. Of course, Naruto would only trust his new friend's identity to the Sandaime, Itachi, Mikoto and the Ichiraku family. Of course, they freaked out when Naruto told them, but Naruto brought them into his mindscape to talk to Kurama. After a few chitchat, they accepted Kurama's existence and friendship with Naruto. Itachi and the Sandaime became worry of the masked Uchiha because Minato reported that the fox escaped. He nevered mention a masked Uchiha in his report.

"Thanks Kurama, but I only want the pain to be gone." Said Naruto

"I blame the toads. They are the one blabbing about the prophecy that the old man mentioned. You humans don't realize that if you intentionally interfere, you'll only make it worse." Said Kurama believing the fault lies with the toad that caused so much pain for his friend.

"They thought they were helping. But still, they do hold some responsibility." said Naruto.

"Besides Minato and Kushina are at fault too. With my so called godparents." said Naruto with a little bit of venom. Believing them not to be family anymore, due the neglect. His sister decided not to acknowledge his existence, so he doesn't view her as a sister. Though, she only does that to make sure Naruto is safe. Believing that close interaction with Kurama would make her lose control of his chakra. She really cares for her onii-chan. Cough cough, brother complex cough cough. However, nobody knows that Kurama already have chakra. Naruto's chakra to be exact.

One day, a mysterious person saved Naruto from one of his beatings and offer him a choice. To give him another power source. After an experiment, Naruto is became capable of wielding prana, or more commonly known as magic. Prana is a rare power source that was forgotten by most of the world. He would use both prana and chakra, but Naruto could only use chakra when Kurama allows it to him because it is being used to refill Kurama's chakra. Other than that, he uses mainly magic now.

Then came the problem. Naruto doesn't know any abilities or training method with prana. The mysterious person offered to teach him two magic technique. One technique of Naruto's choosing and another of that he inherited from the experiment. Naruto learn to harness the power he inherited and chosen to learn Unlimited Blade Work. The mysterios person pointed out his similar redhair and steel eyes to a certain hero. The story of Emiya Shirou. Hearing his story, he fell in love with the hero and his ability. Naruto always love swords and wanted to learn kenjutsu, but sadly, Kushina refuse to teach him. She wanted to teach Mito the art of the sword. Naruto kept his new secret ability from his friend, knowing the danger of any leak could become a problem. Cough cough Danzo. Kurama was also impressed how well Naruto learn magic. He was a natural mage.

"There's the demon" yelled the group of civilians and shinobi on their usual fox hunt.

'Run' thought Naruto. Still not wanting to hurt anyone unless he had to.

Many miles outside of Konoha

Naruto ran as fast as he could, to escaped the proud hunters of the fox hunt. He manage to lose the civilians once he got out of the village, but the shinobis were still determine to get rid of this so called demon.

"Get back here you demon"

"Take your death like a man"

The chunin of konoha yelled at him.

"Why is he so fast!? I don't see him using chakra at all!"

Yelled a confused Hyuuga. It was true. Ever since our mysterious person decided to take pity on our redheaded hero. He wasn't using the now Kurama's chakra because he wanted Kurama to regain his power to feel complete. Naruto would only use chakra in desperate time. He still had prana, but he still believe that he shouldn't kill the shinobis. Well not yet.

The Jonin leading the hunt got tired of the chase and decided to end it. He realize that they were getting close to the border and they can't let news of a fox hunt escape Konoha. Unfortunately or fortunately for Naruto, several traveling merchants saw these fox hunts and took pity on Naruto. They didn't know about him having Kurama's soul in him, but in their eyes, Konoha has fallen from grace. Throughout the Elemental Nation, people began to whisper about Konoha being child beaters. They already lost many escort mission and reputation, but not enough high paying jobs to make them really be concerned with. Some people only care if Konoha have the skills to complete the mission. Back to the chase, the jonin threw a fireball jutsu at Naruto. Getting tired of being drop off at the shinigami's door step, Naruto decided it was time to fight back.

