My first own story
please review what I have so far.
First I'll have characters then plot then chapter 1
Kat- She is a young 22 year old woman who has been trained to guard a secret lab under New York City.
Kevin- He is an agent that plays Kat's husband as a cover. He helps guard the lab's secrets.
Ryan- The leader of the group that goes into the lab to find out what happened to the lab.
Storm- Weapons specialist. She is the co leader of the group.
Carlos- Computer specialist. He helps break into the lab.
Lily- She is a back up combat expert.
David- Lily's brother.
Summery: For years a secret corporation called Biohazard has been experimenting on the common cold. Now they have created the a virus that now will be a great and deadly weapon. Now a team must figure out what happened to everyone that worked in that lab and what happened to the virus.
This begining of this chapter is actually a memory from a sequel to this story if enough people like it. Infected 5: Underworld.
Chapter 1
The Memory Within
"I remember the day were all I could here was screaming. The sounds of my friends." I felt scared remembering the horror I had faced those many years ago.
5 years ago
I was taking a nice shower and then all of a sudden I felt a heavy sleep come over me. I faught against it. I turned to my right and saw Kevin fall to the floor. I was going to run towards him but instead I stumbled and fell to the shower floor. Then the darkness took over.
Hours later
I woke up naked on the floor. Water was hitting my feet. Where was I? Who am I? I couldn't remember who I was. I don't even remember how I ended up on the floor. I grabbed a towel that was near me. I went over to the mirror and stared at the beautiful girl infront of me. She had long black hair, blue eyes, and pale, but not the unhealthy pale. It was me but that didn't help much. I still couldn't remember who I was.
I leftt the bathroom and went into the bedroom. I found some cloths on the bed and changed into them. I was wearing a tight black tank top with very small booty shorts, with combat boots. I looked around and found nothing but an empty room. I opened one of drawers and found a glass case that contained multiple guns. I gasped at the sight of so many weapons. I quickly closed it. I ran out of the room into a big space that had no furniture. I looked around the dark empty room. It felt so disturbing.
Out of nowhere there was loud sound of glass breaking. I turned to the windows. People were flying inside the house by crashing into the house. I screamed as the five masked people started coming towards me. Oh fuck.