Hello! This is my first english fic! So, I want reviews about my poor english ok? Be honest! haha
This fic it was first made in Portuguese, my language, but I translated it into English! I hope you like!
Disclaymer: I don't own One Piece One Piece, it belonged to me it not be that success! Oda is the better =]
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Separation
Was dusk, the day already in the sad orange and the sun rested on the two graves on the hill. It's been one month since her death. Thirty days at least in my life. Thirty days that will not be replaced, thirty days near the small pain I feel and I'll feel forever. I never will forget the scene, she in my arms, motionless, her lifeless body all smeared with blood, her own blood. My body and my mind began to lose the world, I heard the screams of my teammates but not heard at the same time. How could she die like that? How could leave me when we finally become lovers? We are on her island, the same island that I saw her cry for the first time. On that time I start to love her, her tears and fury for Arlong caught my attention, your request for help stifled captured me. At that time, I just happy to be your teammate, but now I was happy to be your lover, your confidant. I can't longer stay, but would like. I would stay forever, but just my presence alone attracts danger to your island. Sorry to falling protect you. I heard footsteps approaching sad.
-Luffy, we can't longer stay... – Say Ussop.
-Yes, I'm going.
I heard again the sad steps of Ussop disappear by the way. And finally my tears falling down, those who were tears in my throat since her death.
-Goodbye Nami. – Where the last words I could say. I get away of the two graves, her and her mother, and left for what was left of my life.
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So is it! It's a little sad but i hope you enjoyed it! Reviews pls!