"I am the bone of my sword..." whispered Naruto as he face the fire ball.

"Rho Aias!" Yelled Naruto when the seven flower petal shield appeared and block fire ball.

"What the hell is that!?" Yelled an angry jonin. Not wanting to believe that the demon can do something great. However, Naruto was grazed by a kunai that was thrown by the Hyuuga at his side. It only hit his head and knock him out. Rho Aias disappeared as soon as Naruto fell to the ground. Even with all the training he had, it didn't matter to experience on the battlefield.

"Well, well, well. What do we have here? Konoha shinobi close to my border and trying to kill a child." A voice came out of the forest.

Flashback

Yagura, the current Mizukage, along with his bodyguard, Ao, were passing by after a meeting with a minor village for an alliance. Sadly, said alliance failed.

"Mizukage-sama, there are Konoha shinobi close by." said Ao, when he use his byakugan to check ahead.

"What is shinobis from the Konoha doing close to the border of Mizu no Kuni (Land of Water)?" question Yagura. Believing it to be a scouting party that the Hokage plan to act against Kirigakure. The Mizukage was cautious enough to not cause trouble for others, but this situation is something else.

"They are... trying to kill ... a boy... a redheaded boy... with whiskers?" said a very surprise Ao. Not believing that Konoha would do something like this. They were said to be the kindest village out of all, but here they are hunting him down like a dog.

"The boy seems like he is in trouble. I have never seen any Konoha shinobi do this before." continued Ao.

"Are you sure this is Konoha and not some other village pretending to be konoha?" ask a equally confuse Yagura.

"Positive. There is a Hyuuga with them, but seem to focus on the boy to notice us."

"Well let's get a closer look. Shall we." said Yagura.

As both men, well man and midget, come closer to see what was happening.

"Rho Aias!" Naruto shouted.

"What was that?" whispered Ao while staring at Rho Aias with aww.

"I don't know, but what konoha is doing is cruel. I won't allow this to go on anymore." he said.'Also I want to know about the seven petal flower he summoned. Looks powerful.' Yagura thought. Yagura may be a kage and paranoid, but he isn't a cruel man. He still values the life of another.

"The boy is special. I sense that he is capable of using prana, something far other and better than chakra. Also I sense something else within the boy." said the Sanbi, or more commonly known to Yagura, Isobu. Getting Yagura's attention and interest in the boy.

Flashback End

"Well, I'm waiting" said the now identified voice, Yagura.

"Who the hell are you brat?" questioned a chunin.

"This is shinobi affair. Go back home and get yourself a glass of milk and plate of cookies" said the Jounin with a smug

An angry tick mark appeared on Yagura's forehead.

"Back in my days, shinobi would respected their Kage. Even if it isn't their own." said a sighing Ao.

This would be the perfect time to have Danzo's root come out, but ... I have Danzo believing that Naruto is worthless and shouldn't be bothered with.

"What! He is the Mizukage!" shouted the Jonin when he recognize Ao's headband.

"Well, I'm waiting." growled Yagura, still angry about the previous comment.

After a pause to get over their surprising with the Mizukage being so short.

"We are here killing a demon. Mizukage-sama. You don't have to worry. We are saving our village and the world from his kind." said the Jounin, proudly.

"That means you are here to kill me too then." said Yagura, when he heard that demon comment. Now realizing Naruto to be a jinchuuriki. Or so he thought. "Coral Palm!" yelled out Yagura with the intention to kill the konoha shinobis. Still angry at the insult of his height and to people like himself. The group of konoha shinobis were encase with coral and killing them with it.

"How is the boy?" question Yagura.

"Fine sir. Seems to be chakra exhaustion and a slight hit to the head" said Ao, believing it to be chakra exhaustion, unaware that is it really prana exhaustion. Naruto used a lot of prana to get away and his body is too young to handle a lot with pacing himself.

"Good destroy the shinobis' body and grab the Hyuuga and the boy. We can always use another byakugan." ordered Yagura.

Ao went over to check on the Hyuuga.

"We can't sir. It's a branch family member." said Ao.

"Too bad. It won't really make a difference at the end. The boy seems to be special and worth more. Destroy the bodies, so it can't be lead to us." said Yagura. While Ao started putting paper bomb on the bodies.

"Katsu" Ao said in order to detonate the paper bomb. Leaving no evidence that Naruto or the Mizukage been in the area.

Time skip 3 days in Kirigakure Kiri's Hospital

"Where am I?" groggily stated by a now awake Naruto.

"Don't worry kit. We are safe. My younger sibling Isobu jinchuriki took us in. I already spoken to them about our situation." said Kurama.

FlashBack

In the Bijuus mindscape

"So brother, how has it been." Kurama ask awkwardly. Not wanting to admit to his younger sibling that he found a host worthy of him. The proud kitsune would become the laughing stock of the family. The one that says humans are weak and worthless all the time, now accepted a young boy.

"Cut to the chase Kurama. Why do you have so little chakra and what is up with your host." replied Isobu.

One long explanation later

"So the gaki(brat) had it rough, huh." Isobu asked.

"Yup, the kit even amazed me to last that long before I introduce myself." Kurama replied.

"I will allow the boy to become part of Kiri." Yagura said gladly. Listening to Kurama's story, he felt the need to help his kin, even if he isn't a full bijuu. No children should go through that.

"Thanks brat"

"HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO SAY IT! I'M AN ADULT" Yagura yelled at Kurama. While Isobu sweat drop. He really doesn't like it when people talk about his height.

"Hehehe. You are a brat compared to me" Kurama answered back calmly. While Yagura reluctantly accepted. Very reluctantly.

Flashback End

"So that what happen." said Naruto

"Ya, he wa-" Kurama said while interrupted.

Yagura walked in.

"How are you doing Naruto" said Yagura

"I'm fine. Thank you for taking me Mizukage-sama. Kurama already told me." replied Naruto.

"It's no problem. Seeing as you have this 'prana', it could become very powerful. I know I'm doing this for Kiri, but this can also benefit you. There is another Uzumaki living in Kiri that agreed to adopt you. You can have a family that loves you here, blood and not blood related." Yagura stated.

"I will take the offer to stay. Mizukage-sama" replied, after a minute to think about it.

"Yagura. People like us should stick together." Yagura responded.

"Okay. Yagura" Naruto with a big grin that many haven't seen.

knock knock

"Come in" Yagura said.

A beautiful lady with auburn hair, green eyes and an amazing figure came in. The doctors outside couldn't stop staring at her. Only to be disappointed when she closed the door.

"Who are you lady?" ask Naruto innocently with a fox grin.

She dove right for him and started hug him in between her large breast.

"AWWWWWW! You are so adorable! I'll take him!" shouted like a fangirl.

"Ahem. This Naruto, is your new mother, Terumi Mei."

"R-really. Are you going to be m-my k-kaachan." said a frighten Naruto. Not wanting this to be a cruel prank.

"AWWWWW! Of course! No mother would never hate a boy like you!" screamed out Mei, with glee.

"Now Naruto, Mei will be taking care of you, but you will see me as well as other member of kiri." Yagura said happily when witnessing a moment akin to a mother finding her lost son.

"THANK YOU! Thank you!" cried Naruto. While embracing Mei. "I promise to make both of you proud. Watch out world, Terumi Naruto is going to take the world be storm dattebayo." Naruto screamed out into the room. Not realizing he said his verbal tic that he work so hard to keep under control. Mei only hugging him harder till he pass out due to lack of oxygen. While Yagura watch a new family born.

'Indeed, watch out world. Naruto is going to change things here. Especially you, konoha, Naruto may hold no real grudge base on what Kurama told me, but I will make sure you don't hurt him again.' Yagura thought still laughing at Naruto's situation, while some doctors look through the door's window with a jealous glare at Naruto.

Till Next Time

AN: Hope it an improvement. I will review the other chapter that I saved and edit and improve if I can. Expect another soon because most are already written.